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Posted By: Torrey Bliss MAKE IT MINE - 05/28/22 08:57 PM
MAKE IT MINE

This song is a total re-work of a tune I posted
a couple years back. It was originaly a sort of
tribute to the writing team of Donald Fagen and
Walter Becker, but I have re-written the lyrics
in the first verse to reference all of our musical
heroes who have left the stage. It's about dealing
with, as a musician, getting older and trying to keep
up with this rapidly changing world around us. My
main purpose for this one though, is to encourage everyone to
not stress about not "keeping up" with current trends
and just keep making the music that brings joy to
your life! Not trying to win a Grammy here, just want
to have a little fun!!

Thanks for having a listen! T


BIAB
Guitar - 4006 Modern Pop Soul - Used just in chorus sections

Me
Vocals
Electric Piano
Organ
Guitars
Bass

Drums were from the Top 40 DOD set. I had to use these for
a 4 on the floor sound.

Opening 8 bar sequence of organ and horns from a Yamaha arranger keyboard

Make It Mine
Words and music By
Torrey Bliss Copyright 2020

They taught us to play
Now look they've left the stage
Where did our heroes all go
They'd tell us it's wrong
To stop singing our song
So we've gotta keep keepin' on

Racing the clock and the beat won't stop
And the rhythm's speedin' up with the time
I'm feeling the future bearing down on me
But I'm still gonna make it mine

Don't shake my hand don't breath on me
You know that's the way they say it's gotta be
This brand new world It don't fit me
I'm not quiting now I'm in way too deep

Racing the clock and the beat won't stop
And the rhythm's speedin' up with the time
I'm feeling the future bearing down on me
But I'm still gonna make it mine
Posted By: rayc Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/28/22 09:52 PM
ANOTHER TB classic.
Your asides/spoken parts REALLY work: the tone and timbre fit the song really well.
The scatting in the outro was cool too.
The reduction/break down to finish was also a treat...kept me hovering - wondering if a return was coming.
Excellent lyric and a terrific package of mainly Torrey made music.
Posted By: NigelSpiers Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 01:40 AM
Hi Torrey,

Top guitar work and cool intro.

Best Regards
Nigel
Posted By: RnAM Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 09:35 AM
Very well played and good lyrics!
Great song.

Yes, we certainly have to go on making our own music!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 10:01 AM
Man, I wish SoundCloud had a REALLY LOVE THIS button. Like just doesn't do it. You are definitely a favorite of mine, Torrey. Really amazing how varied you music is and you always present it in such a professional and polished way. Of course it helps to be such an accomplished multi-instrumentalist. What a great sound here. I Hear what you mean about the 4-on-the-floor drums.
Posted By: Brad Williams Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 11:57 AM
Way to go Torrey - another great one, you're on a roll. Never heard the first one, but I sure like this one. Hard to pick out my favorite parts -Great intro, a lot of neat surprises and as usual, loved your guitar sounds.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 12:37 PM
Torrey,

Excellent. Terrific Music all around.
Nice playing (everywhere).
Excellent vocals.
Solid mix.

Everything about this is pro level.

fj
Posted By: PROJECT M Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 01:48 PM
Hi Torrey
Excellent song
With the elaborate songwriting I also quickly
realize why BiaB was only used to a small extent
Really brilliantly realized, played and sung
Absolute top work Torrey
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/29/22 03:18 PM
Originally Posted By: rayc
ANOTHER TB classic.
Your asides/spoken parts REALLY work: the tone and timbre fit the song really well.
The scatting in the outro was cool too.
The reduction/break down to finish was also a treat...kept me hovering - wondering if a return was coming.
Excellent lyric and a terrific package of mainly Torrey made music.


Thanks Ray, for the wonderful comments! They are always appreciated! T
Posted By: Ghostgum Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 05:56 AM
Top quality (as usual); hard act to follow. The outro was unusual but it worked well. wink
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 06:52 AM
Wow, absolutely outstanding in every way!

Great song, great performance, totally pro mix.

One of your best I think, Torrey.
Posted By: Dewey_MI Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 11:27 AM
Really good stuff, Torrey! You don't really need to rely on BIAB because you are such an amazing musician. I on the other hand, need BIAB to be my whole band. While the song was half way through I was getting ready to suggest adding some surprises in the melody/production to to keep the listener engaged but then your "ooh, ooh, ooh's" came in and gave me what I was looking for. Thanks for sharing your talents!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 12:20 PM
Originally Posted By: NigelSpiers
Hi Torrey,

Top guitar work and cool intro.

