...pretty self explanatory....


BIG DREAMS

do you remember all those big dreams
i talked of all the time
almost every day a new scheme
i know i drove you clean out of your mind
i was gonna be such a big deal
i was gonna conquer the world
wishin' on a star i'd make it real
and give it all to you girl

   promises i'd whisper
   tender soft and low
   but in the end it was just you and me girl
   where'd those big dreams go

tried to make it work in hollywood
nashville and new york, too
making ends meet the best we could
trying to see those big dreams through
but nothing ever seemed to catch hold
nothing really went my way
up against a wall weary and cold
til i finally had to call it a day

   promises i'd whisper
   tender soft and low
   but in the end it was just you and me girl
   where'd those big dreams go

now look at us after all these years
all the hard times, heartaches and tears
we beat the odds we made it through
me and you

   promises we whisper
   you to me, me to you
   in the end it's all we need, girl
   big dreams can come true...


The BAND:
RealTracks in song: 1416:Bass, Electric, PopSw16Sync Sw16 075
RealTracks in style: 2441:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking HipFolk Sw16 85
RealTracks in song: 2543:Pedal Steel, Background ModernCrossover Sw16 090
MIDI SuperTracks in song: 1805:Synth Pad, PopBelieve Ev16 065
RealTracks in song: 1579:Banjo, Rhythm Folkie16ths Sw16 085
RealDrums [in style:NashvilleSwing16^5-a:Sidestick, Hihat , b:Snare, Hihat


Have at it.

fj

Pristine mix... The Vocal sound is outstanding, love the subtle processing.

What a great song too... Top shelf production.

Hi Floyd most excellent everything is so well done the lyrics got my heart another great contribution well done sir Eric

Nice one.

That's a common story that resonates well with the vast majority of folks.... which in the case of a song.... works well.

Loved how the bridge turned it around and refocused on the couple...and that what really matters is the important things....and that's the big dream in the end.

Hi Floyd,

This is another wonderful song from you. Lovely vocals and harmonies plus spot on mix.

I enjoyed the song from the beginning to the end.

Thanks

Best Regards
Nigel

I love the vocals the harmony and the sweetness of the whome tune!
Beautiful lyrics as well.

Hi, Floyd !

You are just amazing !:)

This tune is IMO one of your
absolute best maybe even
the best ! You really did
try your wings in Hollywood
and Nashville ? The competition
must be awesome out there ?
I like everything you do musically !


Thank you for yet another masterpiece !

Cheers
Dani

The changes for the chorus are classic, and very effective,in lifting the song and expectations.
I had this cranked as the intro was so gentle and the vocals came in as quite a shock...I then turned things down and started again...works perfectly at "reasonable" volume/levels.
The string squeak at 3.09 either adds authenticity or is annoying - depending on the listener.
It bothered me - but only for a moment.

Yet another sincere, relatable narrative - you do them really well and there's no sign of staleness or overwrought compensating - set to a succinct backing and communicated with THAT voice.

REALLY, really cool.

Easy listening - relaxed beat, mellow singing, laid back arrangement. Subtle harmonies. Good mix. The banjo was a nice addition.

And of course, well sung.

One of those writes that signals the "twist" far in advance, but it's still so sweet when it finally lands.

Really great song done with your signature style man.

I enjoyed it a lot. A great message for all of us for sure.

Floyd,

You're still at the head of the class teaching the rest of us how it's done!

Love that finger picked guitar in this, it really has a warm sound that is the backbone of the track! Vocals are setting so sweetly in the mix (bg vox also)!

It's another exceptionally good song that should have mass appeal!

You always impress me every time I listen! Thanks, Torrey

Good song. The happy ending was nice. Good story the lyrics tell - that's hard to do. The band was spot on. Good work.

It's always a high point in my day when I click on the forum and you've posted a new tune. I think most people can relate to this song. Most people don't see their dreams realized. To that extent, I thought perhaps your 'happy ending' was unrealistic. But people want a happy ending - no, they need that happy ending. So you made the right call.

Beautiful production that invites multiple listens, as usual.

Another beautiful song Floyd. So much expression in your vocal. Just love the way you produce your songs. So clear and well balanced. Perfection

floyd

A classic floyd Jane song form start to finish.

Lovely lyric, excellent vocal and a crisp engaging production.

Nice work all round.

Peter

Hi floyd

Listened yesterday but didn't have time to comment. So, I get to listen to it again today

Enjoyed the story, and loved the vocal! And always enjoy listening to your mixes with the 'phones, just top notch.

You are getting off to a good start for 2022 I think!

Very Pretty FJ, I like it alot. It's so conversational, love the emotional truth and the vocal and arrangement captures the emotion beautifully.

Josie

Listened to it once, listing again. You are top notch Floyd. Love it and thanks for sharing your talent.

Another professional FJ masterpiece.

Outstanding as usual.

A song about big dreams, something all of us had in our youth.

Loved it.

Very nice mellow, country sound. Great harmony and really country-sounding lead vocal. Nice job.

Man, where have I been lately? Four days have passed since you posted this, and one of the reasons I come here is to check out a new Floyd Jane song. (You know I love all the old ones too --my travelling companions.) Yes, I remember those big dreams, and you singing about them makes them more real. "In the end it was just you and me, girl." Looking back, that (for me) was the biggest dream come true. Keep living the dream, Floyd!!

Thanks, bloc-head!!!




