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A few years ago while working on a song together floyd and I discovered we share a birthday. (March 4th) In an unusual moment of clarity, I realized this week that it also serves as a code to live by. (March Forth!). We have posted collabs the past few years to celebrate. This year it is a little different. Bud Merritt had sent me some notes on a song he was working on using the words pier and peer. He wanted an island feel and I immediately thought to bring in floyd and turn it into a duet. I knew that both floyd and I have spent many wasted hours with beers in hand at the famed sunset celebration at the pier in Key West called Mallory Square, so we used that as the setting. With Bud’s OK we decided to use this as our annual birthday post. Of course Janice was willing to help out with harmonies. To make an already long story short, here it is. https://soundcloud.com/tommyad/pier-pressurehttps://tommyadamsmusic.com/musicStyle is _ISLANDP.STY RealTracks in style: ~~519:Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 1564:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm IslandJohn Ev 110 RealTracks in style: 1175:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 1177:Guitar, High-Strung Acoustic, Rhythm PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in song: 2670:Pedal Steel, Background HippieTrainEddy Ev 110 RealDrums: RealDrums in Style: PopCalypso^1-a:Snare, Closed HiHat , b:Snare, Ride MIDI SuperTracks in song: 1797:Piano, Rhythm IslandJohn Ev 110 RealTracks in song: ~2201:Guitar, Nylon, Background CountryBrent Ev 120 Recorded in Logic Pro X Plug Ins : Nectar 2, Neutron 2, Ozone 8, Tonal Balance, Waves LinMB, Waves, L3-LL Multi Limiter PIER PRESSURE I don't feel the need to intercede Y'ALL can right the ship i might get loud, but i don't follow the crowd ain't in nobody's grip I make my own decisions when I cast my vote You can leave me here I’ll just drink my beer don't feel i'm missing the boat always going along to get along how'd we all get there That little voice inside of me asking do you really care Yeah I’ve been giving in to pier pressure I join my friends for a drink at Mallory Square as long as the beach is within reach there's treasure Let’s have another rum before the setting sun THAT'S pier pressure my Facebook friends with their latest trends tend to bring me down I don’t wanna text what happens next my every mis-step making the rounds If they want to give their opinion i’ll tell them where to go I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low always going along to get along how'd we all get there That little voice inside of me asking do you really care Yeah I’ve been giving in to pier pressure I join my friends for a drink at Mallory Square as long as the beach is within reach there's treasure Let’s have another rum before the setting sun THAT'S pier pressure drink 'em down here comes another round that's pier pressure 2018 B. Merritt/ T. Adams/ floyd jane
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Happy Birthday, bro! J&B - thanks!
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Nice one, guys, and happy birthday! Vocals are great, I think Tom is the first vocal, then Floyd the second? And I love the harmonies too of course. Nice mix too! BTW, no such thing as a wasted hour if you have a beer in your hand IMHO
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Wow - what a tune! There isn't anything I didn't enjoy about this. It's wonderfully catchy, got a great groove, and both of your vocal performances are seriously on point. I'm getting a Highwayman sort of vibe here - which is definitely a good thing in my books. It showcases a clear understanding of songwriting, and is overall just a great tune. Great work, and thanks for sharing
Cheers, Deryk
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Tom,Floyd,J&B, Everything about this is kicking-back fun! Nice to hear the "brothers" trading verses and Janice adding her warmth on the chorus. I love the humour in the lyrics- especially this nugget: "I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low" Jimmy Buffet`s got nothing on you guys - Happy Birthday!
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This is such a cool way to celebrate a birthday together! You guys did a really great job on the vocal performances. Happy birthday guys (a few days early), and hope it treats you well!
Cheers, Ember
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Happy Birthday fellow March babies! Made me smile! Always up for some Jimmy Buffet influenced island beer and snark. You three (four counting Bud) always sound good together. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Tom,floyd,Janice & Bud
Happy birthdays.
Well that was a treat. Great work from all involved. Super engaging, comfortable, catchy and fun. Loved the mix of vocalists, lyrics, harmonies and and excellent backing track. Top song.
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Happy Birthday Tom and Floyd. Loved this tune. Super vocal and backtrack. Has the Jimmy Buffett feel.. Guitar was excellent.
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@Dave - this Bud's for you!
@Deryk - Highwayman...cool...
@Robert - thanks!
@Ember - no one I'd rather share a birthday with! Thanks for dropping by..
