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Beautiful writing, Greg... as always. You put thoughtful words together in a totally natural way. Always interesting, never contrived and certainly never mundane.
And then...wrap that in a gorgeous melody - that can be described in that same way...
Excellent production - the combination of drums, bass and organ - what a perfect soundscape for this lyric... Shades of JB ("These Days")...
The vocal sounds great. The guitar screams! (Is that an RT???)
Awesome listen in every regard.
floyd Thanks so much Floyd for your extremely generous comments! I hesitated writing it because the progression was common and the tempo was about the same as THESE DAYS but I thought I could capture a different vibe with the melody. The guitar was an RT-I goosed it with the Sonnox Inflator plug which can be great on certain instruments. I'll post the RTs-been crazy busy lately since my son started middle school. Take care. Greg
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My first post when to forum purgatory so here it goes again.
I really like this one. The vocals, lyrics and mix were spot on but that guitar tone and lead put it over the top for me.
If I heard this in a record, oops I'm old, CD store I would have purchased it then and there.
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Just catching up - had a short holiday - missed this one. Loved the use of the descending bass line. Excellent song and agree with all the prior comments.
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Hi Greg,
very beautiful song! Great lyrics and awesome
performance. I like the lead a lot.
Very enjoyable listen.
Guenter Thanks so much for the kind words Guenter! Love to hear from you (comments and tunes). Thanks so much for your consistent support. Take care. Greg
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Hi Greg,
This is a very nice song with a cool chord progression and beautiful chorus.
Yes, we also would like to know about the lead guitar: Is it an RT?
Rob and Anne-Marie Thanks R and AM. Yes it's an RT (still have to post the RTs). Thanks again for the kind words. Always love to hear what you guys are doing! Take care. Greg
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Nice work.
Loved the vocals. The music has a Procol Harum feel to it with the B3...
I like the lyrics....insightful.
This time, I won't tell you what I don't like.
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The lead guitar.... just to harsh and wild for the feel of the song.
The strange progression... one chord in the chorus..... but I guess it could grow on me...
What's up with the ending? Sounded like you let BB do the ending for you.
All in all, A good write and a good job.
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I like the song and the story behind the song. Nice job on the mixing but just a little harsh to my ears but it may just be SoundCloud's conversion.
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I really enjoyed this song. With the background story, I imagined sitting on a beach and examining my life.
Exquisite lyrics, and I really enjoyed the lead guitar. That was from BIAB?!!?
Overall, a very enjoyable song that will fit comfortably in a soothing and reflective playlist.
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Great song! Very strong lyrics and amen to the hook'still ain't found it yet'.
Haunting guitar. Cheers. Thanks RichMac. Really appreciate your consistent support. A compliment on lyrics from you is truly appreciated as you are a very colorful writer. Take care. Greg
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Hi Greg.
Beautiful song.
Great arrangement, performance and mix.
Excellent vocal delivery and wonderful lead guitar.
Loved it all.
ROG. Thanks so much ROG. I wish that were me on guitar! Really loved your last post! Take care. Greg
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Greg,
The others have said it all, as this song is a good example of your impeccable standards.
What RTs did you use to produce this?
enjoyed the listen a lot!!
Alyn
THanks Alyn. Your kind words mean a lot to me. I still have to post the RTs (been drowning in life lately). Just listed to Train Surfer today. Killer!! Take care. Greg
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What a cool song. Great sounding track Greg!
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Hi Greg!
I like the sound of the organ in the background and the lead guitar. Good lyrics, band, production and vocals. Enjoyed!
Sonny Thanks Sonny! Really enjoying your consistent presence on the forum (as a listener and songwriter). THanks for the support! Take care. Greg
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Greg, A great write. Fantastic lyrical composition! A vocal that is again way up on the top shelf. Nice guitar effect. Some great editing if that was a real track. Everything is so good with this I don't know where to start or finish. You keep raising the bar. I am in awe at the moment. Superb! Tom Thanks so much for the kind words Tom! And, I can truthfully say, I am in awe of what you're doing lately. You're on a roll!! Take care. Greg
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"So I searched outside the reel, for something that feels"
Wow! A great snippet from an amazing write.
The vocals and production are, as always, high bar
and it all sounds wonderful on our monitors.
Like others, we'd like to know more about the
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J&B Thanks J and B. Much appreciated!! Keep doin' what you're doin'!! Take care. Greg
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I like this song.
There's a great guitar in it.
Your voice goes well on the song.
Nice sound in the background
Sergio
Thanks Sergio! It's a BIAB guitar. You're playing some great axe yourself! Take care. Greg
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Greg, This is an outstanding listen. Your melody, lyrics, arrangement, performance and mix are outstanding. I was particularly drawn to your lyrics. Trevor has already mentioned the "slips like water through the net" simile. That grabbed me, too. What I found most powerful, though, was your third A section... Sometimes I feel like I should have been born in another time
Like a strange word endlessly searching for one that rhymes
There are times, in the distance I see, some part of me
In a place where I can’t get
So I still ain’t found it yet To me, this was a very inspired pinnacle of verse development in the song. You really have a gift for mixing a palette of words and painting a masterpiece. Overall... fantastic! Thanks Noel!! That was a very flattering review. I love the thought you put into listening. You have been doing some great stuff lately! Take care. Greg Regards, Noel
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Your preamble/backstory kills me, it sounds just like something I'd say! First thing that hits me is how well the bass lines move the song forward, the guitar (your playing?) is very tasteful and drives everything. There's a hint of These Days in the verses and the bridge part is just a beautiful melody. The best compliment that I can give is that when I listen to it I think about how I'd like to record a version of it, maybe like a Ryan Adams acoustic thang. Listened a second time to appreciate the really good lyrics.
Really enjoyed, maybe both of our songs will show up on Fargo's soundtrack next season.
Kenny Very high praise indeed Kenny!! I would love to hear you cover it. I may have overdone it on the arrangement. Loving your stuff!! Take care. Greg
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Greg, Better late than never. This is really good stuff. I particularly liked: "Some may find their peace in their mother earth Or salvation and strength in their savior’s birth But with my answer, I’ve never been blessed, it’s illusive I guess Slips like water through the net Cause I still ain’t found it yet." I hear some embryonic Brian Wilson in there. Ah, how I miss California.  Regards, Bob Thanks so much for the kind words Bob! Loved your last post!! Take care. Greg
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My first post when to forum purgatory so here it goes again.
I really like this one. The vocals, lyrics and mix were spot on but that guitar tone and lead put it over the top for me.
If I heard this in a record, oops I'm old, CD store I would have purchased it then and there.
Wow, what a great compliment!! I too still think of "records". Those were the days! You've been on a roll lately! Take care. Greg
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