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I love lyrics. It's fascinating to see how other people translate ideas into words. I thought it would be interesting to see what phrases/verses really stand out to other PG music members. My idea was something short so it is quick to read and digest, but if you feel compelled to post an entire song, go for it. I'll start the ball rolling. I've been listening to a Don Henley CD in my car lately so here's a powerful lyric

There are people in your life who've come and gone, they let you down, you know they hurt your pride
You better put it all behind you baby cause life goes on, you keep carryin' that anger it'll eat you up inside

Post what moves you. Take care. Greg

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"I'll be down to getcha in a taxi honey"

That always pops into my head.


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Originally Posted By: seeker
"I'll be down to getcha in a taxi honey"

That always pops into my head.

I thought it was, "I'll be down to get you in a wheelbarrow honey, cause I ain't got very much money."

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I was listening to a Stevie Wonder track just yesterday "A Place In The Sun"
It's got some great lyrics, but the one that caught my attention was:

Like a branch on a tree
I keep reachin' to be free

That is just a brilliant line, in my view...


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Keith Urban:
"Take your cat and leave my sweater"
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"Houses cling to mountains like miners cling to dreams"


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"Only 21 she was, a young girl just in from somewhere."

"The sidewalk was a shoulder for her tears."

- Gordon Lightfoot
In "Go Go Round"

Gord is considered to be "Canada's greatest living poet."

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"I've been so many places, in my life and times..."

Dig this B3 in accompaniment:



Nicole Slack Jones singing.




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Greg,

Rolling like thunder, under the covers.

from "I guess that's why the call it the blues" by Elton John.

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She's faced the hardest times you could imagine...

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"I've been down so long it looks like up to me" Lee Hazlewood song title.


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[*****] boppa loomob, a lop bop-bop!


EDIT: Unbearable. It censored "w o p"

I'll bet nobody even remembers the origins of it as a no-no word anymore.

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Macster, would that be "Tootie Fruity" by James Brown and/or Little Richard.

I'm a bit surprised that the PC Petrol Cops didn't censor "Fruity", a synonym. lol.

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Um, Ah may be wrong, but I don't think The Godfather of Soul woulda been caught dead singin' Tutti Fruiti.

Let's let the man splain it himself:


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Originally Posted By: Mac
[*****] boppa loomob, a lop bop-bop!


EDIT: Unbearable. It censored "w o p"

I'll bet nobody even remembers the origins of it as a no-no word anymore.


Mac,

I bet I do but won't say here other than it was a not to endearing slang for immigrants from Italy. But I can still take you to a restaurant south of New Orleans where they feature a "[*****]" Salad on their MENU. And the kicker being the restaurant is an Italian Restaurant established by a 1st generation Italian Family.

A great place to eat BIG FOOD!

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Some of my favorite lyricists are people you have never heard of. There's a guy in Australia named Mike Debenham who releases songs just into the online communities he participates in with incredibly poignant lyrics. There's a song he has written called 'The Clearing' which describes settler/shepherd life in Australia which gives me goosebumps each time it shows up in my mp3 player playlist. Here's an example from 'The Clearing':

"my dreams are a hundred black faces
close my ears to the cry
and i wake in the morn for there's work to be done
the axe and the gun"

Link to the song - you should hear it's beauty: http://barnadine.net/music/0609-Barnadine-Clearing.mp3

There are many folks that participate in February Album Writing Month that are penning very memorable lyrics. Some of my favorite 'Fawmers' lyricists are gerrybhoy, oddbod, jaenadon, resonance.

Another one I love is from a blues CD I'll have to chase down at home - it goes something like this: "Took me 20 years to get discovered overnight".

Edit - I found it as I had done a review on it for the Phantom Tollbooth. Michael Powers is the artist and Successful Son is the song. Why this guy isn't world famous, I'll never know.

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Nice to see all the responses. This is another classic Don Henley verse (I love the END OF THE INNOCENCE CD).

Lyin' here in the darkness, I hear the sirens wail
Somebody's goin' to emergency, somebody's goin' to jail
You find somebody to love in this world, you better hang on tooth and nail
The wolf is always at the door

A lot of impact in about 40 words. He, I believe, is one of the true geniuses of pop songwriting. Keep 'em comin' Take care. Greg

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I marvel at this close to "Lola". I often wonder if Ray Davies knew what he had done, or if it was an accident from making the lines fit.


"I know what I am
and I'm glad I'm a man
and so's Lola"

-Ray Davies from "Lola" by the Kinks


In this (brilliant) song, the singer meets a girl named Lola in a club.

