Hi Rob, This is a very good song.
I had no problem with the intro but with a little polish the ending might be improved, although it isn’t too bad as it stands now.
I would suggest that you bring up your vocals just a tad. You have a fantastic voice, I’m jealous, so it should be more out front IMHO.
Great job and two thumbs up.
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