Your Memory Rushes In

_CTPNGC.STY. Cello & Piano Ballad
All RealTracks. Quintet. Tempo=85 (75-105)
Instruments: El.Bass, Ac.Piano, 12Str.Guit, Cello, Drums
RD: NashvilleEven8^1-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride :Brian Fullen
RT518: Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 085 , Dow Tomlin
RT2024: Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryJohn Ev 085 , John Jarvis
RT1118: Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085 , Pat McGrath
RT1856: Cello, Background PopCountry Ev 085 , Matt Nelson

you've got some relatable lyrics in this song.

nice job

-rob

I think the cello and piano chugging away from the beginning is a distraction and misses a good opportunity to add dynamics to the arrangement by the occasional use of them.
Nice narrative and a solid melody.
I've not read your comments on other folk's posts - it'd be good to have you participate.

Good chorus, like your voice, great job!

Welcome to the forum. Super vocal and lyric. Excellent choice of backtrack. Well done

An enjoyably plaintive love song. Nice melody and well sung. Adding some harmonies to the vocal would've kicked it up another notch for me.
Regards,
Leon