Throughout the song there are lyrical hints dropped that Lola is actually a man.

So you're expecting it at the conclusion, but the way the final line plays out, (where the clause "and so's Lola" is in the sentence) makes it real muddy.

Is Lola just glad that the singer is a man? Or is Lola actually a man?

Brilliant!

(One of my favorite rock 'n' roll records. Great tunes too! Worth a listen if you've never heard it!)

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Originally Posted By: Le Miz

I marvel at this close to "Lola". I often wonder if Ray Davies knew what he had done, or if it was an accident from making the lines fit.


I love those lyrics....

My favorite parts:
Well I'm not the world's most physical guy
But when she squeezed me tight she nearly broke my spine
.....
Why she walked like a woman and talked like a man




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Hey Greg, agreed on Don Henley. "End of the Innocence" and "Building the Perfect Beast" were my favorites of his.

On the Beast album I really enjoy the lyrics to "Month of Sundays" as it blends to the intro of "Sunset Grill".




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Yeah, I love BUILDING THE PERFECT BEAST AS WELL. Month of Sundays is a masterpiece. Also, love the chorus:

I was either standing in your shadow or blocking your light
Though I kept on trying I could not make it right
For you girl, there's just not enough love in the world

I'm a big Ray Davies fan from way back also

My bank went broke and my well ran dry
It was almost enough to contemplate suicide
I turned on my gas but then I soon realized
I hadn't settled my bill and they cut off my supply

Ray was one of the only rockers who had a lot of great humor and great emotion!

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You are the wind beneath my wings

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That's called flatulence, Danny. Probably incomplete digestion or an excess of legumes in your diet or quite possibly, an Irishman in your ancesTREE. He'll fall out and swagger home as soon the free drinks run out.

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I think it has more to do with the modern diet and the male digestive tract passin' thru the 50th birthday mark. That, and swallowing air when you eat or drink.


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There's so many lines and so little time!

One that I just listened to again said:

"I'm not sure what I'm sayin', ... but I'm sure I'll want her to BELIEVE me!"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_MtujO99Czw&list=PL7MZ550uvzVoroYByjBumJpLloHz0qjOu&index=1

Hehe wink

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That would be a long, long list for me, but these lines grabbed my attention

'I've been singing for my rent and singing for my supper,

I'm above the below, and below the upper' Jody Messina

'There's flies in the kitchen,
I can here 'em they're a buzzin'
And I ain't done nothin'
since I woke up today' J. Prine

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Hard to believe the same cat who wrote "wings" also penned "I like Peanut Butter".

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That's called flatulence, Danny. Probably incomplete digestion or an excess of legumes in your diet or quite possibly, an Irishman in your ancesTREE. He'll fall out and swagger home as soon the free drinks run out.


Beneath me "Wings" Donald, not me lower torso! :>

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I gotta wear shades."

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"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time." James Taylor

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Originally Posted By: Mick Emery
"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time." James Taylor

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Originally Posted By: Matt Finley
Originally Posted By: Mick Emery
"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time." James Taylor

+1

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That's a great line. James Taylor is a genius. Which song is that? I'm a huge fan but don't know that one. Here's a verse by him that I love. I believe the song title is MY TRAVELIN'STAR

My daddy used to ride the rails (so they say, so they say)
He was soft as smoke and as tough as nails (box car Jones, old walkin' man)
Comin' back home was like goin' to jail
Sheets and the blankets, babies and all
So he never did come back home, never that I recall

Beautiful writing!! I particularly love the second line

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Just trying to bump it back to the top for more input. I enjoy seeing what people like. Here's a great verse by Sting.

Another Winter comes, his icy fingers creep
Into these bones of mine, some memories never sleep

GHOST STORY is a beautifully written lyric. If you haven't heard it, you should check it out. Take care. Greg

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Yeah, I loved his lyrics from the song below. I put the first few lines of the song in but that whole song had thoughtful lyrics IMHO.

THE POLICE
"Synchronicity II"

Another suburban family morning.
Grandmother screaming at the wall.
We have to shout above the din of our Rice Crispies
We can't hear anything at all.




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He earned his love through discipline
A thundering, velvet hand
His gentle means of sculpting souls
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"Secret of Life"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TlAD-b7yew

It's the last line of the song...

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I agree Sting has some very good lyrics.

