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#282655 - 01/30/15 03:33 PM [User Showcase] All goes down the drain
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This another one I wrote that took a while to grow on me.
Really didn't like it at first.

Please feel free to comment.
Rob


https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob/all-goes-down-the-drain-1

All goes down the drain.

I can seem to get you offa my mind.
You have a way of making me waste my time.

Chorus
I feel light showers that quench my thirst.
But all goes down the drain.

I'm not sure how I should feel,
But its enough to send a man insane.

When you near you make my heart jump around.
I'm struck deaf and struggle to hear a sound.

Ive got my concerns about my mental health
and things you make me do.

You got me walking on the tightest rope.
And got mt feeling so blue.

Fill

Chorus
I feel light showers that quench my thirst.
But all goes down the drain.

I'm not sure how I should feel,
But its enough to send a nan insane.

Stay away and leave well enough alone.
Stop your texting don't even pick up the phone.

I went to the postman to change my address.
And hide away from you.

next thing I know your knocking at my door.
What else can a desperate man do?

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#282708 - 01/30/15 10:15 PM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: Rob4580]
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"Change my address" seems a bit rushed, and the guitar solo sounds like it's coming from another room.

Other than that, it's all good. Nice listen, thanks for posting!
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#282727 - 01/31/15 04:42 AM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: Rob4580]
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I think it's a good song. Everything works well except as David pointed out, the solo needs to come up in the mix. Enjoyed it.


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#282752 - 01/31/15 07:00 AM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: Rob4580]
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Hi Rob,

here it is again: this Elvis vibe.
Enjoyed it.

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#282801 - 01/31/15 02:30 PM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: Rob4580]
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Gossip Magazine headline reads "Elvis has been sited on the PGMusic site"!

Except for the lead lines you really did a great job on this one.

The lead should be louder.
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#282848 - 01/31/15 07:58 PM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: Rob4580]
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Fun feel! You have a great way of making the songs feel live and spontaneous. The vocal.....well, there's the king again. Enjoyed the listen! Take care. Greg

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#282859 - 01/31/15 10:48 PM [User Showcase] Re: All goes down the drain [Re: dcuny]
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Originally Posted By: dcuny
"Change my address" seems a bit rushed, and the guitar solo sounds like it's coming from another room.

Other than that, it's all good. Nice listen, thanks for posting!


Hi David I agree with the above.
I have found when you right a song you still have to learn it to get it right.
I agree with the rushing and and the solo sounding in the next room.

Rob

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