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Hi all. I couldn't resist entering another song.
This is a typical tongue in cheek breakup song.
All comments welcome. Rob

Tossing and Turning


Hey girl wont you leave me be.
You been bothering me quiet successfully.
You got me tossing you got me turning the whole night through.
Hey babe you think you got it made.
But I have news for you and its that where through.
You got me tossing and turning the whole night through.
Chorus
Every time when you tell a joke you laugh right in my face.
No second thoughts to hesitate when you highlight my mistakes.
When I take you home your in a state and always pick a fight.
You got me tossing you got me turning every night.
Bridge
Chorus
Every time when you tell a joke you laugh right in my face.
No second thoughts to hesitate when you highlight my mistakes.
When I take you home your in a state you always pick a fight.
You got me tossing you got me turning every night.
Chorus
Every time when you tell a joke you laugh right in my face.
No second thoughts to hesitate when you highlight my mistakes.
When I take you home your in a state you always pick a fight.
You got me tossing you got me turning every night.
You got me tossing you got me turning every night.
You got me tossing you got me turning every night.

****** Song Summary *************
Title: Untitled Song
File:Tossing and Turning.SGU
Key=G , Tempo 110, Length (m:s)=3:38
4 bar intro, 92 bar chorus, from bar 5 to bar 96. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _MERCY1.STY (Mercy Country Boogie Rhythm)

RealTracks in style: ~1845:Bass, Electric, CountryBoogieA-B Sw 110
RealTracks in style: 2669:Pedal Steel, Background CountryRockBoogie Sw 110
RealTracks in style: ~953:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBoogieCleanA-B Sw 110
RealTracks in style: ~956:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBoogieGrittyA-B Sw 110
RealDrums in style: PopRockShuffle: a: Snare, Closed Hatb: Snare, Open
Hat

This country boogie rhythm section RealStyle is a little edgy thanks to an overdriven background pedal steel that plays rockin' country boogie riffs. Two rhythm electric guitars are included and both play similar alternating boogie parts.

Vocals myself Mixed with studio one
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I really like the feel of this track. It's got a really nice groove. I also like the quality of your vocals.

Your description of the song as a "tongue in cheek breakup song" got my attention. I love that kind of song, but I have to admit I was a little bit disappointed by the lyrical content. I was expecting something a little more comical I guess. Also I don't quite get what the main hook line " You got me tossing you got me turning every night" has to do with breaking up with someone. Maybe a second verse that goes into more detail of why you are tossing and turning would help clarify that.