One that sticks out in my mind is Bowie's Rebel Rebel;
The original song said You want more and you want it fast
However when live he often substituted You want more than you're wanted for

The latter fits the song better and rhymes.

Another Sting line -
There were rooms of forgiveness
In the house that we share
But the space has been emptied
Of whatever was there
There were cupboards of patience
There were shelfloads of care
But whoever came calling
Found nobody there

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Originally Posted By: rharv
I agree Sting has some very good lyrics.

One that sticks out in my mind is Bowie's Rebel Rebel;
The original song said You want more and you want it fast
However when live he often substituted You want more than you're wanted for

The latter fits the song better and rhymes.

Another Sting line -
There were rooms of forgiveness
In the house that we share
But the space has been emptied
Of whatever was there
There were cupboards of patience
There were shelfloads of care
But whoever came calling
Found nobody there

-Consider Me Gone




Good stuff.

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God said to Abraham,

"kill me a son";

Abe say, "man, you must be puttin' me on!"

God said, "No!" -

Abe say, "What?" -

God say, "You can do what you want Abe but;

The next time you see me comin'-

You better run..."

Abe say, "Where you want this killin' done?"

God say, "Do it on Highway Sixty-One."



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Yes, he is another very good writer


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And the words of the prophets are written on the subway walls - and tenement halls. Listen...

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Yet another great one
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And the words of the prophets are written on the subway walls - and tenement halls. Listen...


That reminded me of Rush's similar version of the same lyrics in "Spirit of Radio" from late 70's I think.

For the words of the prophets were written on the studio wall, Concert hall
And echoes with the sounds of salesmen




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these are some that I always seem to catch myself singing

amazing grace how sweet the sound
that saved a wretch like me
I once was lost but now I am found
was blind but now I see

Mercy said no
I'm not gonna let you go
I'm not gonna let you slip away
You don't have to be afraid
Mercy said no
sin will never take control
Life and death stood face to face
Darkness tried to steal my heart away
Thank You Jesus, Mercy said no

You saw me crying in the chapel
the tears I shed were tears of joy
I know the meaning of contentment
now I'm happy with the Lord

Some secular lyrics and lines that seem to have made an imprint are

Been through the desert on a horse with no name

Workin' for the man

wasted days and wasted nights

Before the next teardrop falls

Ain't nothing wrong with the radio

trailers for sale or rent,
rooms to let fifty cents
No phone, no pool, no pets,
I ain't got no cigarettes
Ah, but two hours of pushin' broom
buys an eight by twelve four bit room
I'm a man of means by no means,
king of the road

Dust in the Wind
all we are is dust in the wind

We are the champions my friend
and we'll keep on fighting til the end


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I've been a poet, a pirate, etc., and a king....I've been up down etc.

...Actually, Sinatra had such great selection of the Broadway and American songbook of ballads and up tempos, that it's hard to pick....

one of my favorites "down in the depths...on the 92nd Floor", or, on second thought, a fav line: "Spring can really hang you up the most!"


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More favorites from Don Henley:

"You can check out any time you like, but you can never leave "

"Now it seems to me Some fine things have been laid upon your table... but you only want the ones that you can't get"

"City girls seem to find out early, how to open doors with just a smile"

"Loneliness will blind you in between the dark and the light"

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How about:

Now it all comes down to money, now I'm glad that I have quit
Folks these days just don't do nothin' simply for the love of it

or

You can arm yourself, alarm yourself, but there's nowhere you can run
Cause a man with a briefcase can steal more money than any man with a gun

or

Cause the flesh will get weak, and the ashes will scatter
So, I'm thinkin' about forgiveness, forgiveness

or

You see a lot more meanness in the city, it's the kind that eats you up inside
Hard to get away with anything that feels like dignity, hard to get home with any pride

or

I thought of all the bad luck, and the struggles we went through
and how I lost me and you lost you

or

We got the bubble headed bleach blonde who comes on at five
She can tell you 'bout the plane crash with a gleam in her eye
It's interesting when people die, give us dirty laundry

Don's got a million of them. One of the best writers ever!

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another of my all-time favorites in terms of clever lyrics:

"You've got a smile so bright,
you know you could have been a candle.

I'm holding you so tight,
you know you could have been a handle.

The way you swept me off my feet,
you know you could have been a broom.

The way you smelled so sweet,
you know you could have been some perfume.

Well, you could have been anything that you wanted to,
and I can tell the way you do the things you do.


As pretty as you are,
you know you could have been a flower.

If good looks was a minute,
you know that you could be an hour.

