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Hi again, here is a new composition, I have tried to take on board the comments from my last post, so see what you think. The Instruments are mostly Sample Tank, Guitars are BinB as are Strings etc. Thanks Link https://soundcloud.com/royg1707/fragilechildrenfin
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Great song, great sung, great mix ready for publishing,
could you give more production details, have you used a pro studio)
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Hi Royg,
nice ballad. Well sung.
Thanks for sharing.
Guenter
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Thanks for your comments, no I haven't used a pro studio, I have Cubase for production and a small home set-up.
Thanks again.
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Beautiful work, good clear vocal and I love the piano; thanks for sharing!
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Very large sound. I might have dialed the overall reverb and those ahhs back just a bit but that's all purely subjective.
I like the way the arrangement builds. The vocal is really pretty with that wonderful Cat Stevens quality you have in your voice and it's a lovely message song.
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royg -
A cool sound - pretty song. The piano and strings work well to deliver the message. When the strings drop out about 2:10 and when they come back in at about 2:30 it's a bit abrupt. A fade out and then fade back in there would be nice - a little thing.
Enjoyable.
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Thank you for the comments, it's nice to get other peoples views, I will re visit the reverb and have a listen.
Thanks again.
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Thanks for the comments, I did think about fade in but didn't get around to it, maybe I will give it another go and see how it sounds.
Thanks again.
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Nice feel!! Love the vocal and arrangement! Very cool. Take care. Greg
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Thanks a lot for listening.
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Hi, Roy !:))
This is a really nice tune
with stellar vocals !:))
IMO there is a little of
Neil Diamond in your voice
but not too much (chuckle) !!
I enjoyed this one very much !!:))
Cheers
Dani
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Roy,
I immediately thought Neil Diamond, too.
Very nice. Thanks!
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Nice song, the vocal is very good. I like the melody. Nice big sounding mix. I enjoyed it. Tom
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Very, very nice! I really like this song and performance. I agree with the Neil Diamond comparison, and like Josie, I can hear a little Cat Stevens, when you are singing more softly. A good combination.
Steve
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Wow really enjoyed this song. Love your voice. Well done. Very high quality
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Roy,
This was a pleasure to hear. A very heartfelt performance coupled with musicianship on all levels - writing, arranging, presentation and production.
More please!
All the best,
Noel
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Hi Roy
Very nice song with some heartfelt lyrics. Right up my street. Good one.
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Very pro sounding production on this one. The mix is very supporting of the vocal. Nice work!
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Thanks for your comments, always appreciated.
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