Best Regards
Nigel


Thanks Nigel! I always appreciate your comments and never take them for granted! T
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 02:03 PM
Hi Torrey love your songs wow guitar work and vocals were awesome really like the tone you got going there on the guitar always have a pro sound well done thanks for sharing Eric
Posted By: firesong Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 02:13 PM
Torrey...another stellar song...this certainly has a live band feel to it...the drums are perfect and have a very "there's a guy in the corner" playing the drums feeling...the guitar work is flawless and I'm jealous of the keyboard playing! and man I love the harmonies you add to the vocals...they are always so tasteful and tight...I appreciate what you wrote about the song (your motivation) as well as the lyrics...watching or feeling like your gifts are waning and/or not keeping up is a challenge that I am acutely aware of...so I appreciate the encouragement to "keep on keeping on"...as I try to tell the "young" people in the praise band I play with..."we play for an audience of One"...I personally need to keep track of that.

Great song and production!
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/30/22 04:20 PM
More please! Janice said that listening to this certainly brought joy to her heart so please keep making this music of yours.

Awesome vocals, playing, mix and arrangement and the outro is so cool.

The Steely Dan influence on your music is always very pleasing.

Enjoyed it! Rock on.

J&B
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/31/22 07:51 AM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Very well played and good lyrics!
Great song.

Yes, we certainly have to go on making our own music!

Rob and Anne-Marie


Thanks Rob and Anne-Marie for taking time to listen and comment! T
Posted By: rsdean Re: MAKE IT MINE - 05/31/22 08:08 AM
Torrey,

Outstanding and pro all the way! What a sound!

Love everything about this.

Bob
Posted By: musician17 Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/01/22 07:17 AM
Superb! As Robert says, just above ... what a sound. Reminds this eighties' child of Prince, a little. Congratulations - absolutely superb.

P.S. the quiet ending - ace.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/01/22 11:37 AM
Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Man, I wish SoundCloud had a REALLY LOVE THIS button. Like just doesn't do it. You are definitely a favorite of mine, Torrey. Really amazing how varied you music is and you always present it in such a professional and polished way. Of course it helps to be such an accomplished multi-instrumentalist. What a great sound here. I Hear what you mean about the 4-on-the-floor drums.


Thanks Marty! Your comments always mean so much to me and are never taken for granted! T
Posted By: Scott C Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/01/22 01:32 PM
Loved the intro Torrey. Kick and guitar work was very cool. Super vocal and lyric. Well done
Posted By: MarioD Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/01/22 09:16 PM
Torrey, IMHO this is your best to date.

Loved that groove, vocal, and your outstanding lead work.

Everything about this is top shelf.

Loved it.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/02/22 08:01 AM
Originally Posted By: Brad Williams
Way to go Torrey - another great one, you're on a roll. Never heard the first one, but I sure like this one. Hard to pick out my favorite parts -Great intro, a lot of neat surprises and as usual, loved your guitar sounds.


Thanks Brad! I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment! T
Posted By: Birchwood Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/02/22 11:26 AM
Hi Torrey,

Your introduction of the song promised a lot and you didn't dissapointed me!
Very Funky song, with a powerfull beat.
Well, I enjoyed it all ("of course", I think I must say by now), but I liked the long outro of the song even more!

And I fully agree with your statement we don't have to break our brains on the question what song we have to make, given modern times.
A lot of people like the music of the older times too. I even think they soon become the new modern music...

Hans
Posted By: Rustyspoon# Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/02/22 01:53 PM
Funky, Rocky, Fun!

Torrey,
Wonderful guitar playing! Ace vocals and composition! Good traditional vibe with modern spice. Very creative composition. Arrangement and mix A+ listens very well. Definitely radio ready. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.
Posted By: Robertkc Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/03/22 01:18 PM
Torrey,
Fantastic musicianship on display- I remember the original and you`ve upped your already impressive game here- your vocals and all instruments are energetic and capture the feel of your musical heroes.
There`s a pro level polish to this- very well done!

Robert
Posted By: David Snyder Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/03/22 01:29 PM

This sounds great Torrey!