The way you stole my heart,
you know you could have been a cool crook.

And, baby, you're so smart,
you know you could have been a schoolbook.

Well, you could have been anything that you wanted to,
and I can tell the way you do the things you do.
*Eddie: Ah, baby, yeah
*Other Tempts:(The way you do the things you do)
(The way you do the things you do)

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Time is short and here's the damn thing about it
You're gonna die, gonna die for sure
And you can learn to live with love or without it
But there ain't no cure

She's got the wind as a witness
She's got feelings that fly by night
She believes in forgiveness
It's not love if it holds too tight

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Why we used to laugh together
And we'd dance to any old song.
Well, ya know, she still laughs with me
But she waits just a second too long.

- John Prine, "Far From Me"



Well, I started the engine
and I gave it some gas
Cathy was closing her purse
Well, we hadn't gone far in my beat old car
And I was prepared for the worst.
"Will you still see me tomorrow?"
"No, I got too much to do."
Well, a question ain't really a question
If you know the answer too.

- John Prine, "Far From Me"

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jimmy buffett love in the library

On the corner of Government and Bay Avenue
The old doomsday fanatic wore a crown of kudzu
Sirens where wailing in the gulf coastal heat
And it seemed like the whole world was in forced retreat

I paid no attention, revolved through the door
Passed the newspaper rack on the worn marble floor
Near civil war history my heart skipped a beat
She was standing in fiction stretched high on bare feet

Love in the library, quiet and cool
Love in the library, there are no rules
Surrounded by stories surreal and sublime
I fell in love in the library once upon a time

I was the pirate and she was the queen
Sir Francis and Elizabeth the best there's ever been
Then she strolled past my table and stopped at the stairs
Then sent me a smile as she reached for Flaubert

Love in the library, quiet and cool
Love in the library, there are no rules
Surrounded by stories surreal and sublime
I fell in love in the library once upon a time

She gathered her books, walked while she read
Words never spoken but so much was said
You can read all you want into this rendezvous
But it's safer than most things that lovers can do

Well stories have endings and fantasies fade
And the guard by the door starts drawing the shade
So write your own ending and hope it come true
For the lovers and strangers on Bay Avenue

Love in the library, quiet and cool
Love in the library, there are no rules
Surrounded by stories surreal and sublime
I fell in love in the library once upon a time
Surrounded by stories surreal and sublime
I fell in love in the library once upon a time






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And in the end
The love you take
Is equal to the love
You make

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You've got a lotta nerve, to say you are my friend...


"Positively 4th Street" is my favorite Bob Dylan recording and is one of my favorite all-time recordings.

(Dylan (tied with Oscar Hammerstein II) is my favorite lyricist).

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+1 on John Prine

"I was sittin' in the bathtub, counting my toes
When the radiator broke, the water all froze
I got stuck in the ice, without my clothes
Naked as the eyes of a clown

I was cyin' ice cubes, hoping I'd croak
When the sun came out, the ice all broke
I stood up and laughed
Thought it was a joke
That's the way that the world goes 'round"

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"I'm leavin' my family, I'm leavin' all my friends
My body's at home but my heart's in the wind
Where the clouds are like headlines on a new front page sky
My tears are salt water and the moon's full and high."



Tom Waits - "Shiver Me Timbers"

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'Cuz you're wanted by the po-lice,

and my wife thinks you're dead!



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For random lyrics....

Starfish and coffee, maple syrup and jam
Butterscotch clouds and a tangerine, a side order of ham

Prince - Starfish and Coffee from Sign O' The Times




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Not exactly "memorable" lines, but the Bellamy Brothers had a way of taking a current saying, and turning it into a song.

"If I Said You Had A Beautiful Body Would You Hold It Against Me."

"Do You Love As Good As You Look"
- Can you satisfy your man, like your body says you can.
- Judging from the cover, I'd love to read the book.

...he' an "Old Hippie" and he don't know what to do.
Should he hang onto the old, or grab onto the new

"Redneck Girl"
- her hands are calloused but her, heart is tender

****************

And remember that study some years ago that reported couples who "loved" more often, tended to live longer. Bellamy Brothers were all over that:

"Lovers Live Longer"
... 'cause the way that we're goin', we might live forever.

The Bellamy's claimed to be "the only band on the planet doing country reggae". No one seemed to dispute that! <grin>

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"It's hard to kiss the lips at night, that chew your a*s out all day long"

Written by Vince Gill and Rodney Crowell, performed by the Notorious Cherry Bombs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjkLf_X88WM

There's a bunch of good lines in that song.

