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Hi all, I haven't been around much lately, and haven't had many chances to work my way through the User Showcase. I've been working on a song lately on which I'd like to get some feedback if anyone has a few minutes and would care to comment. It's a bit of a sad song about a depressing relationship that so many people find themselves in it seems. Let me have it good or bad if you will. Thanks in advance. The Morning Paper
Last edited by toucher; 11/19/11 08:38 PM.
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I've listened three times - quite simply outstanding...
Bob
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Hi toucher,
Very impressive. I liked the melody and the story scene you painted. Great vocal that really captured the emotion.
I would've liked to see the lyrics.
My only nit is that the harmonizer is distracting from her voice in spots because it sounds too robotic - especially for an intimate song like this.
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Very nice indeed! I agree with Josie about the harmonizer.
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One single harmony might be sweet. Take the vocalizer and cut it down to either a 3rd or a 5th, and see what one lone voice does.
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I posted already but it seems to have got lost.
Great singing and a great song! Like it! With my hearing the harmony sounded ok.
Chris
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nice song and lyrics. as far as production i would bring the drums up in the mix and lower the crash cymbal volume. other then that it sounded pretty good.
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Hi Toucher,
Really well written (sad) song! I agree with the comments about the harmonizer. But great job on the song!
Steve
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Thank you all so much for the input so far, it would appear there is a confirmatin between this and another forum on a couple of changes. I'll work on those when time allows. There are so many knowledgable pros here that a consensus is usually something you have to go with. I'll repost when I've had some time to process what I need to do and then find time to do it Thanks again. Can't wait for the 2012 version............. Rob
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