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Like the other couple of songs before this one, "June 10" also came about from exercises that Pat Pattison made available at his seminar in Melbourne earlier this year. It's only the second blues song I've ever written. I'm still very much a novice in this genre. I thought I'd use AABA format and a traditional blues lyric approach in the A-sections. [Link no longer valid] All comments welcome. Hope you enjoy, Noel BIAB InfoStyle: _BLSHUFF.STY RealTracks 420: Bass, Electric, Blues Sw 120 RealTracks 425: Organ, B3, Background Blues Sw 120 RealTracks 421: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Blues Sw 120 RealTracks 585: Guitar, Resophonic, Rhythm Blues Muddy Sw 120 RealTracks 383: Guitar, Slide, Soloist Blues Sw 120 RealDrums: BluesShuffleHard^1-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Ride LyricsJune 10©2015 Words and music by Noel Adams. All rights reserved.June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue But your eyes refuse to see sunshine 'cause your heart is hurt and confused Why go, why grab her bags and up and fly away Why go, why grab her bags and up and fly away Like a thief she stole tomorrow and left you stranded in yesterday She was a sunrise A new sunny day You were glad, excited A pup ready to play When she wrapped her arms around you and filled the world with light There were no more lonely days Not a single awful night but then she left you Without a word She left you June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue But your eyes refuse to see sunshine 'cause your heart is hurt and confused [instrumental] She was a sunrise A new sunny day You were glad, excited A pup ready to play When she wrapped her arms around you and filled the world with light There were no more lonely days Not a single awful night but then she left you Without a word She left you June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue But your eyes refuse to see sunshine 'cause your heart is hurt and confused Your eyes refuse to see sunshine 'cause your heart is angry, hurt, embarrassed and bruised
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Excellent job Noel!! This has a great vibe to it. I love the idea of a song title being a date. There are some really good lines and images in this, and your vocal/mix are outstanding. You may be one of the forum's great blues men. Really impressive! Take care. Greg
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You got a good groove goin' there Noel. Really liked the lyrics.
Very easy to listen to this one for sure.
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Hi Noel,
Although you're a novice in this genre, you've done a very good job.
It's very bluesy. Good lyrics and vocals.
We love the chorus!
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Excellent job Noel!! This has a great vibe to it. I love the idea of a song title being a date. There are some really good lines and images in this, and your vocal/mix are outstanding. You may be one of the forum's great blues men. Really impressive! Take care. Greg Hey Greg, Thanks from passing through. I appreciate the feedback and the vote of confidence! I'll never be in the same league as the great J&B nor Tom Adams but it was fun playing around with this. BIAB makes it all so very easy. I have to hand it to Pat Pattison, he's really taken me out of my comfort zone this year! Regards, Noel
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You got a good groove goin' there Noel. Really liked the lyrics.
Very easy to listen to this one for sure.
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Thanks Trev. It's always good to see you drop in. Appreciate the visit and taking time to have a listen. All the best, Noel
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Hi Noel,
Although you're a novice in this genre, you've done a very good job.
It's very bluesy. Good lyrics and vocals.
We love the chorus! Hi Rob and Anne-Maree, I hope that all is sailing along well for you both. Thank you for having a listen to "June 10". I appreciate the positive feedback. All the best to you both, Noel
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Hi Noel,
I really like the rhythm guitar and the B3 comes across nicely. Very nice blues song and I enjoyed it a lot. Your writing and your vocals are excellent.
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I call this jazz blues and I am a huge fan of jazz blues and I must say that you did it more than justice. Your instrumentation, vocals, lyrics and mix is spot on.
Excellent song!
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HI Noel ...
We loved it! Jazzy Blues ... great genre. For the freshman effort, this sure sounds terrific! That walking 4/4 bass drives this puppy. Wow ... super! As always great mix and delivery. Cool!
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Noel,
What a strange idea to have a date as a song title! and I must admit my ears were confused at the mention of blues and then the listen.
Interesting listen, more jazzy than blues IMHO
up to your normal high standards
and still humming the tune in my head
have a good Christmas down under
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Hey noel. That is GREAT. One of the best of yours that I have heard (however I may have been missing out on some other gray stuff in my absence). You voice sounds so gentle and suits the mood of the song.
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Noel, I like it a lot! The vocal is perfect for this easy slide along minor blues. The bass sounds superb. The B3 comes in nicely and the slide solo is well edited. That is one real track that I have found hard to get right but you nailed it. Your overall production chops are on full display here. Nice going. Tom
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Hi Noel,
I like the arrangement with the walking bass, rhythm guitar and the B3. Your writing and your vocals are excellent.
I enjoyed it a lot.
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Noel,
"June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue"
Love that line!
I like the write throughout.
Excellent band and an excellent mix. Nice energy in the vocal!
AS Tom said, Awesome job in getting that slide guy to pay attention to what he was doing!!! (not easy)
Well done!
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Very cool tune. Loved the lyric and vocal. Has a great feel to it
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hi noel great peace here love your stuff excellent job thanks eric
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Very enjoyable song.
Great melody in it.
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Whoa!!! Noel the blues man...and with a great twist with the two structures. Like floyd mentioned "June 10, you say the day is looking yellow and blue" is a great line as is the title from that line. And it's joined by many more cool lines. You did a superb job with the RT's. And we definitely pay attention to that stuff  The slide couldn't be any better -- it well complements the vocal. And the vocal? "Novice" or not you have an instinctive feel for the phrasing and the key is perfect. We love musical surprises and this one was superb! A tip of the fedora to you... J&B
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Terrific Noel! One of your best in every regard and your vocal was also outstanding. I love the Buble style and you nailed it.
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