BEDROOM DOOR

https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/32693110-bedroom-door

Let me lock the world away
Keep the world outside our Bedroom Door

I like it!
Cool energetic song with a lot of power.
The mix is a little too loud though, a little less compression on the master bus would give the drums in the choruses a little more room to live and make them a little less loud in the break.
Still a good mix

Nice intro and build. Gets right to the point, and builds from there. Bridge does what a bridge should do.

Strong vocal as well. I enjoyed this one a lot!

Hi Elliott,

Boy - you have put a lot of effort into this excellent song - and it pays off!

I Particularly liked:

1. The Opening - excellent.
2. The Middle 8
3. Light and shade in the verses.
4. Lead Break
5. Dropping out all instruments in the last verse.

It kept my interest from start to finish - we could all learn a lot from this song.

Best Regards
Nigel

Sounded great! I'd like to see the BIAB info on this.

Great idea for a song, and what a wonderfully creative production. Great dynamics throughout. Very much enjoyed, Elliott.

Hi Elliott,

Great song.
Really nice beginning and the quiet part at 3.06 is a very good break.
Terrific voice.

Anne-Marie

Keep the world outside the door
Let me stay here with you all day long
Away from the problems and the stress
In a world that's such a mess Out side our bedroom door

Let me hold you in my arms paint your body with aroma oils
Let the candle light your mood In the darkness of our room
Behind our bedroom door

Let me lock the world a way create a world all to ourselves
In inside here we will stay Behind our bedroom door

Lock the door and throw away the
key To prevent the madness from entering
Leave our troubles and the bills And all the worldly ills
Outside the bedroom door

I cant wait just to hold you
I cant wait to be with you again

Let me smell your sweet perfume
The only sound we hear is our hearts beating
Drowning out the ringing phones That won't leave us alone
Outside our bedroom door.

Good song; Good arrangement, performance and production. Enjoyed this from start to finish. Excellent opening.

Charlie