This is really nice. I really like the feel of the song. Mix is really well done (with exceptions I'll mention later). Bass is balanced well. I can hear the snare, ride, hats, well.
I love the chorus - great melody and feel. vocals are excellent! you have a great voice for this music.
Love the organ (I might bring that up in the mix a tad!)
now what I don't like as much:
needs less reverb. This one isan't quite as bad as the other of yours listened to, but it's still over done. everything has too much on it.
I'd like to hear more thump out of the kick and the toms.
Your music is very very good, your vocals are excellent, your lyrics and songwriting is excellentt. I think you're so close to being really good, but you need a little work on your mixing is all.
good luck man, I am becoming a fan!