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https://soundcloud.com/user-108834131/cry-hurtHi all, I hope this song reflects a bit of an upward curve in me using BiaB with my songwriting, my first posting being Midi only, here its all RTs. My friend Mel kindly added the guitar overlay Style Med Pop 16ths with piano 1603 Bass Electric pop 16ths 1610 Piano Acoustic Rhythm pop 16ths Real drums Nashville even 16^5- Hi Hat 1606 Guitar acoustic strumming 1608 Guitar High strung Acoustic Rhythm 1599 Guitar Electric Rhythm 887 Piano Acoustic solo Sung in Bm at 93 bpm I hope there is enough clarity in my singing to depict the lyrics, if not I will post them Again, thank you for my 1st posting welcome. Paddy
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A nice song sounds good - nice guitar fills by Mel. Liked it when the vocals were doubled - made the vocal stand out more. A pretty melody.
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Nice song, great guitar too
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Sounds really good, Paddy.
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Hi Paddy,
nice song.
Enjoyable listen.
Posting the lyrics is never a mistake.
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Well, we liked your previous post, but this one we like even better!
Some very nice twists in the chord progression. The doubling of the vocals in the chorus parts works very good.
Mel did a marvelous job with the electric guitar!
Rob & Anne-Marie
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This is a well written and performed song. Enjoyed my listen. Nice arrangement and mix.
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Good song! I enjoyed this!
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Thanks Boehm, you are correct, posting the lyrics does allow the listeners to be closer, and feel more connected with a song
So Below: ‘Cry Hurt’ © Paddy G 2015
Hurt is just a four letter word when penciled to paper
A forgiven word in a line you can rub it away
But hurt can be a lonely place a branding iron that leaves no trace
But sears the heart deep inside forever
For tears aren’t always briny water you wipe away with happy laughter
Sometimes those tears just mean lonely
For tears can spring from a deeper well
When words can’t change or break the spell
And you know that your love has gone forever
So that is why I’m here I am lonely tonight, tonight the only words I know cry Hurt
Hurt is such a timeless place you try all ways to fill the space
With memories, a thousand lines now broken
So that is why I’m here I am lonely tonight, tonight the only words I know cry hurt
Without you by my side I’m lonely tonight, tonight
All my memories cry hurt ,, Oh hurt
Last edited by PaddyG; 04/29/16 08:09 AM.
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Thank you all:
Peter F DGA Floyd Boehm RnAM Charlie Fogle David Snyder
Songwriting I believe is a tough journey of feedback, and inspiration.
Therefore the encouragement from yourselves was so welcome
Paddy G
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Really nice Paddy!! Very sweet poetry in this. Your friend Mel played some sweet licks-worked perfectly! Such a sweet listen!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks Greg
Mel says thanks as well, He introduced me to BiaB and I will be eternally grateful to him for doing so.
Paddy G
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Hi Paddy,
As Greg said, your lyrics here are very poetic and touching. You have a real knack for appealing to whatever shred of decent humanity is left inside me.
If the sentiments expressed in your songs are more than just the necessary lyrics to accompany your music.. if they represent the things you think about and reveal who you are, then I'd have to say I not only like your songs, but I also like the person who writes your songs.
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Nice song, good production.
Well sung and mixed.
Sergio
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Well, we liked your previous post, but this one we like even better!
Some very nice twists in the chord progression. The doubling of the vocals in the chorus parts works very good.
Mel did a marvelous job with the electric guitar!
Rob & Anne-Marie
Ditto re the above comments. Also with what Greg said about the poetic nature of the lyric. And, great first post with RT's. Sounds like you've been at it for quite a while. Nice mix! J&B
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Thank you Pat Marr, your inspirational, you are pure oxygen for a lyrical heart
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Thank you Pat Marr, your inspirational, you are pure oxygen for a lyrical heart
Paddy G
even your replies are poetic!
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Great effort Paddy. Your music is encouraging.
Really nice.
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