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Happy Birthday, bro! J&B - thanks! Back at ya! Let's have many more! Nice one, guys, and happy birthday! Vocals are great, I think Tom is the first vocal, then Floyd the second? And I love the harmonies too of course. Nice mix too! BTW, no such thing as a wasted hour if you have a beer in your hand IMHO Dave, You are correct on three counts. That was me on the 1st verse, floyd on the 2nd, and beer is a good thing. Thanks, Tom
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Cool collaboration. It has a lovely island vibe that would make Jimmy Buffet smile. Now I need some rum. Cheers and Happy Birthday.
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I came for the Pun, I stayed for the song.
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Some really cool TROP-ROCK.
This has a definite Jimmy Buffet sound, groove, vibe, to it.
It was so good I had to go back for another round. I have a few Corona's in the fridge.... kinda makes me wanna grab one.
I love the twist of the phrase...... pier pressure. Perfect.
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All very together (prosody).
Very good lyrics and sentiments to live by. I could imagine this as part of Jimmy B's repertoire. Not that it needs any improving. Great as it is. Thumbs up.
Cheers.
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Nice one, guys, and happy birthday! Vocals are great, I think Tom is the first vocal, then Floyd the second? And I love the harmonies too of course. Nice mix too! BTW, no such thing as a wasted hour if you have a beer in your hand IMHO Particularly if it is a handcrafted IPA from a small brewery Janice said thanks for mentioning the harmony. Bud
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I love birthdays where you give gifts to us. Like Josie, it made me smile, too.
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Hello, Tom, floyd, Janice & Bud,
A very nice collaboration! Super vocals and harmonies! It is very well mixed everywhere. Very comfortable! I have little knowledge about island style, but it is a very happy and good sound. Enjoyed my listen a lot. Happy birthday, Tom and floyd,
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Wow - what a tune! There isn't anything I didn't enjoy about this. It's wonderfully catchy, got a great groove, and both of your vocal performances are seriously on point. I'm getting a Highwayman sort of vibe here - which is definitely a good thing in my books. It showcases a clear understanding of songwriting, and is overall just a great tune. Great work, and thanks for sharing Deryk, thanks so much for stopping by and giving it a listen. All four of us appreciate it. Tom Tom,Floyd,J&B, Everything about this is kicking-back fun! Nice to hear the "brothers" trading verses and Janice adding her warmth on the chorus. I love the humour in the lyrics- especially this nugget: "I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low" Jimmy Buffet`s got nothing on you guys - Happy Birthday!
Robert
Thanks Robert. Glad you liked it. If I remember correctly the first two lines you quoted were floyd's and the hat line was Bud. Those guys always make me laugh, Tom
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Happy birthday Tommy and Floyd! Nice song too!
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Wow - what a tune! There isn't anything I didn't enjoy about this. It's wonderfully catchy, got a great groove, and both of your vocal performances are seriously on point. I'm getting a Highwayman sort of vibe here - which is definitely a good thing in my books. It showcases a clear understanding of songwriting, and is overall just a great tune. Great work, and thanks for sharing Thanks Deryk. We had a blast working with Tom and floyd on this! J&B
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Happy Birthday gentleman !
Wonderful all around by everyone
you guys are the high shining beacon of light!
great musicians, super song
enjoyed,
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Janice, Bud, Tom and floyd, 'Outstanding' is a word that I regularly type when I respond to one of your posts on the forum. It seems that no matter how much I use it, though, this word never gets tired in my mind. Time after time, the compositions, performances and productions that are left in the wake of each of your individual creativities are outstanding. And with "Pier Pressure", yet again you've all comfortably jumped that often admired bar of achievement that separates the 'cream of the crop' from the 'rest of world'. I sit here at my computer in Australia and marvel at the consistency of your work. The lyrics and the lyric flow are fantastic! I don't know how these words grew but the finished product travels along like greased lightning and with highly focused attention to lyric detail. I loved the way that the pun 'pier/peer pressure' developed. In these lyrics, what stood out most to me was the way with which the inner rhymes worked in conjunction with the end-of-line rhymes and accented that laid-back, rock-meets-swing lilt that's often found in Caribbean/Island styled music. That... ...rhyme pattern found in the first four lines of each of the verses is the stuff of genius. This pattern also helps to drive the tongue-in-cheek humour that radiates from these words. Something that I discovered a while back but have never tried is that if rhymes are plentiful and happen in quick succession, they can enhance any comedy that's present in the words. The master of this technique was Cole Porter. Have a look at and listen to his lyrics for "Your The Top" (Youtube link) and I think you'll see what I mean. While Porter also uses clever lists that anticlimax (i.e. Mickey Mouse, cellophane, etc.) to deliver laughs, rhyme-flow is the generator that paces and powers the lyric humour. (a lyric excerpt)You're the top! You're the Colosseum, You're the top! You're the Louvre Museum, You're a melody from a symphony by Strauss, You're a Bendel bonnet, a Shakespeare sonnet, You're Mickey Mouse. You're the Nile, You're the Tower of Pisa, You're the smile on the Mona Lisa. I'm a worthless check, a total wreck, a flop, But baby, if I'm the bottom, You're the top! (Full lyrics found here) As I see it... with "Pier Pressure", just like Cole Porter, Merritt/Adams/Jane have shown us all how it's done! Outstanding! Last, and most important... Tom and floyd, I wish you both a sincere and enthusiastic... ...may you enjoy many, many more as you both march forth into the years to come! (Thanks for the 'march forth' pun, Tom, I'd never have stumbled onto it myself.) Best wishes to everyone, Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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Sometimes the stars align perfectly in the sky over the Pier called Mallory Square. The right day, the right beer and the right group of friends. Magic happens.
