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Hi Superbron, Please take these comments as they are intended - That is to help.
I found that the strings seem to cut out too soon on some of the parts of the song.
Maybe you could edit the strings and lengthen some notes in the piano roll.
I would also double the strings and on the doubled track bring them up an octave.
Just my thoughts.
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Michee
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NOI, SB. This is Stage One, right?  It needs a LOT of work yet - you have a nice skeleton and an in interesting collection of parts. The structure is good. Mmm, carry on!
Follow That Dream Sam Karaoke King -------------------- Turning that corner again - I have to keep following that dream, no matter what
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First I would slow this down - too peppy for a love song. Your chord progression has been used a lot so you need
to find a fresh approach - try different grooves and basslines. Pedal point might work or a more sparse instrumental
background - all worth trying.. Another approach might be to just work with the melody line with no chordal
background and try to make it as distinctive as possible - that can get you away from forcing the melody into a chordal
box . Maybe listen to the Coasters or other groups that were so masterful at producing a romantic sound and think about
what you could use from their approach. - Just some ideas to get the muse going - in the end you can't please everyone
so you gotta please yourself.
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PeteG: Coasters? "Romantic sound"? You mean like: "I'm a Hog For You Baby"? Or any of these: Riot in Cell Block Number Nine, Young Blood, Yakety Yak, Searchin', Idol With the Golden Head, Charlie Brown, Along Came Jones, et cetera. I would bet money that you meant to type "Drifters." Yes? Brad - 
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Super,
For some reason, your two links do not open for me here. I think it is my pop-up/firewall blocker?
What is the name of the song? I see several listed on the SC site? Thanks,
Trax
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Whoops! And my apologies, actually the group I was thinking of was the Platters - Only You, Ebb Tide, Smoke Gets in Your Eyes, Twilight Time -to me they have a super romantic sound. I really have a hard time with names and I'm not surprised. I muffed this one. I had thought about checking myself and should have.
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Thanks all for listening and your opinion. I'll rework this song and post a new version soon.
Does anybody have an opinion about the drums? That's actually why I posted this song here. I am kinda divided between loving and finding them to busy. Anyone else?
Cheers
Superbron
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Platters, Coasters........
One days hot selling platter is another day's ................
well...............
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