https://soundcloud.com/japokeapeg/i-really-fancy-the-girl-on-the-deli-counter-in-waitrose

RealTracks in style: 2589:Bass, Electric, PunkFuzzPickedA-B Ev 165
RealTracks in style: 2583:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Punk Ev 165
RealTracks in style: 2584:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PunkMuted Ev 165
RealDrums [in style:PunkRock^01-a:Closed Hat, b:Open Hat

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Other than that I'm playing the slide guitar, a bit of rhythm guitar and bass

Hi,

What a great song - full of humour and what a superb name for a song.

I can hear shades of The Kinks here - and that is a huge compliment.

This is not really my Genre but here goes:

Vocals - spot on.

Instruments - perfectly suited to the song and style.

Mix - excellent - I particularly liked the bit towards the end where the instruments dropped out.

Lead Break - very tasty slide.

Lets hear plenty more.

Best Regards
Nigel

Fancy! A cool song about a special sweet tooth. Man, this song could fit with very little change in lyrics to so many situations in my life. A fun listen.

That was great, pro sounding rock, loved the slide. The main line is a jewel but a little more variety in the lyric would've helped out a bit IMHO. Great work!

Hi japokeapeg,

I'm absolutely of the same opinion as Nigel: Memories of the early Kinks coming up.
That's a genre we don't hear here very often - good job, enjoyed the listen.

Cheers,

Stefan

Can't go wrong with lot's of good food and a pretty girl!

Slide!!!!!! Nice!


Well done.

moto

A title straight from Kirsty McColl and Billy Bragg land in the mid 80s.
It's a decent mix and your playing is good.
The heavily effected vocals don't work within the mix as it's already mid thick with the chugs.
The vocal needs to be boosted in the higher, though weaker, range with some EQ.
Some mid mud could be removed and a high pass filter at around 175 for the guitars too but that's just my ears.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QccPUSTMriM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pivL4QdtiuM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4v8VJ0LRgA
Fun song.