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Sounds like the asphalt, Bobster!

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Quote:
And in the end
The love you take
Is equal to the love
You make

Lennon & McCartney

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James Taylor and Peter Gabriel are, to me, songwriting gods--JT for his ability to express the heaviest subjects lightly (not take them lightly, that's different), and PG for his capacity for taking the deepest subjects and making them accessible, both in pop music form. A rare art, in my estimation.

An example from Taylor's "That's Why I'm Here" on the death of an addict, speaking to other addicts or those knowledgeable of addiction:

"John's gone, found dead, he dies high, he's brown bread
Later said to have drowned in his bed
After the laughter, the wave of the dread
It hits us like a ton of lead"

Thinking about it reminds me of my reaction to the news of Jerry Garcia's death. At first I was angry, but after reflection I simply grieved the loss of another artist whom I admired to something over which he had no power.

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I was going to add something from PG here, but I'm going to have to do some more research. He packs much meaning into very few words, but in many cases you need the entire song for context. I'd rather pick out a verse or so.

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Richard,

In reference to Peter Gabriel, I think his song "Sledgehammer" is a pop/rock masterpiece. There's a ton of great lines and that infectious guitar riff just drives it home.

This is back when music videos were entertaining:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJWJE0x7T4Q

As for James Taylor, his album "Mud Slide Slim and the Blue Horizon" is still in my top 10 favorite albums of all time.


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Another submission for lyrics:

“I went to a little gypsy, out on fortune tellin’ place

Yea I went to see the little gypsy, out on fortune tellin’ place

She read my mind, … and then she slapped my face!”

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I've always had respect for Mr. Taylor and not only because of his songwriting abilities, but also love the kind of musicians he surrounds himself with, their knowledge and abilities, from which he can easily keep pace, but also I think he has the ability to FEED off of their inputs as well, both musically and lyrically.

"There's always room for the BEST."


That "pursuit of excellence" thang.


"Just yesterday morning, they let me know you were gone..."


Classic use of the "when" opening line.


Songwriters should practice the same old school journalism mantra of, "Who, What, Why, Where and When" - the hard part is knowing which one to put where IMO.


Tell yer story.



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Dee Doo Doo Doo
Dee Dah Dah Dah

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Yellow matter custard
Dripping from a dead dog's eye.
Crabalocker fishwife
Pornographic priestess,
Boy, you been a naughty girl
You let your knickers down.
I am the eggman, they are the eggmen.
I am the walrus, goo goo gajoob.


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Who will end this ancient hatred?
Will the killing to an end?
Who will swallow long injustice?
Take the devil for a countryman

JT is a true genius! Can't wait for another studio album.

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Justin Timberlake?? laugh




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Hal David:

L.A. is a great big freeway
Put a hundred down and buy a car
In a week, maybe two, they'll make you a star
Weeks turn into years, how quick they pass
And all the stars that never were
Are parking cars and pumping gas

genius...


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I'm a Bacharach/David fan myself. A HOUSE IS NOT A HOME, THIS GUY'S IN LOVE. Great stuff!! Have you checked out Bacharach with Elvis Costello? Also, great stuff! Take care. Greg

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The sky above and the mud below...

First time I heard this, it just mesmerized me. Don't know why, but it did.



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from "Like A Lover"
Originally by Dori Caymmi and Nelson Motta, but these English lyrics by Alan & Merilyn Bergman are extremely poetic. (Making sure I give credit where credit's due)

Brilliantly performed by Sergio Mendez and Brazil '66

Like a lover, the morning sun
Slowly rises and kisses you awake
Your smile is soft and fuzzy
As you let it play upon your face
Oh, how I dream I might be like the morning sun to you

Like a lover, the river wind
Sighs and ripples its fingers through your hair
Upon your cheek it lingers
Never having known a sweeter place
Oh, how I dream I might be like the river wind to you

How I envy a cup that knows your lips
Let it be me, my love
And a table that feels your fingertips
Let it be me, let me be your love
Bring an end to the endless days and nights
Without you

Like a lover, the velvet moon
Shares your pillow and watches while you sleep
Its light arrives on tiptoe
Gently taking you in its embrace
Oh, how I dream I might be like the velvet moon to you


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Beautifully crafted lyrics. I love the traditional style of writing. There are some great raw and gritty lyrics but I'll always have a soft spot for the abstract and poetic style! Take care. Greg

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- Kate Wolf on "Shining"

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"The jeweler has a shop on the corner of the boulevard
In the night, in small spectacles, he polishes old coins
He uses spit and cloth and ashes
He makes them shine with ashes
He knows the use of ashes
He worships God with ashes."



