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Bob, "It don't matter What other people say When you're young and in love And livin' for today" Words to live by.  You ol' romantic, you! A fun song. Your singer sounds like Bryan White. The chorus melody and harmonies are sweeeeeet. Cool hook line. "Big Time, Big Time, Big Time..." That's hard to get outta your head! "Big Time, Big Time, Big Time..." "Big Time, Big Time, Big Time..." "Big Time, Big Time, Big Time..." "Big Time, Big Time, Big Time..." see?... fj fj- Thanks. I really love Brian's voice. He's played with some top people - he was in Marty Stuart's band, and has worked with Pam Tillis, Dolly, and a bunch of others. He really brought the song to life. Regards, Bob
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Terrific song Bob! And Brian really sells it.
I did miss a few more guitar RIFFS (not a solo) in there besides just the start and end but that in no way reflects on the song.
One of the best written country songs I've heard on here.
Love it.
Josie Josie, Thanks for the kind words. I had intended to pepper some guitar fills in there, but I'm not as adept at BIAB/RB as some, and I finally gave up.  Regards, Bob
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Hi Bob ...
tghe key word has already been said ... commercial! And like Herb said, there are many terrific songs on the boards here ... but the commercial aspect isn't what all them are working for. Some just want to write a damned good song ... and they do ... but this one is about as commercial as anything I've heard on the boards in the almost-year we've been here.
Congrats on a great write and nice mic. You demo guy did you good. Whatever you paid him, you got more than your money's worth, I would speculate.
As soon as the vocal kicked in and we hears a couple of lines, Di and I looked at each other and said "If Nashville doesn't like this, their heads are far beyond where the sun doesn't shine!"
Standing "O" from the two of us .... still clapping!
Alan & Di Alan & Di, Thanks for listening and the nice remarks. We're hoping it's commercial as well.  Getting a cut on an outside song is next to impossible, so we might have to go to town and start singing it on the streets. In the Springtime, of course! Regards, Bob
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Herb,
Thanks for listening, but the song is being pitched as is.
Regards,
Bob
I wish you all the best with this... Great song.
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Bob,
Who is playing the guitar at the beginning.
What a voice, Brian, and then the harmonies.
This sounds real good loudish!!
thoroughly enjoyed
Alyn
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Herb -
Thanks. It's making the rounds.
Alyn-
Thanks. Yeah, Brian is brilliant. The guitar in the intro is good Old Brent Mason.
Regards,
Bob
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Per several suggestions, I remixed this song this morning and added some fills. Nothing I can do about the intro unless I cut it really short.
Thanks to all for the suggestions to improve this.
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Bob
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So I've been listening to a bunch of the user showcase songs and wanted to say I think this is a stand out. I get the thread is a few months old, but I don't feel it doesn't deserve praise just because of that! Great job all the way around. Of course there are some things that could be tweaked, but show me a song on here that isn't that way. Now for my question....what ever happened with this? Anything? I think there is some pretty good potential here! If you want critique, let me know. I don't like just throwing it out there unless asked for. All for good of course!
Chad (Hope that makes it easier)
TEMPO TANTRUM: What a lead singer has when they can't stay in time.
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So I've been listening to a bunch of the user showcase songs and wanted to say I think this is a stand out. I get the thread is a few months old, but I don't feel it doesn't deserve praise just because of that! Great job all the way around. Of course there are some things that could be tweaked, but show me a song on here that isn't that way. Now for my question....what ever happened with this? Anything? I think there is some pretty good potential here! If you want critique, let me know. I don't like just throwing it out there unless asked for. All for good of course! Thanks for the kind remarks. The song is making the rounds in Nashville in search of a publisher, and has received generally favorable reviews. It did make the “Ones To Watch” list in January on the N.S.A.I. “E.A.R.S' report, and I got a personal critique from Bart Herbison, the Executive Director of NSAI. I received a lot of valid suggestions, and am aware that it could be greatly improved, but I feel that as a simple song demo it is adequate. If nothing happens with the song, we will still be performing it on the 2015 90 dB Dive Bar World Tour, where it will be heard by tens of people. Regards, Bob
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Wow! That's GREAT news! I am all around impressed by your writing. It's very similar to what I am trying to do. I'm excited to hopefully post a few things for the forum's review. Would you mind keeping us update when you hear anything? I am always curious the process AFTER the song is written as I am about the writing. Do you have any more explanation of the song itself? Whey you chose what you did to go here or there? Also, the lyric writing is pretty awesome, I must say! Your use of internal chime is truly first rate! Now... If nothing happens with the song, we will still be performing it on the 2015 90 dB Dive Bar World Tour, where it will be heard by tens of people. You've hear the expression lol/laugh out loud...I actually did! Thanks my friend!