Thanks, Eric...




Thanks, Herb...

Thanks, Nigel...




Thanks, Angelo...

i really like the lyrics and music and especially the melody in the chorus. Nice job as always

Dani - you are far too kind. Thanks for the great comments!!
(Hollywood is a fabrication. But Nashville and New York are for real. Philadelphia was part of the journey as well...)

“promises we whisper
   you to me, me to you
   in the end it's all we need, girl
   big dreams can come true…”

J&B:
Yes they can!

Janice:
When Bud first saw this post a few days ago he came to me in the dining room and said, “You’re going to love floyd’s new song.” So, I stopped what I was doing and read the lyric and got all teary eyed. Then I listened three times in a row and was happily singing along with my favorite lead singer.
This is a beautiful lyric and melody and your phrasing is just amazing. Soul to the max.

Bud:
While we are speaking of max I’ll throw in the fine band and mix. And steels and banjos with a synth pad … who would’ve thunk?

J&B:
Another very, very hi bar production mr jane!

Us

FJ,
Another well produced tune. You are so good with your structure! Nothing crazy, but everything is very well thought out. Nice romantic lyrics. Phrasing was mentioned, and I will echo these positive remarks. Excellent vocals! Banjo was a good fit. Mix is clear. Easy listen. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.

ray - thanks for the fine review! Much appreciated, of course. Sorry about the initial loud vocals For me, there is an appropriate level for an acoustic guitar. That generally is a lower volume than many folk mix to. That can cause that initial vocal burst. I hadn't noticed the squeak. It IS definitely noticeable (once pointed out).




David - thanks! Indeed, one of those I-saw-that-coming-from-a-mile-away lyrics. Spend any time writing in Nashville and you get that gotta-have-a-happy-ending ingrained in ya in a hurry (and after a while you might get a bit lazy about it). Waddya gonna do?





Thanks, David!

Hi Floyd,

A constant flow of very strong songs from your hand. And in a way classic, because all are so recognizable yours.
Therefore lovely songs!
This one is no exception and especially wonderful in the chorusses / harmonies!
And I haven't mentioned the strong lyrics yet.

On the other hand, after I wrote this to you I had that strange feeling I have written it before...

Have a nice day, Floyd!
Hans

another well-crafted and recorded song!

i love the chorus

the bridge is beautiful

great job!

-rob

Hi Floyd,

Another ripper! Up to your high standard from beginning to end.

I thoroughly enjoyed the whole song - terrific vocals and top production.

Best Regards
Nigel

I truly appreciate that, Torrey (especially coming from you...)




jpt3 - Thanks! as always...

Nice. Very nice.
Such a natural vocal.

Vic

Way to go, Floyd! Outstanding theme.

Thanks, TM. It was not intended to convey a "happy ending" as much as a realization that they (the couple in the song) had always had "that dream come true" in their lasting relationship/love...




Thanks, Scott!!





Thanks, Peter...

Hello Floyd
once again an exceptionally good song
I especially like the great sound, where even
the smallest details become audible
Your vocals implement this perfectly
Really very well done Floyd
Thanks for sharing
Many greetings
Andi ;-)

Beautiful reflective write!!!! Lyrics really hit home!! Love the way you changed the music between verse and chorus, and the pedal steel drifting off makes such a nice contrast with the syncopated rhythm of the guitar/drums!! Love the banjo!! You are a master, my friend!!!! Take care. Greg

once again floyd...SUPERB song and SUPERB display of talent. inventive lyrics.
best
om

Thanks, Dave...




Thanks for stopping by, Josie...




Thanks, trapper...

Nice of you to say, Mario. Thanks!




Thanks for having a listen, Allan...




Marty - thanks for the nice comments....

Man, what a great song. Kinda tells my story, I've always had that dreams of making it, but now at almost 70, I need to face reality. But enough about me, I love this song!!

Thanks, Bob. I appreciate you stopping in for a listen...




Thanks for the great comments!!




I appreciate all of that, Misha!! Thanks...

Hi floyd,

This is a magnificent write, performance and presentation. It's one of your best.

I love the premise that big dreams are dependent on how you define them. You've used this idea to create a very powerful lyric.

As I listened, hints of Bobby Goldboro kept drifting in and out of my mind. I'm not quite sure why. I'm going to have to go back and re-listen a few times to try and work it out.

This is truly top-shelf listening.

All the best,
Noel

Hi Floyd,

A lovely, sweet song.
And as for the lyrics, we think everybody recognises what they tell (if old enough )

Rob and Anne-Marie

Good lyrics. You know how to say what needs to be said without excessive verbage--the way it should be.

I like that hip folk guitar. Nice feel.

Thanks, Hans....




Thanks, rob....





Thanks, Nigel...




Thanks, Vic...

Floyd,

Another terrific write . . . with you usual stellar production touches—nice hook as well. Love the lyrical turn in the last chorus—well constructed and delivered idea. Good stuff!

All my best to you,

Deej

So well put together!
As always, vocals shine and the band is as tight as it gets.

Nice one!

moto

Thanks, ed...





Appreciate that, Andi...





Always enjoy reading your comments, Greg... Thanks...





Thanks, om!!!

Thanks, Ronnie.




Noel - nice to see you drop by. Thanks for the nice comments...




Thanks, y'all...

Thanks, Scott...




Appreciate that, Deej...




Thanks, moto...