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"You ain't a beauty, but eh, you're all right." -- Springsteen, Thunder Road.

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I've been listening to "the Dan" lately. I love their unique style of lyrics. They are truly unique guys. Here's one of their lines I love:


Any world that I'm welcome to is better than the one I come from

Another phrase from the same song:

I'll be ready when my feet touch ground, wherever I come down
And if the folks will have me, then they'll have me

These are some interesting and brilliant dudes!!!

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Ahhh yes, Steely Dan
How could I have missed some of the absolute intricate marvels produced over the years.
Great selection Greg


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At Seventeen

Janis Ian, not 17 at the time, but still at the tender age of 22, penned these amazing lyrics:

I learned the truth at seventeen
That love was meant for beauty queens
In high school girls with clear skinned smiles
Who married young and then retired
The valentines I never knew
The Friday night charades of youth
Were spent on one more beautiful
At seventeen I learned the truth

And those of us with ravaged faces
Lacking in the social graces
Desperately remained at home
Inventing lovers on the phone
Who called to say come dance with me
And murmured vague obscenities
It isn't all it seems, at seventeen

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Great one, Trevor!

How about "The Dutchman" - Michael Smith

The Dutchman's not the kind of man
To keeps his thumb jammed in the dam
That holds his dreams in
But that's a secret that only Margaret knows



If you are unfamiliar with this song, you owe it to yourself to have a listen:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wg3HXhVO3HE

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"They all said Louise was not half bad
It was written on the walls and window shades
And how she'd act the little girl
A deceiver, don't believe her, it's her trade."



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Talk about words to live by from John Prine:

That's the way that the world goes round.
You're up one day, the next you're down.
It's a half an inch of water and you think you're gonna drown.
That's the way that the world goes round.

On a live version he tells the crowd how a girl came up to him and asked him to sing the song about the happy enchilada.
He said he'd never written a song about any kind of enchilada and asked her how it went.
She said:
"It's a happy enchilada and you think you're gonna drown."

Either way works for me smile

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Floyd, thanks for the link. I wasn't familiar with the song. Absolutely brilliant lyrics.

I really like the way Margaret is brought into the song right at the start, but as though we've all known her for years.

I found a live audience version (amongst others) also performed by Steve Goodman,
that was another bonus.

I'll definitely listen again and again.

Cheers

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Probably some of the most memorable lyrics nobody ever knew or understood were those in Louie Louie by The Kingsmen.
Due to the dominant music and slurred words everyone seemed to put their own interpretation to the obscured lyrics.

According to wikipedia :
The Kingsmen's edition was the subject of an FBI investigation about the supposed but non-existent obscenity of the lyrics, an investigation that ended without prosecution.

For the record, the actual lyrics are:

CHORUS:

Louie Louie, oh no
Me gotta go
Aye-yi-yi-yi, I said
Louie Louie, oh baby
Me gotta go

Fine little girl waits for me
Catch a ship across the sea
Sail that ship about, all alone
Never know if I make it home

CHORUS

Three nights and days I sail the sea
Think of girl, constantly
On that ship, I dream she's there
I smell the rose in her hair.

CHORUS

Okay, let's give it to 'em, right now!

GUITAR SOLO

See Jamaica, the moon above
It won't be long, me see me love
Take her in my arms again
Tell her I'll never leave again

CHORUS

Let's take it on outa here now
Let's go!!

Ahhh, the amazing power of muscic!!

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Demain't what he was singin' either.

At this point I believe that he himself may have never known what he sang on that cut...

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Of calamine lotion...

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He ordered Chet's Guitar Course, C.O.D.

He knows A and E and he's workin' on B;

And me and the chimpanzee agree;

That someday soon he'll be;

A Cee-le-bri-tee!

Git it! Git it! Git it!



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This thread got too long to easily search, but whether or not anyone has shared the following Sting line, here's a line that echoes through my head quite often:

"I don't every wanna play the part, of a statistic on a government chart"

Says a lot about a lot of situations where you can choose to stick your neck way out - maybe do something amazing, or much more likely - become a statistic.

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A line that has always stuck with me since my early years in music:

"Give just a little bit more, take a little bit less from each other tonight"

This song was released the year I entered the 1st Civilian Division in 1969.