For those stars to be the BIAB Forum superstars, B&J, Tom and Floyd and on their BIRTHDAY to boot ---
Nothing else could come of such a happening except the perfect song to commemorate it.
Excellent job and enjoyable song to listen to this morning.
Happy Birthday to you guys and thanks for sharing it with us in song....
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This is such a cool way to celebrate a birthday together! You guys did a really great job on the vocal performances. Happy birthday guys (a few days early), and hope it treats you well! Ember, Thanks for listening and for the birthday wishes, Tom Happy Birthday fellow March babies! Made me smile! Always up for some Jimmy Buffet influenced island beer and snark. You three (four counting Bud) always sound good together. I enjoyed it a lot. Well hey there March Mama, sure am glad you were able to check in on this one. It was fun for all of us, Tom Tom,floyd,Janice & Bud
Happy birthdays.
Well that was a treat. Great work from all involved. Super engaging, comfortable, catchy and fun. Loved the mix of vocalists, lyrics, harmonies and and excellent backing track. Top song.
Peter Peter, We are glad you liked it. Your opinion is highly valued, Tom
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Happy Birthday Tom and Floyd. Loved this tune. Super vocal and backtrack. Has the Jimmy Buffett feel.. Guitar was excellent. Scott, Thanks for stopping by and giving it a spin. The guitar track was that Brent Mason nylon real track, one of our favorites, Tom
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Great collab y'all! And Happy Birthday!
Love the title, hook, mix, vocals, everything.
Just a great song. Love it!
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Tom,Floyd,J&B, Everything about this is kicking-back fun! Nice to hear the "brothers" trading verses and Janice adding her warmth on the chorus. I love the humour in the lyrics- especially this nugget: "I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low" Jimmy Buffet`s got nothing on you guys - Happy Birthday!
Robert
Hey Robert, you can throw some ideas at Tom or floyd and, man, they're off and running. I was thrilled to be along for the ride. Bud
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Cool collaboration. It has a lovely island vibe that would make Jimmy Buffet smile. Now I need some rum. Cheers and Happy Birthday. SD, Thanks for the birthday wishes and thanks for dropping by, Tom I came for the Pun, I stayed for the song. I can see by your signature line you enjoy a good pun. Thanks for listening, Tom Some really cool TROP-ROCK.
This has a definite Jimmy Buffet sound, groove, vibe, to it.
It was so good I had to go back for another round. I have a few Corona's in the fridge.... kinda makes me wanna grab one.
I love the twist of the phrase...... pier pressure. Perfect. Herb, We're glad you liked it, Tom
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A late Happy Birthday to both of you. Mine is coming up real soon - March 22. I'll be 71 - yikes!!!
Love when the birthday guys give us a gift, and such a great one! never been to Key West but it's on my bucket list! great job on this - lots of fun and some great entertainment.
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@Sundance - thanks...
@Peter - thanks for all of that from all of us...
@Scott - thanks for having a listen...
@Samuel - appreciate the listen...
@Mikke - HA!
@Herb - save one for us!
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Great song, puts me on the beach laying back in chair!!!!
