It's been a little while since my last song post.

Most of my songs are inspired by events around me.

We all know what events surround us theses days.

I felt compelled to create something that speaks to the current events.

Unfortunately, I'm a complete novice at BIAB so, my skill level was not sufficient to use it to create this song.
Someday I hope to reach a higher level of BIAB skills.

For now, It's all me, guitar, synth guitar and vocals.

Here's a simple song called: "Sacrifice "



https://soundcloud.com/captainmoto/sacrifice?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

A stark reminder of the horror of war... Very moving, and heartfelt song/performance, well done...

Spooky ... reminds me of the Doors

Sad sad situation.

Thanks for listening and making a comment.

moto

Yes sir, spooky as hell.

Thanks for dropping in for a listen.

moto

Hi Captain
Well done. I also get a bit of a Doors vibe (as happens with a few of your songs). Unspeakable what's happening in Ukraine (and Syria). If only music really could change the world.
Regards,
Leon

This is a real song about a real war in a real place with real people who are treated no differently than any other barbarian would treat people.

The music fits the song, the song fits the times.

Every time I look over at my rifle I also wonder how much longer can I just watch.

I have tried three or four times to write a song about all this but all that comes out is anger and tears.
Thanks, moto.

Billy

Masters of War 2022, dark and powerful.

Definitely hearing the doors vibe as others have mentioned, and that's ok in my book.

This is just a very real song about a very real and terrifying situation, and it's very well done.

Nice!

What a good song about a very bad situation. So well done, Moto. The steady beat indicates the marching madness of war.

Hello Moto
Strong song
Very fitting to the current topic
Sad that you have to write such songs in this day and age....
Good work
many greetings
Andi ;-)

Thanks Leon,

Humans are the most destructive animals on earth.



Thanks for the comments Billy.
I know how you feel.


Thanks for listening Mark.
"Masters of War" , strange that you mention that.
I recently did a cover of that but rules prevent me posting it here.



Thanks for the comments Dave.
I wasn't shooting for a "Doors" vibe, but, I'll humbly accept the compliment.

Hey Marty,
Thanks for dropping in, a shame we just can't stop the wars.

Andi,
Yes........how sad it is indeed.
How can people be so cruel?

Thanks Leon,

Humans are the most destructive animals on earth.



Thanks for the comments Billy.
I know how you feel.


Thanks for listening Mark.
"Masters of War" , strange that you mention that.
I recently did a cover of that but rules prevent me posting it here.



Thanks for the comments Dave.
I wasn't shooting for a "Doors" vibe, but, I'll humbly accept the compliment.

Hey Marty,
Thanks for dropping in, a shame we just can't stop the wars.

Andi,
Yes........how sad it is indeed.
How can people be so cruel?

Captain,
Very good and creative write. I am grateful to all folks that are not ignoring this tragedy and speaking out. Thank you!

Misha.

P.S. I shared your soundcloud link with my Ukrainian friends.

Thanks Misha,
What a shame we have such madness in the world.
A little song aint doing much to help but, at least it brings a little more attention to the cruel reality of this invasion.

moto,

Powerful!

The tracks/instrumentation set the mood perfectly. And the vocal puts it over the top.

REALLY well done.

fj

WOW what a dynamic song.

Unfortunately it is so true in the Ukraine.

Many there are making the ultimate sacrifice

Finally yes it does sound like something Jim Morrison would write.

Loved it.

Thanks FJ,
When the master speaks I pay attention!
Greatly appreciate your kind comments.

I've been struggling with what I would do to speak to this subject.
I settled on this simple arrangement.

This hits the mark dead-on. You captured the dreariness of the situation perfectly. I liked that cello or whatever it was. It add real atmosphere. I don't know if you know how to make the guitar wail but if you do, you should lay down some wailing guitar at the end. If you can't, get one of the great players on this forum to do it. It would really elevate this thing a couple of notches.

Top notch work.

Thanks for the comments.
I hear what you're saying, I could have added a few more elements but, I was trying to keep it simple with focus on the subject rather than the music.

Maybe I'll do some wailing on a future song.

Really really cool Moto. Loved the groove of the song. I got a bit of a Doors vibe. Really well done..

Thanks Mario,
Wish we had something more uplifting to sing about.

Thoughtful and provoking.

The choice of a minor melodic suits this perfectly, and the steady rhythmic backing enforces the underlying message.

Thanks for listening and commenting Scott.
Tried to keep the groove simple, wasn't aiming for the "Doors" vibe.
I guess a few of my recent songs seem to find their way in that direction.

Hi Captain well done true words so powerful!! and so wrong on what is happening to the Ukrainians thanks for sharing

Thank you for giving it a listen.
Yes, I wanted a constant drone to emphasize the relentless attack.
The world would be a beautiful place is is wasn't for the people.

Nothing to say that hasn't been said.

A very effective song - lyrically and instrumentally.

It's been said here, a Doors' vibe.
Good song, but sad.

Rob and Anne-Marie

Thanks for giving it a listen.




Thank you!

Thanks for dropping in for a listen.
I'm thinking I need to work on the "Doors" vibe

A very ethereal and timely song here.

Really liked it.

Thanks for giving it a listen.

Hi Moto,

I liked this song immediately, dark, threatening and here very strong!
Good vocals and a very good band. Who you want to sacrifice still pounding in my head, but I'm a bit obsessed by this cruel war.
I feel mightyless, but with that guy WWIII is in reach!

As I said, a very good song and I enjoyed it much!
Hans

Hey Hans,
Thanks for listening and adding your comments.

This situation is so sickening, millions of people displaced, thousands dead and wounded, cities destroyed, all as we watch.
Providing some aid is noble but, it's not ending the rolling disaster.
I'm afraid we will all be drawn in soon.

I cannot wrap my mind around such cruelty.

"I'm a complete novice at BIAB" Well couldn't be at a better place to hone the skill!

Well done and the message is driven home in heart thumping Doors like manner indeed.

Depressingly timely ... unfortunate that it has to be so.

Well done.

J&B

Reminds me of Sky's Edge Richard Hawley.
I was expecting an eruption...unmet expectations are a good tension developer.
The vocal over on the left was slightly odd but works.

Hey Kids,
That's for giving it a listen.
I'm learning.

Thanks for giving it a listen Ray and thanks for reminding me about Richard Hawley.........I like his work but, he slips of my radar.
Regarding the left leaning vocals: Just an artistic decision....maybe good maybe bad.

Thanks again

The limited instruments adds to the overall eerie feel and adds to the underlying tension.

Well done. I enjoyed the song immensely.

Moto,

Great work on this one. Has a cool 60’s psychedelic vibe to it, but still fresh and compelling. Like the choice of panning the vocal to the left with that stellar cello-like sound panned right. Well done!

Best regards,

Deej

Thanks for listening Ezekiel.

It's pretty simple, intentionally so.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Very well done, evocative topical and moody.

Excellent work.

Peter

Peter,
Thanks for your comment.

Hi Mo,




Me neither. Let's hope there comes a coup very quickly!

Me neither, Mo!
neat
Let's hope there's a coup very soon to get that sick man and his buddies moving

Hans