Carry on....

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Quote:
He ordered Chet's Guitar Course, C.O.D.

He knows A and E and he's workin' on B;

And me and the chimpanzee agree;

That someday soon he'll be;

A Cee-le-bri-tee!

Git it! Git it! Git it!


Just gotta love me some Ray Stevens.


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You're gonna need an ocean
Of calamine lotion...


I didn't learn until the 1970's that "Poison Ivy" was about VD.

After that, all of the lyric made sense to me. ("The minute you start to mess around...")

Brilliant composition by Jerry Lieber and Mike Stoller.

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BTO's "You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet" is also about VD.


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Cat Scratch Fever...

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Totally memorable lines...

'Scuse me while I kiss the sky

I'm wasted and I can't find my way home


Marc Bolan of TRex penned some great ones. From 'Bang a Gong (Get It On)'

You're built like a car you got a hubcap diamond star halo
You're built like a car oh yeah


From 'Rabbit Fighter'

Shady politician in my bed
Tying bolts of lightning to his head

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I am also a big fan of Hal David´s lyrics.
In fact I find it very difficult to pick out
any specific line as they are all more or less
great ! So why not take this line from The Look Of Love:

"The look of love is in your eyes
a look your smile can´t disguise"

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"I've Got A Name"

'Like the fool I am and I'll always be
I've got a dream, I've got a dream'

Recorded by J. Croce
Written by Gimbel & Fox

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Will the sky miss the morning sun,
will the moon miss the stars at night?

An old guy from South Louisiana I know.

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From Something Stupid by Carson and Gaile:

"The time is right, your perfume fills my head, the stars get red
and all the night´s so blue,
and then I go and spoil it all by saying
something stupid like I love you !!!!


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Originally Posted By: dani48

From Something Stupid by Carson and Gaile:

"The time is right, your perfume fills my head, the stars get red
and all the night´s so blue,
and then I go and spoil it all by saying
something stupid like I love you !!!!


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Now there's a blast from the past. I can remember as a kid hearing that song on the am radio of my folks' Pontiac.

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Except wasn't "Something Stupid" kind of creepy in that it was sung by father and daughter?


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Except wasn't "Something Stupid" kind of creepy in that it was sung by father and daughter?


It makes your skin crawl in that context. It's almost as bad as that infamous "sexy" photo of Miley Cyrus with her dad, Billy Ray Cyrus.

Kinda makes you want to hurl.

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Hi, guys !

Funny, but I never thought that those lines
were ment for a father to sing with his daughter ?
I doubt that it was the intention of the lyricists
either ?

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Perhaps we shouldn't be trying to read try to read too, too much into lyrics of a song eh?

Let's not get upset about what I'm sure the composer never, ever, ever intended.

Perhaps Frank was thinking about his wife, and Nancy was thinking about her boyfriend. Ain't that possible? No?

I've listened to that tune innocently for all those years, and now in one sentence you've gone and wrecked it on me. Damn!

Dani, you're on the right track.

Loosen up guys...


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“Something Stupid” was written by C. Carson Parks and he sang it with his wife Gaile Foote:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Somethin%27_Stupid


Frank and Nancy’s version is the most popular and I doubt very very much that they sang it to each other.


PS -I'm still going to enjoy the song!

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Some of my favorites:

If I could only find the words then I would write it all down
If I could only find a voice I would speak

He put the bottle to his head and pulled the trigger

I'll be there for you
These 5 words I say to you
When you breathe I wanna be the air for you

Saying goodbye is never an easy thing
But you never said you'd stay forever

Don't wanna close my eyes
Don't wanna go to sleep
Cuz I'd miss you baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing

(Yes, I love Diane Warren's writing)


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From the musical Guys and Dolls
with music and lyrics by Frank Loesser

"More I Cannot Wish You"

But More I Cannot Wish You
Than to wish you find your love
Your own true love this day
With a sheep's eye
And a lickerish tooth
And a strong arms
To carry you away.

I love this tune and
those wonderful lines especially
as sung by the Singers Unlimited:

http://www.rumormillnews.com/cgi-bin/archive.cgi?read=140630

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Reminds me of THAT'S LIFE:

That's life, that's what the people say
Ridin' high in April, shot down in May
But I don't let it, let it get me down
Cause this old world, she keeps spinnin' round

Sung beautifully by Old Blue Eyes, or if you prefer, "The chairman of the board"

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Sting is a genius.