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This is such a cool way to celebrate a birthday together! You guys did a really great job on the vocal performances. Happy birthday guys (a few days early), and hope it treats you well! Happy Birthday fellow March babies! Made me smile! Always up for some Jimmy Buffet influenced island beer and snark. You three (four counting Bud) always sound good together. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks y’all. Janice enjoyed singing on the project and I had a blast writing with these guys. I learned a lot. Bud
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All very together (prosody).
Very good lyrics and sentiments to live by. I could imagine this as part of Jimmy B's repertoire. Not that it needs any improving. Great as it is. Thumbs up.
Cheers.
Thanks a lot, Tom I love birthdays where you give gifts to us. Like Josie, it made me smile, too. Thanks David. We had a lot of fun with this one, Tom Hello, Tom, floyd, Janice & Bud,
A very nice collaboration! Super vocals and harmonies! It is very well mixed everywhere. Very comfortable! I have little knowledge about island style, but it is a very happy and good sound. Enjoyed my listen a lot. Happy birthday, Tom and floyd,
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Shigeki Adachi, Thank you for the nice comments and the birthday wishes, Tom Happy birthday Tommy and Floyd! Nice song too!
Rob and Anne-Marie Thanks, We appreciate it, Tom
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@David - @Shigeki Adachi - we all say "Thanks!" @RnAM - glad y'all stopped by... @Kenny - good to see you! @Noel - We ALL LOVE! to be compared to Cole Porter!!!!
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Tom,floyd,Janice & Bud
Happy birthdays.
Well that was a treat. Great work from all involved. Super engaging, comfortable, catchy and fun. Loved the mix of vocalists, lyrics, harmonies and and excellent backing track. Top song.
Peter Thanks Peter. I got lucky with this one. Nearly tossed the idea. These guys turned it into a real song! J&B Happy Birthday Tom and Floyd. Loved this tune. Super vocal and backtrack. Has the Jimmy Buffett feel.. Guitar was excellent. Thanks Scott...yep, it has Buffett written all over it! J&B
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Happy Birthday gentleman !
Wonderful all around by everyone
you guys are the high shining beacon of light!
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Kenny Thanks Kenny, Glad to hear from you, Tom Janice, Bud, Tom and floyd, 'Outstanding' is a word that I regularly type when I respond to one of your posts on the forum. It seems that no matter how much I use it, though, this word never gets tired in my mind. Time after time, the compositions, performances and productions that are left in the wake of each of your individual creativities are outstanding. And with "Pier Pressure", yet again you've all comfortably jumped that often admired bar of achievement that separates the 'cream of the crop' from the 'rest of world'. I sit here at my computer in Australia and marvel at the consistency of your work. The lyrics and the lyric flow are fantastic! I don't know how these words grew but the finished product travels along like greased lightning and with highly focused attention to lyric detail. I loved the way that the pun 'pier/peer pressure' developed. In these lyrics, what stood out most to me was the way with which the inner rhymes worked in conjunction with the end-of-line rhymes and accented that laid-back, rock-meets-swing lilt that's often found in Caribbean/Island styled music. That... ...rhyme pattern found in the first four lines of each of the verses is the stuff of genius. This pattern also helps to drive the tongue-in-cheek humour that radiates from these words. Something that I discovered a while back but have never tried is that if rhymes are plentiful and happen in quick succession, they can enhance any comedy that's present in the words. The master of this technique was Cole Porter. Have a look at and listen to his lyrics for "Your The Top" (Youtube link) and I think you'll see what I mean. While Porter also uses clever lists that anticlimax (i.e. Mickey Mouse, cellophane, etc.) to deliver laughs, rhyme-flow is the generator that paces and powers the lyric humour. (a lyric excerpt)You're the top! You're the Colosseum, You're the top! You're the Louvre Museum, You're a melody from a symphony by Strauss, You're a Bendel bonnet, a Shakespeare sonnet, You're Mickey Mouse. You're the Nile, You're the Tower of Pisa, You're the smile on the Mona Lisa. I'm a worthless check, a total wreck, a flop, But baby, if I'm the bottom, You're the top! (Full lyrics found here) As I see it... with "Pier Pressure", just like Cole Porter, Merritt/Adams/Jane have shown us all how it's done! Outstanding! Last, and most important... Tom and floyd, I wish you both a sincere and enthusiastic... ...may you enjoy many, many more as you both march forth into the years to come! (Thanks for the 'march forth' pun, Tom, I'd never have stumbled onto it myself.) Best wishes to everyone, Noel Noel, Your reviews are always so informative and educational. We all are thankful for your kind words and your willingness to share your knowledge, Tom Sometimes the stars align perfectly in the sky over the Pier called Mallory Square. The right day, the right beer and the right group of friends. Magic happens.
