Painting up the Town Red

https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/33687531-painting-up-the-town-red

Been around the world seen a lot of girls
but never seen a girl that makes me feel like you
you make me new

I don’t know but I been told if you find a girl that you want to hold you take her home that what Im gonna do

Wont you stay a while / Get a little Wild
We’re going out tonight and paintin’ up this town red
We’re Dressin up in Style / Flash me that beautiful Smile
That is what we’re gonna do

So put your pretty hand in mine I’ll be working overtime
for you / its what I do

Going Out With You

I dont know but Ive been told to have some fun before you get old and gray, and Live for today

Lets take a wild ride / Wrap around my bike
We’re going out tonight and paintin’ up this town red
Make you feel Alive / Its such a beautiful night
That is what we’re gonna do

We’re Alive in the best of times / leave all your cares and blues behind and Dream / its as good as it seems

I don’t know but Ive been told all the streets are paved with gold and dreams do you know what I mean

Going Out With You

Nice stuff Elliott. I really liked the beat and melody. As always, the guitars were fantastic - loved that lead. It may be just me, but I thought the vocals sounded like they could be brought out front more. The words in the versus sounded rushed as compared with the choruses. I liked the words, but a few syllables could be taken out here and there to keep the meaning, but not be quite as rushed. This is a real feel good song, so that's just my two cents - for what it's worth (probably less than two cents).

Brad

Elliott, I agree with Brad about the vocals

Great groove and backing band

Added Guitars, EZ Drummer, Keys

***** Song Summary *************
Title: Painting up the Town Red
File:Painting up the Town Red.SGU
Key=D , Tempo 120, Length (m:s)=3:04
2 bar intro, 88 bar chorus, from bar 3 to bar 90. Repeat x1 chorus
Melody has 685 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Soloist track has 442 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _BASALT.STY (Basalt Modern Rock w Shaker)

RealTracks in style: 1255:Bass, Electric, PopShiningA-B Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1264:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopShiningA-B Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1259:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopShiningRockA-B Ev 120
RealDrums in Song: ShakerEv[single]^3-8thsBright
RealTracks in song: 661:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm TexasRockCrisp Ev 120 (A:simple)
RealTracks in song: 698:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ElecRockDirty Ev 120 (A:muted)
RealTracks in song: 1169:Guitar, Electric, Soloist RockMediumBrent Ev 120
RealTracks in song: 1273:Guitar, Electric, Soloist PopUplift Ev16 120
RealDrums in Song:PraiseWorshipShine^03-a:Kick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat Slightly Open

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New mix, and new singer
let me know what you think

Hi Elliott,

Great song and very catchy verses and chorus. Also - excellent production and good vocals.

I thought the lyrics and phrasing were good - you could maybe consider dropping the word "beautiful" in the chorus and sing e.g. "it's such a night" or "what a night".

Just a minor comment - I really enjoyed the whole song.

Best Regards
Nigel