You sure do have a signature sound, and I love the way you play.

Awesome.
Posted By: edshaw Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/03/22 03:58 PM
What a masterfully done production, Torrey!
Hey, I like the new portrait. This past year had me working a bit with photo-to-sketch software and I'll have to say, you hit it out of the park with this graphic. Bottom line, you're hitting on all eight!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/04/22 06:35 AM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Torrey,

Excellent. Terrific Music all around.
Nice playing (everywhere).
Excellent vocals.
Solid mix.

Everything about this is pro level.

fj


Thanks Floyd for having a listen! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/05/22 07:26 AM
Originally Posted By: PROJECT M
Hi Torrey
Excellent song
With the elaborate songwriting I also quickly
realize why BiaB was only used to a small extent
Really brilliantly realized, played and sung
Absolute top work Torrey
Many greetings
Andi ;-)


Thanks Andi! I appreciate the kind words! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/05/22 05:10 PM
Originally Posted By: Ghostgum
Top quality (as usual); hard act to follow. The outro was unusual but it worked well. wink


Thanks so much Ghostgum for taking time to listen and comment! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/05/22 08:00 PM
I gave up keeping up with music decades ago. I guess I, like many, are stuck in a music time loop. laugh

What a music treat! So much going on to please my ears. The production sounds like it was done in a professional studio.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/06/22 08:10 AM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Wow, absolutely outstanding in every way!

Great song, great performance, totally pro mix.

One of your best I think, Torrey.


Thanks Dave! I really appreciate that! T
Posted By: chulaivet1966 Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/06/22 11:52 AM
Howdy Torrey....

This is very cool.
Definitely has a Fagan vibe....what's not to like. smile

Very well done in all aspects.

Carry on...
Posted By: animarorecords Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 03:06 AM
Torrey,

Cool Intro.!
Excellent Guitar!
Awesome vocals!
Outstanding and pro all the way.
The ending is swanky.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 07:50 AM
Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI
Really good stuff, Torrey! You don't really need to rely on BIAB because you are such an amazing musician. I on the other hand, need BIAB to be my whole band. While the song was half way through I was getting ready to suggest adding some surprises in the melody/production to to keep the listener engaged but then your "ooh, ooh, ooh's" came in and gave me what I was looking for. Thanks for sharing your talents!


Thanks Dewey! I appreciate the kind words! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 07:51 AM
Originally Posted By: F.M.M.
Hi Torrey love your songs wow guitar work and vocals were awesome really like the tone you got going there on the guitar always have a pro sound well done thanks for sharing Eric


Thanks Eric for taking time to listen and comment! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 07:53 AM
Originally Posted By: firesong
Torrey...another stellar song...this certainly has a live band feel to it...the drums are perfect and have a very "there's a guy in the corner" playing the drums feeling...the guitar work is flawless and I'm jealous of the keyboard playing! and man I love the harmonies you add to the vocals...they are always so tasteful and tight...I appreciate what you wrote about the song (your motivation) as well as the lyrics...watching or feeling like your gifts are waning and/or not keeping up is a challenge that I am acutely aware of...so I appreciate the encouragement to "keep on keeping on"...as I try to tell the "young" people in the praise band I play with..."we play for an audience of One"...I personally need to keep track of that.

Great song and production!


Thanks so much Dan for thoughtful comments! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 07:54 AM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
More please! Janice said that listening to this certainly brought joy to her heart so please keep making this music of yours.

Awesome vocals, playing, mix and arrangement and the outro is so cool.

The Steely Dan influence on your music is always very pleasing.

Enjoyed it! Rock on.

J&B


Thanks J&B! I really appreciate that! T
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/07/22 09:52 AM
Fagan and Becker were oozing out from every note of this song.

Extremely well done Danisk production.
Posted By: PeterF Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/08/22 06:33 PM
Torrey

Really pro in all aspects, superb guitar and vocals.

Deserving of all the excellent comments.

Top notch pro work.

Peter
Posted By: dani48 Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/09/22 06:43 PM
Hi, Torrey !

This just must be your best so far !
everything functions superbly
and what a pro work on every field !
wonderful !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/09/22 08:23 PM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Torrey,

Outstanding and pro all the way! What a sound!

Love everything about this.

