This song is certainly not short on atmosphere, Jona. The backing track and melody are quite haunting and the lyrics fit the mood very well.
I would be interested to know which BIAB style/tracks you used in the production.
Very pretty song. Well done.. Lovely vocal
Thank you..
Next time i'll mark the style and tracks
Thank you..
Try to learn BIAB ...
Jona
Thank you..
Try to learn BIAB ...
Jona
There is no easy way to learn all of the amazing stuff in BiaB, but it sure is fun. This is a good song, Jona. A pleasant feel and well sung. The thunder kind of took over my ears. I thought is was some kind of tape rumble or something until I heard the rain. This forum will definitely help with the learning curve.
Jona,
Very good tune. Vocals and composition A+. If this is your starting out with BIAB, I am sure you will make some great tracks down the road and share with us. Overall mix has excellent balance, but if you care for side opinion of non-professional, I think that nature FX from 1:50-~2:30 a bit loud. Thank you for sharing!
Misha.
Hi Misha
Thank you of your comments.
Yes, i'm trying to develop my mixing..
Jona
Thank you for the comments!
Jona
Hi Jona ...
That's a very nice song! Your vocal is excellent - you have a very pleasant voice. And yes, BIAB is a wonderful program for mysicians. Learning to use its capabilities is axquired with experience and experimenting. You are doing a really nice job with it. Happy New Year.
Alan
Thank you for your comments!
Jona
Missed this the first go round......glad I caught it this time!! Very nicely done!! Great emotion, and the production/mix are excellent!! Take care. Greg
I missed this the first time also but I'm very glad that I caught it now. This is an excellent song. You have a very good voice. Your harmonies were spot on. I really liked your instrumentation and sound effects.
Very well done.
I wouldn't say the FX were too loud but more too indistinct... it's wasn't clear to me, in the intro, whether you'd recorded with a lot of noise and when inserted mid song only the thunder made it clear what I was listening to.
mind you I have some hearing problems.
Nice song, lovely tone to your voice when you are in "the zone".
Thanks Mario! Glad to hear your opinion
Thanks Rayc..
Yes , someone else has noticed also hearing problem.
Jona
nice arrangement and song .
best
om