BEEN TOO LONG

BEEN TOO LONG since we said I Love You

https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/33660548-been-too-long

Elliott, I really enjoy everything you post. You seem like a fun and funny guy. Hasn't been so long since I said I love your songs. Your lyrics are the blood of the song, and your melody represents the veins, and the whole body dances. Your choruses are always sing-along catchy. Very enjoyable!!

Thank you for listening and for you very kind words. I appreciate it.

Sometimes we get so wrapped up
Working so hard just to make ends meet
Got remember what / we’re doing this for
(sometimes we just have to stop // … and say
I love you)

Sometimes the months / just slip by
Next thing you know / the seasons have changed
Suddenly then / you look up / everything’s gone

Been too long since I brought you flowers
Been too long since we went to dance
Been too long since you looked / deep in my eyes
Been too long since I held you close
Been too long since you laughed at my jokes
Been too long since I said I love you
… I love you

Sometimes the days just turn into years
Lookup and all the kids have grown
Then you wonder what you have missed

Sometimes we get so wrapped up
Working so hard just to make ends meet
I just want to stop // … and say I love you
Chorus … Vs 1

Lovely song Elliot. Really cool mix. Super vocal and lyric. Well done

Elliott, I like the song and the whole idea of it. Sure liked the way you worked those acoustic guitars. The sounded great together.

Elliott, you have posted some great songs but IMHO this is your best to date.

All of us old guys can relate to those lyrics, well at least I can relate

Super vocal and mix

Great instrumentation

I really like the lyrics and vocal, and the backing.

The vocal panned to one side was a bit distracting - it feels like I'm listening to an early Beatles album!

The wide stereo on the first chorus' harmony made it sound a bit like phasing or something.

Guitars are really nice. That's one heavily processed snare!

OK, enough nits. Despite my complaints, I did enjoy the song.