Chad (Hope that makes it easier)
TEMPO TANTRUM: What a lead singer has when they can't stay in time.
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Hi Bob, Top notch commercial potential . A great write. Nice progression in the chorus. Mix is solid. And the vocals are fantastic. Where did you get him? +1 from me. Guenter What can I add??? This is so professional, catches on from the first notes! Just the right Mix, and then I hope it hits big time Fred
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Wow! That's GREAT news! I am all around impressed by your writing. It's very similar to what I am trying to do. I'm excited to hopefully post a few things for the forum's review. Would you mind keeping us update when you hear anything? I am always curious the process AFTER the song is written as I am about the writing. Do you have any more explanation of the song itself? Whey you chose what you did to go here or there? Also, the lyric writing is pretty awesome, I must say! Your use of internal chime is truly first rate! Now... If nothing happens with the song, we will still be performing it on the 2015 90 dB Dive Bar World Tour, where it will be heard by tens of people. You've hear the expression lol/laugh out loud...I actually did! Thanks my friend! Thanks for the kind words. If anybody picks the song up, I'll let you know. I will spare you the rejections. The song itself: I set out to write the most commercial piece of &^$! I could, and BIAB allowed me to approximate that.  After the song is written: You start pitching it to everybody with a pulse, have tons of people tell you how to re-write it, or pitch their songs to you, etc. Then, if you're lucky, someone contacts you and offers to sign the song, then sends you a contract that puts your attorney in hysterics of laughter. It's quite fun, actually. Regards, Bob
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Hi Bob, Top notch commercial potential . A great write. Nice progression in the chorus. Mix is solid. And the vocals are fantastic. Where did you get him? +1 from me. Guenter What can I add??? This is so professional, catches on from the first notes! Just the right Mix, and then I hope it hits big time Fred Fred - Thanks for the kind words and good wishes. Regards, Bob
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Sounds so smooth Bob. Could listen to it anytime.
Hope it gets the attention it deserves. Cheers.
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Sounds so smooth Bob. Could listen to it anytime.
Hope it gets the attention it deserves. Cheers. Thanks for the kind remarks Richard. Regards, Bob
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After the song is written: You start pitching it to everybody with a pulse, have tons of people tell you how to re-write it, or pitch their songs to you, etc. Then, if you're lucky, someone contacts you and offers to sign the song, then sends you a contract that puts your attorney in hysterics of laughter. It's quite fun, actually. You left out the best part... after you sign the song..... you wait............then you wait some more....... I'd be curious to know what Bart said.
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Bart liked the song, but suggested some major changes. Like cutting the steel guitar and dobro. Problem is, there isn't any steel guitar or dobro on the recording.
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Great Song Bob, I love everything about this and the vocalist sure does the song justice. Great lyrics and good melody line, and the mix is good too.
I sure hope that somebody picks up on it for you.
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Bart liked the song, but suggested some major changes. Like cutting the steel guitar and dobro. Problem is, there isn't any steel guitar or dobro on the recording. WOW.... I literally laughed out loud....I've always been suspicious of those so-called hit writers who work at NSAI and the other services offered in this business....and the advice they give.... one says up, the next one says down.....the next one says white, the next one says black.... You have to wonder sometimes did they even listen to the song. It's pretty obvious there's no dobro or steel in that. As you recall, the only comments I had was to add some polish and shorten the intro.... the song was mighty fine..... mighty fine. Bob....Was that a one on one mentor or a basic review? I did a one on one mentoring with RC Bannon on a song when he was the president out there.... We discussed 2 songs and he was telling me MAJOR changes and re-writes were needed on the first two.... structural stuff...lyrical stuff...... then with about 12 minutes remaining in the 1 on 1, I asked him to review one more song quickly. After he listened, unlike the first two, he appeared to really like the song and suggested a few changes.... the main one being get another singer who can "sell the song convincingly"... and so I did. Made a few of the other changes.... minor things that he suggested like cut the solo out and do a simple quick turnaround back to the chorus, and sent it back in. The only problem was....well, RC wasn't on the list of reviewers.... he did mentoring but not reviews. So it was a tossup.... I picked a country song reviewer and sent it in with some basic info on what RC had suggested and what I did.... I was expecting a decent review and perhaps a recommendation....at least a "ones to watch" posting..... nope... I'm glad I didn't make a bet on that.... because this new review tore that song a new one.... up one side and down the other....I've gotten better reviews from rough first drafts than I did from that polished up and re-worked song.... FYI the song in question I'm referring to is Come & Go (Rose Version) Kinda makes you just want to throw your hands up and pull your hair out from the pure frustration
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Bob,
Well done. Very enjoyable. Great BGVs.
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