Took advice from the forum...re-recorded the vocal, brought the band up. Thanks again for the helpful commentary!
"Butterfly" (Revised)
Hi Tano ...
Yes! This sounds really nice ... The vocal is much clearer and the backing tracks, particularly the electric piano, fill out the horizontal soundstage very nicely. I like this revision a lot! Siper job!!!
Best to you Take care & be safe ...
Alan
We didn't hear the original but we love this...all aspects of it.
We much enjoy the butterflies during our spring, summer and fall wildflower seasons.
Years ago some friends of our travelled to Mexico just to see the arrival of the migrating
Monarchs.
Very nice.
J&B
Excellent jazz number. The chord work and structure are really high-level. Your voice carried this sweet lyric admirably. I really enjoyed listening to this.
Cute little song. Nice job. The band soars too.
Thanks all...J&B, Tangmo, and jptjptjpt. I appreciate all of your comments and your feedback!
This sounds great loved the tune. Excellent vocal..
The mix sounds good, and the backing is nice and evocative.
Nicely done.
Peter
Lots and lots to like about this, the music, the style, the delivery.
Great from many angles.
Scott/Peter/videoTrack....thanks for checking it out and letting me know what you think...glad you liked it!
I love the cool stereo vibe to it, the Rhodes just sets it right, and then that sax, Wow!!
Good job, you improved your song a lot !
Not sure I heard the original, but this is SWEEET!! Reminds me of Michael Franks, one of my faves! Both the music and lyrical content are Franksish! Very nicely done! Merry Xmas!! Take care. Greg
Ronnie, Angelo, Greg..thanks for listening! I got exactly the guidance and help from the forum that I needed to improve my track. Great community!