For those stars to be the BIAB Forum superstars, B&J, Tom and Floyd and on their BIRTHDAY to boot ---
Nothing else could come of such a happening except the perfect song to commemorate it.
Excellent job and enjoyable song to listen to this morning.
Happy Birthday to you guys and thanks for sharing it with us in song....
Charlie, Thank you so much for your extremely generous comments. We are very appreciative, Tom
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Great collab y'all! And Happy Birthday!
Love the title, hook, mix, vocals, everything.
Just a great song. Love it!
David, Thanks. Glad you liked it, Tom A late Happy Birthday to both of you. Mine is coming up real soon - March 22. I'll be 71 - yikes!!!
Love when the birthday guys give us a gift, and such a great one! never been to Key West but it's on my bucket list! great job on this - lots of fun and some great entertainment.
Alan Alan, Thanks for dropping by and giving it a spin, Tom
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Great song, puts me on the beach laying back in chair!!!!
cliftond, Thanks for listening and commenting, Tom
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All, great song! Very clever and wonderful production / delivery.
Enjoyed!
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All, great song! Very clever and wonderful production / delivery.
Enjoyed!
Bob We all thank you Bob, Tom
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Cool collaboration. It has a lovely island vibe that would make Jimmy Buffet smile. Now I need some rum. Cheers and Happy Birthday. I came for the Pun, I stayed for the song. Some really cool TROP-ROCK.
This has a definite Jimmy Buffet sound, groove, vibe, to it.
It was so good I had to go back for another round. I have a few Corona's in the fridge.... kinda makes me wanna grab one.
I love the twist of the phrase...... pier pressure. Perfect. All very together (prosody).
Very good lyrics and sentiments to live by. I could imagine this as part of Jimmy B's repertoire. Not that it needs any improving. Great as it is. Thumbs up.
Thanks y'all. We are proud to be a small part of this! J&B
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@Charlie - thanks for all the nice comments!
@David - glad you stopped by...
@Alan - There's no other place like Key West! Gotta go!
@cliftond - thanks!
@Bob - good to see ya!
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Great lyrics!!! Love the song and congratulations to all!
Now where can I find that bar? I'd like to put about 190 pounds of pressure on that pier!
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Great track. I really enoyed ot.
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What a gem!!! Too bad Buffett doesn't do many covers.....this is PERFECT for him! Love the clever use of Pier Pressure. Everything in this song could not be done any better!!!
my Facebook friends with their latest trends tend to bring me down I don’t wanna text what happens next my every mis-step making the rounds If they want to give their opinion i’ll tell them where to go I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low
AMEN!!!!!! Love it guys!! Happy Birthdays and MARCH FORTH!!!! Take care. Greg
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Great lyrics!!! Love the song and congratulations to all!
Now where can I find that bar? I'd like to put about 190 pounds of pressure on that pier! Thanks Lawrence. You would like Key West if you've never been. It's one of the great American drinking towns, Tom Great track. I really enoyed ot. Thanks SD, Tom What a gem!!! Too bad Buffett doesn't do many covers.....this is PERFECT for him! Love the clever use of Pier Pressure. Everything in this song could not be done any better!!!
my Facebook friends with their latest trends tend to bring me down I don’t wanna text what happens next my every mis-step making the rounds If they want to give their opinion i’ll tell them where to go I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low
AMEN!!!!!! Love it guys!! Happy Birthdays and MARCH FORTH!!!! Take care. Greg Thank You Greg. We all value your opinion, Tom
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@Lawrence - glad you stopped by...
@SD - thanks...
@Greg - we appreciate that...
Tom - A big THANKS for all your work on this - for carrying the heavy load!...
Bud - A huge THANKS for letting us join you on this...
Janice - You are the BEST!
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I love birthdays where you give gifts to us. Like Josie, it made me smile, too. Thanks! Hello, Tom, floyd, Janice & Bud,
A very nice collaboration! Super vocals and harmonies! It is very well mixed everywhere. Very comfortable! I have little knowledge about island style, but it is a very happy and good sound. Enjoyed my listen a lot. Happy birthday, Tom and floyd,
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Thanks Shigeki! Happy birthday Tommy and Floyd! Nice song too!
Rob and Anne-Marie It was fun...thanks J&B Happy Birthday gentleman !
