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#282513 - 01/29/15 12:14 PM [User Showcase] Melancholy Blues
Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 Veteran Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia	Just another love song guys. Please let me know what your thoughts are. Written with BB, Rt mixed with reaper. Vocals myself. https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob/melancholy-blues Melancholy Blues I'm not complete with out you. I cant succeed you know its true. With this lonesome melancholy blue. Last night laid awake I saw a vision of your face. I'm so weary and not sure what to do. Chorus You got me thinking while I'm in this state. What else I'm gonna do. Though my feelings may seem misplaced. I cant seem to live without you. I need to find some peace of mind. Stand up tall and keep on trying. For my baby feels Ive done her some wrong. I count the hours since we've been apart. I cant control my aching heart. Though the minuets keep on rolling past. Chorus You got me thinking while I'm in this state. What else I'm gonna do. I'm not complete with out you. I cant succeed you know its true. With this lonesome melancholy blue. I'm so lonesome melancholy and blue. I'm so lonesome melancholy and blue. I'm so lonesome melancholy and blue. _________________________ https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.
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#282554 - 01/29/15 06:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 10/25/08 Posts: 7691 Loc: Winston-Salem, NC Pat Marr Veteran Registered: 10/25/08 Posts: 7691 Loc: Winston-Salem, NC	Hi Rob, I like this a lot! It reminds me somewhat of the Sons of the Pioneers... Nice job on the harmonies. I especially like the chord progression and the way the dobro plays against it. You won't find an instrument much more lonesome and melancholy than the dobro, so it was a good choice for the song.
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#282561 - 01/29/15 06:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 04/07/13 Posts: 4979 Loc: South Carolina Charlie Fogle Veteran Registered: 04/07/13 Posts: 4979 Loc: South Carolina	Another nice one. Enjoyed it a lot. Charlie _________________________ BiaB Ultra Pak+ 2019:RB 2019 Build 3. Dell Inspiron AIO Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, 7th Generation AMD A9-9425 Processor Five Core 3100 Mhz and 16GB DDR4 Memory.
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#282594 - 01/30/15 05:12 AM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 04/03/09 Posts: 6328 Guitarhacker Veteran Registered: 04/03/09 Posts: 6328	This is my favorite song from you so far. I like the interesting chord progression in the verses. Just a note: when typing the words, try grouping the lines. What I mean is, place all 5 lines in the verse together with no spaces. Stack all 4 in the chorus the same way. It makes it easier to grasp at a glance where one is in the song. Quote: Melancholy Blues I'm not complete with out you. I cant succeed you know its true. With this lonesome melancholy blue. Last night laid awake I saw a vision of your face. I'm so weary and not sure what to do. Chorus You got me thinking while I'm in this state. What else I'm gonna do. Though my feelings may seem misplaced. I cant seem to live without you. just a minor nit ^^^^.... good job on the song. _________________________ You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.com Add nothing that adds nothing to the music
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#282602 - 01/30/15 05:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 06/22/12 Posts: 2868 Loc: Karlsruhe, Germany boehm Veteran Registered: 06/22/12 Posts: 2868 Loc: Karlsruhe, Germany	Hi Rob, I like this. Nice vocals and harmonies. There's a little Elvis vibe in it. Nice chord progression. Guenter _________________________ http://www.21d.de/ Latest Song: What You Desire
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#282664 - 01/30/15 04:11 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 12/08/09 Posts: 213 Loc: California Carolyne Apprentice Registered: 12/08/09 Posts: 213 Loc: California	Very nice. I can also hear the Elvis vibe. Love the harmonies. -Carolyne
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#282677 - 01/30/15 05:36 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 10/31/08 Posts: 14881 Loc: Australia Noel96 Veteran Registered: 10/31/08 Posts: 14881 Loc: Australia	Hi Rob, I enjoyed the listen a lot. You've really been coming up with some great songs! This is right up there with the best of them. Regards, Noel _________________________ LINKS TO MY BIAB/RB SONGS audios on Soundcloud videos on VIMEO
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#282686 - 01/30/15 06:28 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 05/30/08 Posts: 4414 Sundance Veteran Registered: 05/30/08 Posts: 4414	Good stuff Rob. Really nice flow. Enjoyed it very much! As an aside and this is meant only to help you - posters get more listens and comments when they post one or two songs at a time and let those run their course before posting another. It's easy to get excited and post five, ten or fifteen songs on the board in a week but that's not the best way to get those songs heard by the most people. Josie _________________________ Josie My Song Walking Streets Of Gold passes 5K Youtube views! My Songs My Videos
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#282698 - 01/30/15 08:55 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 Veteran Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia	Thank you all for your comments and advice. I will take you suggestions on board. Thanks again. Rob _________________________ https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.
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#282703 - 01/30/15 09:25 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 09/27/10 Posts: 2629 Loc: Sacramento, California dcuny Veteran Registered: 09/27/10 Posts: 2629 Loc: Sacramento, California	I love how expressive your singing is. You're great fun to listen to. And yes, it's got that "Elvis" vibe. Thanks for posting! _________________________ -- David Cuny My virtual singer development blog Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?
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#282736 - 01/31/15 05:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 6937 Loc: Florida floyd jane Veteran Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 6937 Loc: Florida	A good one, Rob. Cool song... and very nicely put together. Terrific vocals and harmonies. An enjoyable listen. floyd _________________________ 125+ BIAB Songs
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#282802 - 01/31/15 02:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Pat Marr]
Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 12041 Loc: Hamlin NY MarioD Veteran Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 12041 Loc: Hamlin NY	Originally Posted By: Pat Marr Hi Rob, I like this a lot! It reminds me somewhat of the Sons of the Pioneers... Nice job on the harmonies. I especially like the chord progression and the way the dobro plays against it. You won't find an instrument much more lonesome and melancholy than the dobro, so it was a good choice for the song. A BIG +1 _________________________ Isn't it odd that 8 glasses of water a day seems impossible but 8 beers in 3 hours is easy! 64 bit Win 10 Pro - the latest BiaB and RB - Roland Octa-Capture audio interface - a ton of software and some hardware.
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#282845 - 01/31/15 07:50 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 4750 Loc: Davis, CA Greg Johnson Veteran Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 4750 Loc: Davis, CA	I also hear the Elvis! It's that tight vibrato at the end of the phrase that's very signature. Vocal is very natural. I love the chord progression-simple but infectious. This is also my favorite of yours, although by next week you may top it! At this rate, you're going to have a greatest hits CD out by March first. Great job! Take care. Greg
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#282860 - 01/31/15 10:54 PM [User Showcase] Re: Melancholy Blues [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 Veteran Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 2682 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia	Hi I have sort of unwittingly styles my self on Dean Martin Roy Orbison (No high notes) some Elvis the Beatles and Ricky Nelson. I sort of naturally sing the way I do but not really trying to copy either, if that makes scene. Rob _________________________ https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.
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