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I enjoyed the listen. The song has a strong Gordon Lightfoot vibe, both in your vocal delivery, the chord changes, and the guitars. That's a good thing. Since you said all comments are welcome, I'll stupidly broach the usually taboo criticism of lyrics, and note that the first verse plays the pronoun game: Failed to cry when it broke my heart That doesn't mean it's not tearing me apartIn my 100% non-expert songwriting opinion, using nouns would give stronger lyrics: Failed to cry when you broke my heart That doesn't mean love's not tearing me apartOf course, I've got zero number one hits, so what do I know? Anyway, nice song - thanks for posting! Hey David, thanks for the thoughtful reply. I agree with your opinion on the noun/pronoun issue, and had I thought of it before I completed the song I probably would have changed it... However I'm also of the opinion that when it come to songwriting those rules really don't matter. By the way I have the same amount of #1 hits as you! hi Achordocaste love this lightfoot old humble pie sixties seventies feel however modern great work greg,cathy thanks for sharing eric F.M.M., Thank you for the nice words and the listen. Good song and well mixed. Sounds early seventies and that's a good thing to me. Credit both of you.Rob. Thanks Rob. Interesting to me how so many hear the early '70's sounds... since that's not something I was consciously trying to do.
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Big time Gordon Lightfoot feel to the song. Loved the tremolo guitar and vibe of the whole tune. Loved the Tele licks during the "La La's". Very nicely done. Enjoyed it.
Dave
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Big time Gordon Lightfoot feel to the song. Loved the tremolo guitar and vibe of the whole tune. Loved the Tele licks during the "La La's". Very nicely done. Enjoyed it.
Dave Hey Dave, I certainly appreciate the listen and the very kind comments.
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Most enjoyable song, thanks for sharing
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Really nice song - arrangement and track choices. The guitar work speaks for itself (it's really good!). And if I had a voice even half that good - sigh!
Used to live in Denver - got to Grand Junction a couple of time.
You and Kathy did a terrific job with this. The la-las near the end were great!
Alan
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Greg & Kathy,
A really nice song. Sounds like an old favorite...
Excellent arrangement and mix. Nice vocals and harmony.
Nice.
fj Floyd pretty much nailed my sentiments on this one. Real nice! Steve
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Most enjoyable song, thanks for sharing Hey Graham thanks for the listen. Really nice song - arrangement and track choices. The guitar work speaks for itself (it's really good!). And if I had a voice even half that good - sigh!
Used to live in Denver - got to Grand Junction a couple of time.
You and Kathy did a terrific job with this. The la-las near the end were great!
Alan Thanks for the very kind comments Alan. Kathy & I appreciate It. Greg & Kathy,
A really nice song. Sounds like an old favorite...
Excellent arrangement and mix. Nice vocals and harmony.
Nice.
fj Floyd pretty much nailed my sentiments on this one. Real nice! Steve Thanks for the listen Steve... And agreeing with Floyd.
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Very nice guitars and lyrics. Everything mixed to perfection. Great!
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As has been said Gordon Lightfoot feel defo.
Nice production vocals, lyrics, tracks.
One to be proud of.
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You nailed this one! It sounds sincere and lush, and the vocal delivery is powerful on this one. There are some really nice thought provoking lyrics here as well which helped push it along for me. That aside, it is quite catchy and has a wonderful groove. Nothing I'd change here - thanks so much for sharing
Cheers, Deryk
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Very nice guitars and lyrics. Everything mixed to perfection. Great! Hey EMG. Thanks for the listen & nice comments. As has been said Gordon Lightfoot feel defo.
Nice production vocals, lyrics, tracks.
One to be proud of. Thanks beatmaster, I am proud of it. You nailed this one! It sounds sincere and lush, and the vocal delivery is powerful on this one. There are some really nice thought provoking lyrics here as well which helped push it along for me. That aside, it is quite catchy and has a wonderful groove. Nothing I'd change here - thanks so much for sharing Well thank you Deryk, Kathy & I very much appreciate your kind words.
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Well written song! Lyrics also!
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Well written song! Lyrics also! Thank you for the listen and the nice comments. I'm hoping to have something new in the near future.
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I got a Gordon Lightfoot feel from your singing, the kind of voice that makes any song better. Banjo was soft but effective. Nice job all the way around.
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I got a Gordon Lightfoot feel from your singing, the kind of voice that makes any song better. Banjo was soft but effective. Nice job all the way around. Thanks TuneMonger. You're not the first with The GL comparison. I appreciate the listen and the compliment.
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