https://soundcloud.com/dewey-longuski/a-womans-lips

Original song. All BIAB real tracks

_HIGHWAY.STY. Highway Driving Country Rock
All RealTracks. Quartet. Tempo=110 (90-150)
Instruments: El.Bass, Ac.Piano, El.Guitar, Drums
RD: NashvilleEven8^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride :Brian Fullen
RT1417: Bass, Electric, RootsRock Ev 100 , Craig Young
RT2763: Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryBluesRockMike Ev 110 , Mike Rojas
RT2635: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBluesRockHigh Ev 110 , Brent Mason

ADDED: 406: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 136 (Jason Roller)

DAW REAPER

Hi Dewey and welcome.
Great first post .Methinks you are no stranger to the recording procedure.

Great vibe; interesting lyric; excellent mix and vocals. Also liked your other tracks ('Show Me The Way' and 'Empty Bottle').

Excellent song and singing!! Welcome to the forum.

Thank you for listening and your kind words! Show Me the Way was my first attempt at Bluegrass with BIAB and Empty Bottle was actually recorded in Nashville with vocals by the talented Nicole Lewis. Again, thanks for listening!

Thanks TuneMonger! I appreciate you listening and the encouragement. Na zdrowie!

Welcome to the forum, Dewey. A Woman's Lips is a brilliant addition. Lyrics are perfect, and I'm glad you posted them on SoundCloud. "When they pout no doubt..."

Well done!
Good lyrics, nicely performed.
Clear vocals.

Nice job.

Dewey,

A nice song. Good use of BIAB. Good vocals. Nice mix.

Sounds good. Welcome to the Showcase.

fj

Hi Fewey,

welcome to the forum. A fantastic entry, man. Toe-tapping great tune, excellent vocal, marvellous sound. A VERY enjoyable listen.

Really glad you joinerd us!

Take care,

I like this one a lot. Good jobs on the vocals. A good write and an excellent choice of real tracks to bring it to life. Tom

Welcome aboard. Check around...lot's of good stuff here and a fine community.

This a fine entry to the forum...but assuredly not entry level

Well performed, arranged, written and mixed.

And a fine example of an all BiaB band.

Enjoyed it!

J&B

Welcome to the forum!! What an intro track.......really well written, sung, and produced!!! It sounds like you've been at this game a while! Looking forward to more!! Take care. Greg

Yep.... That was fun....and truthfully told.

Goodjob

I couldn't listen to the track... did you remove it?

I have the same problem as Will. The song is missing, it said.

Hans

Sorry Will,

I removed the SoundCloud link because this was recently submitted as a single. Here's the link if you'd like to hear it on Spotify but it is also available on most streaming services. https://open.spotify.com/album/4og54uL4BBMDYlYIZRbFKC?si=_rU9o9BrSZiGvSfo75H_DQ

Thanks for listening!

Dewey

I removed the SoundCloud link because this was recently submitted as a single. Here's the link if you'd like to hear it on Spotify but it is also available on most streaming services. https://open.spotify.com/album/4og54uL4BBMDYlYIZRbFKC?si=_rU9o9BrSZiGvSfo75H_DQ

Thanks for listening!

Dewey

Sorry folks, I think I made a BIAB User Forum faux pas by deleting my Sound Cloud link to my song, "A Woman's Lips". In the future, I will only include links to the User Forum that I do not plan to keep up on a temporary basis. Please accept my apology! If you are interested in hearing the same exact version then you can find it on any DSP such as Spotify, iTunes, YouTube, etc. Here's the link for any Spotify listeners out there. https://open.spotify.com/album/4og54uL4BBMDYlYIZRbFKC?si=_rU9o9BrSZiGvSfo75H_DQ

Well, that was a pointless exercise.
Links to pay sites aren't cool at all.

The idea about submitting "A Woman's Lips" to Spotify was to help me understand the process for the new MLC that will begin in the US in January 2021. I do NOT aspire to be an artist so I will probably not do many more pay-for-plays to a DSP; however, I am the coordinator of the Mid-Michigan Chapter of NSAI so having the knowledge to be able to guide other newbies is my ultimate goal. Do I think I'll make back my money? No way, but again, that's not important for this go round. Having said all that, I do hope you take the time to listen to it and give me your feedback. I am ALWAYS willing to hear constructive criticism on my songs. Na zdrowie! Dewey