New song using Band-in-a-Box, EZDrums 3, EZBass, EZKeys and Cakewalk by Bandlab

What do you guys think?
I mainly use BIAB for the solos: the sax and the guitar.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNC-Z5ogXIw

Nicely done. I particularly like the piano and vocals.
Lyrics were strong too. Great job.

I particularly liked the way you built the dynamics in the beginning.
I was unsure of your voice in the 1st phrase but it proved a good fit for the music after that point.

Originally Posted By: Bass Thumper

Nicely done. I particularly like the piano and vocals.
Lyrics were strong too. Great job.

Thanks Bass Thumper!

Originally Posted By: rayc

I particularly liked the way you built the dynamics in the beginning.
I was unsure of your voice in the 1st phrase but it proved a good fit for the music after that point.

Thank you, rayc!

I'd recommend creating a little more space for the vocal, but overall this is very solid and full sounding.

Nice one.

Originally Posted By: olemon

I'd recommend creating a little more space for the vocal, but overall this is very solid and full sounding.

Nice one.

Thanks for the comments, olemon.
I'll take a second listen to the vocals.

I'm with olemon on this - nice sound, but the vocal could be separated from the rest of the mix.

I liked it. I thought it was a good vocal and very unique sound overall, making it stand out very well. I was surprised it ended as quickly as it did, I thought there was going to be some more guitar work prior to the fade out.

I'm with Brad "thought it was a good vocal and very unique sound overall, making it stand out very well".

I like this just as it is; I wouldn't change a thing.

Great job on this song!