Now she is gone, leavin' me too soon
I'm as dark as December, I'm as cold as the man in the moon

That's from MERCURY FALLING. If you haven't heard it (song and the album) you should give it a listen. Awesome!!

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How about A HOUSE IS NOT A HOME

I don't remember the exact lyrics but something like:

A chair is still a chair, even when no one's sitting there
But a chair is not a house, and a house is not a home when you're not there

That's the sentiment and logical/emotional flow anyway. Love it!!

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She's no doubt brilliant. Diane Warren frequently occupies the small intersection of the sets "good songs" and "popular songs". UNBREAK MY HEART is great, as is IF YOU ASKED ME TO (simple but beautiful sentiment--"all you have to do is ask me too")

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Have to come in with a little more of "The Dan"

When black Friday comes, gonna stand down by the door
And catch the brave men when they dive from the 14th floor

OR

Daddy don't live in that New York City no more
He can't get tight every night, pass out on the bar room floor
Daddy can't get no fine cigar, but we know you're smokin' where ever you are
Daddy don't live in that New York City no more

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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
How about A HOUSE IS NOT A HOME

I don't remember the exact lyrics but something like:

A chair is still a chair, even when no one's sitting there
But a chair is not a house, and a house is not a home when you're not there

That's the sentiment and logical/emotional flow anyway. Love it!!


Greg

Yes, more genius from Hal David and superbly orchestrated by Burt, written in 1964

A chair is still a chair,
Even when there's one sitting there
But a chair is not a house,
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
To hold you tight
And no one there
You can kiss good-night

I just dug out one of my Bacharach & David Original Song albums (ca. 1970) to check the lyrics. The album contains:
- Wives and Lovers
- Magic Moments
- In Times Like These
- Make It Easy On Yourself
- Loving Is A Way Of Living
- A House Is Not a Home
- The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance
- Blue On Blue
- The Story Of My Life
- With Open Arms

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Trev, you missed my favorite 2 songs from that writing team. Not in that book maybe, but I'll call them bonus tracks.

- Anyone Who Had A Heart
- Walk On By


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Oh yes. Anyone Who Had A Heart. Classic interspersing of time signatures, I think in some places at every measure.

And Walk On By, another piece of genius writing, I still play it from time to time. Thanks for the memory jolt smile


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There are far too many great lyrics to list, but there's one that always makes me smile. It's an acute autobiographical observation from Boy George's "Karma Chameleon": "I'm a man; without conviction".


Lots by Pete Sinfield, particularly when with King Crimson.


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"The only time you're good to me, baby, is when I cash my check."

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From Bon Jovi

I'll be there for you
These five words I swear to you
When you breathe, I wanna be the air for you
I'll be there for you
I'd live and I'd die for you
I'd steal the sun from the sky for you
Words can't say what love can do
I'll be there for you


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My personal favorite currently is
Snakin' my way thru the grass

/just trying to find your way
//Barry threw that into a song we are working on the other night, and I thought it was a great line ..


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Perhaps my all-time favorite.

Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
Fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your hometown
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way

Tired of lying in the sunshine, staying home to watch the rain
You are young and life is long, and there is time to kill today
And then one day you find ten years have got behind you
No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun

And you run, and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again
The sun is the same in a relative way but you're older
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death

Every year is getting shorter, never seem to find the time
Plans that either come to naught or half a page of scribbled lines
Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way
The time is gone, the song is over, thought I'd something more to say

Home, home again
I like to be here when I can
And when I come home cold and tired
It's good to warm my bones beside the fire

Far away across the field
The tolling of the iron bell
Calls the faithful to their knees
To hear the softly spoken magic spells

Just a couple of the many from Bobby D. I like.

Johnny's in the basement, mixin' up the medicine
I'm on the pavement, thinkin' about the government
The man in a trench coat, badge out, laid off
Says he's got a bad cough, wants to get it paid off
Look out kid, it's somethin' you did
God knows when, but you're doin' it again
You better duck down the alleyway, looking for a new friend
The man in the coon-skin cap in a pig pen
Wants 11 dollar bills – you only got 10


The lamppost stands with folded arms, its iron claws attached
To curbs 'neath holes where babies wail, though it shadows metal badge
All and all can only fall with a crashing but meaningless blow
No sound ever comes from the Gates of Eden

One I wrote that I like
Setting on the corner of a dead-end street drinking from a paper bag
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Mine is...

Hello, Darlin'

First time I saw Conway Twitty, he came on stage and started with that song. I was a 15 year old kid - what an impression it made.

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