Bob


Thanks Bob! Your comments mean a lot to me! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/10/22 09:25 PM
Originally Posted By: musician17
Superb! As Robert says, just above ... what a sound. Reminds this eighties' child of Prince, a little. Congratulations - absolutely superb.

P.S. the quiet ending - ace.


Thanks James! I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 07:41 AM
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Loved the intro Torrey. Kick and guitar work was very cool. Super vocal and lyric. Well done


Thanks Scott! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 07:42 AM
Originally Posted By: MarioD
Torrey, IMHO this is your best to date.

Loved that groove, vocal, and your outstanding lead work.

Everything about this is top shelf.

Loved it.


Thanks for stopping by Mario! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 07:43 AM
Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Torrey,

Your introduction of the song promised a lot and you didn't dissapointed me!
Very Funky song, with a powerfull beat.
Well, I enjoyed it all ("of course", I think I must say by now), but I liked the long outro of the song even more!

Thanks Hans for all the nice words! T

And I fully agree with your statement we don't have to break our brains on the question what song we have to make, given modern times.
A lot of people like the music of the older times too. I even think they soon become the new modern music...

Hans
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 07:43 AM
Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Funky, Rocky, Fun!

Torrey,
Wonderful guitar playing! Ace vocals and composition! Good traditional vibe with modern spice. Very creative composition. Arrangement and mix A+ listens very well. Definitely radio ready. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


Thanks Misha! I always appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 07:45 AM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Torrey,
Fantastic musicianship on display- I remember the original and you`ve upped your already impressive game here- your vocals and all instruments are energetic and capture the feel of your musical heroes.
There`s a pro level polish to this- very well done!

Robert


Thanks Robert! It's great to see you around here again! T
Posted By: Deej56 Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/11/22 04:41 PM
Torrey,

What a great opening . . . and that bass is just killer. Real funky, infectious sound. You vocal is stellar as always. Top-notch tune with a great message. Solo and instrumental work is just terrific. Awesome!

All my best to you,

Deej
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/12/22 07:50 AM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

This sounds great Torrey!

You sure do have a signature sound, and I love the way you play.

Awesome.


Thanks David! I really appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/12/22 07:51 AM
Originally Posted By: edshaw
What a masterfully done production, Torrey!
Hey, I like the new portrait. This past year had me working a bit with photo-to-sketch software and I'll have to say, you hit it out of the park with this graphic. Bottom line, you're hitting on all eight!


Thanks Ed for all the positive feedback! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/12/22 07:53 AM
Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
I gave up keeping up with music decades ago. I guess I, like many, are stuck in a music time loop. laugh

What a music treat! So much going on to please my ears. The production sounds like it was done in a professional studio.


Thanks Scott for taking the time to listen and comment! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/13/22 11:04 AM
Originally Posted By: chulaivet1966
Howdy Torrey....

This is very cool.
Definitely has a Fagan vibe....what's not to like. smile

Very well done in all aspects.

Carry on...


Thanks so much for having a listen! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/13/22 11:05 AM
Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Torrey,

Cool Intro.!
Excellent Guitar!
Awesome vocals!
Outstanding and pro all the way.
The ending is swanky.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Thanks Shigeki for having a listen and commenting! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/13/22 11:06 AM
Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
Fagan and Becker were oozing out from every note of this song.

Extremely well done Danisk production.



Thanks Herb! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/14/22 08:09 AM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Torrey

Really pro in all aspects, superb guitar and vocals.

Deserving of all the excellent comments.

Top notch pro work.

Peter


Thanks Peter for all the positive feedback! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/14/22 08:10 AM
Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Torrey !

This just must be your best so far !
everything functions superbly
and what a pro work on every field !
wonderful !

Cheers
Dani



Thanks Dani! I always appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/15/22 08:05 AM
Originally Posted By: Deej56
Torrey,

What a great opening . . . and that bass is just killer. Real funky, infectious sound. You vocal is stellar as always. Top-notch tune with a great message. Solo and instrumental work is just terrific. Awesome!

All my best to you,

Deej


Thanks Deej for the kind words! T
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/15/22 08:36 AM
Top notch write, arrangement, production and performance. very professional across the board.

Charlie
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: MAKE IT MINE - 06/15/22 12:27 PM
Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Top notch write, arrangement, production and performance. very professional across the board.

Charlie


Thanks, Charlie for taking time to listen and comment! I always appreciate it! T
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