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Hi all. I dont have a great vocal range but am messing around with some falsetto on this one. Does it pass? Not sure if the vocal is too loud? All comments welcome. Rob Oh Please Oh please remember me locked in a dark abyss without a key Oh please remember me all I have to take is your memory Chorus The darkest time most lonely times I fall. You have all my Love please take it all. Bridge - Verse and chorus Oh please don't be so unkind I been thinking bout you most of the time. Oh please don't be so unkind all the roads I try to build you under mine Chorus The darkest time most lonely times I fall. You have all the Love please take it all. In The darkest time most lonely times I fall. You have all the Love please take it all. ****** Song Summary ************* Title: Oh Please File:Oh Please.SGU Key=C , Tempo 100, Length (m:s)=3:12 4 bar intro, 72 bar chorus, from bar 5 to bar 76. Repeat x1 chorus Melody has 615 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0) Soloist track has 564 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0) Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0, Style is _SHADES.STY (Shades '60s Pop with Strings) RealTracks in style: 1174:Bass, Electric, PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 1177:Guitar, High-Strung Acoustic, Rhythm PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 1175:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 1422:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopCalypso Ev 100 RealTracks in song: 2508:String Quartet, Rhythm PopEvenHall Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 2690:Guitar, Electric, Soloist Slow16thsPopBrentSimple Ev16 075 RealDrums in style: PopCalypso^1-a:Snare, Closed HiHat , b:Snare, Ride Vocals My self *******************
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Yes! Roy Orbison! I love the inflection at Ple-ease...  This may be may favorite performance and mix of yours, Rob. Really, really good.
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Rob,
Everything sounds good. The vocal is nice (not too loud). Your falsetto definitely works!
That guitar solo is killer.
Nice arrangement. The strings are a nice touch - at the right time. Terrific mix. Nice song.
fj
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Rob,
Absolutely on point vocal for me ( wish I could do that Roy Orbison thing!) and a tasteful arrangement.
You are on a roll lately... and they are all good!
Robert
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Bob,
I like the song and your singing. To me you sound like Bobby Bare on this one. I like that you sound continues to evolve with each song you release. The guitar work is nice too.
By the way, I think you vocal fits in the production, it's not too loud or back in the mix. For some other song you might want to change the vocal level but the level is consistent with the style of production you used for this song.
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I have to agree with David Snyder and say that I really enjoyed how you said "Peh-lease"!  It added a lot of character and fun to the song. I don't think that the vocals are too loud at all. I think it fits quite nicely. Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Ember
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I think vocal level is just right, and the singing style works for your type of voice.. More, pulleese!!
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Robert,
This is a great song and you are a great singer... Mix is perfect.
Loved it.
Bob
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Hello, Rob
Nice falsetto!
You succeeded in extending the range of your great voice.
And also very nice melody!
I like that you change to minor key in the chorus part.
But you return to the major key again soon.
As for me I wanted you to continue the minor key a little longer.
But that is merely my taste, please do not mind.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Yes! Roy Orbison! I love the inflection at Ple-ease... This may be may favorite performance and mix of yours, Rob. Really, really good. Thank you David. You made me smile. Rob
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Hi Rob,
Love it...Short and Sweet.
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Really well done! I think the vocals are just right on this one, personally. The falsetto doesn't sound forced and the volumes sound excellent. That aside, it is wonderfully catchy and I love the chorus. Puh-pleeease! Definitely getting some Roy Orbison vibes here too, as David mentioned above. All together a very professional sounding tune - thanks for sharing
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So well done here!!! vocals dead on and the style is so 60's pop, country love it!!!
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Excellent vocals, Roy Orbison and Elvis come right to mind. Lovely melancholy melody. The guitar solo blends nicely with strings. Mix is perfect.
Janne
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All sounds good to me Rob. Excellent vocals, and nice changes for the chorus.
A great listen, thanks!
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Rob,
Everything sounds good. The vocal is nice (not too loud). Your falsetto definitely works!
That guitar solo is killer.
Nice arrangement. The strings are a nice touch - at the right time. Terrific mix. Nice song.
fj Many thanks Floyd
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Rob,
Absolutely on point vocal for me ( wish I could do that Roy Orbison thing!) and a tasteful arrangement.
You are on a roll lately... and they are all good!
Robert Thanks Robert for your encouraging comments.Rob.
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Bob,
I like the song and your singing. To me you sound like Bobby Bare on this one. I like that you sound continues to evolve with each song you release. The guitar work is nice too.
By the way, I think you vocal fits in the production, it's not too loud or back in the mix. For some other song you might want to change the vocal level but the level is consistent with the style of production you used for this song. Hi Jim. Long time no see. I like Bobby Bare and his 500 miles tune particularly. Thanks for your great comment. Rob
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I have to agree with David Snyder and say that I really enjoyed how you said "Peh-lease"! It added a lot of character and fun to the song. I don't think that the vocals are too loud at all. I think it fits quite nicely. Thanks for sharing! Hello Ember.Thanks for your support.Rob
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