Wonderful all around by everyone
you guys are the high shining beacon of light!
great musicians, super song
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Kenny That's very thoughtful of you Kenny. Nice to hear from you! J&B
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Janice, Bud, Tom and floyd, 'Outstanding' is a word that I regularly type when I respond to one of your posts on the forum. It seems that no matter how much I use it, though, this word never gets tired in my mind. Time after time, the compositions, performances and productions that are left in the wake of each of your individual creativities are outstanding. And with "Pier Pressure", yet again you've all comfortably jumped that often admired bar of achievement that separates the 'cream of the crop' from the 'rest of world'. I sit here at my computer in Australia and marvel at the consistency of your work. The lyrics and the lyric flow are fantastic! I don't know how these words grew but the finished product travels along like greased lightning and with highly focused attention to lyric detail. I loved the way that the pun 'pier/peer pressure' developed. In these lyrics, what stood out most to me was the way with which the inner rhymes worked in conjunction with the end-of-line rhymes and accented that laid-back, rock-meets-swing lilt that's often found in Caribbean/Island styled music. That... ...rhyme pattern found in the first four lines of each of the verses is the stuff of genius. This pattern also helps to drive the tongue-in-cheek humour that radiates from these words. Something that I discovered a while back but have never tried is that if rhymes are plentiful and happen in quick succession, they can enhance any comedy that's present in the words. The master of this technique was Cole Porter. Have a look at and listen to his lyrics for "Your The Top" (Youtube link) and I think you'll see what I mean. While Porter also uses clever lists that anticlimax (i.e. Mickey Mouse, cellophane, etc.) to deliver laughs, rhyme-flow is the generator that paces and powers the lyric humour. (a lyric excerpt)You're the top! You're the Colosseum, You're the top! You're the Louvre Museum, You're a melody from a symphony by Strauss, You're a Bendel bonnet, a Shakespeare sonnet, You're Mickey Mouse. You're the Nile, You're the Tower of Pisa, You're the smile on the Mona Lisa. I'm a worthless check, a total wreck, a flop, But baby, if I'm the bottom, You're the top! (Full lyrics found here) As I see it... with "Pier Pressure", just like Cole Porter, Merritt/Adams/Jane have shown us all how it's done! Outstanding! Last, and most important... Tom and floyd, I wish you both a sincere and enthusiastic... ...may you enjoy many, many more as you both march forth into the years to come! (Thanks for the 'march forth' pun, Tom, I'd never have stumbled onto it myself.) Best wishes to everyone, Noel Noel, as always I read your response with great interest. I'm glad you like the pier/peer notion because with only a couple of other general ideas that's about all I (Bud) contributed. But I will revel in your wonderful comments anyhow Thank you so much! J&B
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Sometimes the stars align perfectly in the sky over the Pier called Mallory Square. The right day, the right beer and the right group of friends. Magic happens.
For those stars to be the BIAB Forum superstars, B&J, Tom and Floyd and on their BIRTHDAY to boot ---
Nothing else could come of such a happening except the perfect song to commemorate it.
Excellent job and enjoyable song to listen to this morning.
Happy Birthday to you guys and thanks for sharing it with us in song....
Charlie, thanks for your kind remarks and continued support. We consider it a privilege and a pleasure to work with these guys. J&B What a gem!!! Too bad Buffett doesn't do many covers.....this is PERFECT for him! Love the clever use of Pier Pressure. Everything in this song could not be done any better!!!
my Facebook friends with their latest trends tend to bring me down I don’t wanna text what happens next my every mis-step making the rounds If they want to give their opinion i’ll tell them where to go I won't post what i eat try not to tweet and pull my hat down low
AMEN!!!!!! Love it guys!! Happy Birthdays and MARCH FORTH!!!! Take care. Greg Thanks Greg. It was cool working with Tom and floyd - more like just being along a for a fun ride! J&B
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Tom, Floyd, J&B, Mr Buffet would certainly be proud to call this one his! Great work by all! To me it sounds that you have captured the vibe you were going for in this one! Thanks, Torrey
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Sounds great to me. Nice collab.
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Tom, Floyd, J&B, Mr Buffet would certainly be proud to call this one his! Great work by all! To me it sounds that you have captured the vibe you were going for in this one! Thanks, Torrey Sounds great to me. Nice collab.
SD Thanks y'all -- these collaborators make me look like a writer...hahahahha! Glad you liked it. J&B
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Nice play of words & a good job on the collaboration & production... really a cool song!
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