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Hi All,
Here's a new song.
This is a play on the doomsday phrase
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There’s a fire on the border in the midday sun
Mothers and daughters under the gun
What is this thing called human rights
It gets erased under the cover of night
Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Two minutes to midnight
There’s a man with a sign in Central Park
Saying jack the mayor and jack the cops
I’m watching like a statue on a granite base
You better get yourself back to Chelsea Place
Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Two minutes to midnight
There’s you and me we got bleeding hearts
The horse is running away from his cart
I’ve got a watch never could tell time
And the weight of love and a suspicious mind
Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Two minutes to midnight
Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Boom two minutes to midnight
All BIAB Tracks:
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
2505: Piano, Electric, HeldChords 085
789: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CrossoverClean 090
832: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, AltCountryMoody Ev 075
Chorus Loop: Chillout/Chillout_dimensions_145
RealDrums: PopPromiseEv16 a:Snare on 4, HiHat, b: Snare
As always - thanks for listening!
Bob
Last edited by Andrew - PG Music; 08/28/20 09:26 AM.
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very nice song.
Excellent sound and real tracks in it.
Very nice performance
Sergio
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Bob, this track sounds great! Such a good job on the vocals and your backing track choices are perfect! I love that arp electric guitar going in this! Another great track! Thanks, Torrey
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I liked that arp guitar too really fits the mood. Cool line about the watch not keeping time. Very Dylanesque which I always enjoy. Sounds great here. 
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Bob,
Great title and inspiration behind this.I like the punchy chorus...and, of course, there are always nuggets of lyrical brilliance in your writing,(Josie beat me to it on the Dylanesque feel of this).
Your use of that AltCountry guitar is so good here.
Another excellent song!
Robert
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Very cool but 2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085 has a few problems.
Particularly when used with the very clicky kick drum.
It's very big n boomy and when the notes are muted they die unnaturally.
The combination of big and unnatural decay seem at odds.
The muting could be addressed by adding a little delay or a very tiny bit of reverb and the boominess, well, if you reduce some of the bass and add what you reduced to the kick's bottom end it might work.
I found myself spending quite a bit of time EQ Real Drum tracks to remove some click and add some thump.
Cheers
rayc
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Hello Bob,
that's a very nice song with great lyrics and a well-chosen and well-sounding arrangement. Love your singing.
Cheers,
Stefan
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Nice! Love the way you paint a picture with your lyrics.
Lots of great lines happening, I especially liked "What is this thing called human rights
It gets erased under the cover of night", and "I’m watching like a statue on a granite base
You better get yourself back to Chelsea Place".
Strong, memorable chorus also.
And of course your signature vocal sound.
Great stuff, Bob, enjoyed the listen!
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"I’ve got a watch never could tell time"...
I like that line...
Good write...
Impressive lyrics & vocals...
Great production...
I enjoyed listening!
Jim
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Torrey,
Thanks - much appreciated. I believe that is the first time I have used that particular arp guitar track - it's got a very unique sound.
Bob
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Bob,
Another excellent write. Tight.
You keep coming up with great BANDs. Simple and solid with a start-the-tape-and-record-one-perfect-take feel. Impressive.
fj
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Great sound on the band. That arp guitar works great. Good write and well delivered. Mix sounds good. I enjoyed it, Tom
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Hi Bob,
That is a very nice song. I like the lyrics - it is a very well written song and the music compliments your voice in a very pleasing way.
Well done!
Will
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Man oh man, what a chorus!
"Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Two minutes to midnight"
And what a great verse (of many)!
"There’s you and me we got bleeding hearts
The horse is running away from his cart
I’ve got a watch never could tell time
And the weight of love and a suspicious mind "
As others said the arp guitar was perfecto as was the arrangement, band and mix.
Your voice was born for this Americana feel/genre that we so often listen to.
Outstanding!
J&B
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"Stop the clock
Somebody pull the plug
Shine the light
Two minutes to midnight"
I feel this very keenly most nights. I'm a chronic insomniac and it seems like the days just bleed together somedays and time just moves far too quickly.
Thanks for sharing! Great song.
Cheers,
Ember
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Hey Josie,
Thanks - that is very appreciated!
Bob
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Another good write. Love the imaginary you paint in the lyrics and definitely the Dylan feel to the song.
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rsdean,
Nice sound and feel to this—kinda of a Stones thing going on, maybe. A terrific, heartfelt vocal. Very cool tune!
All the best,
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Robert,
That's very kind of you - thanks.
Bob
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Loved this Bob. Such a . Always thought you had a Dylan vibe in your voice. Such a cool delivery of the vocal and lyric.
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What a tune! A really solid write, and that chorus is absolutely perfect. The arrangement is top notch as well. The whole thing sounds really professional - a really nicely executed Americana tune. Thanks for sharing
Cheers,
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Hey Bob,
great write, good backing band
you always write and sing a strong solid chorus
to bring home the message and song
and tho I don't agree with most of your political sentiments
I do appreciate your poetry and emotional deliveries
enjoyed,
Kenny
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Ray,
Thanks. I didn't hear a lot of boomy bass, but take your point. It may be my monitors, etc.
Thanks again for listening and commenting.
Bob
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Your lyrics are first rate. What a great opening lyric: "There’s a fire on the border in the midday sun": That line is loaded. Great title too. It make one want to listen to your song. I, too, love the arpeggio guitar, which is a perfect complement to your vocal delivery.
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Stefan,
Thanks so much!
Bob
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Dave,
That is very appreciated - thank you!
Bob
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Floyd,
Thanks - appreciate the kind words.
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Tom,
Thanks very much.
Bob
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Excellent writing for sure! You always inspire me to want to write. That is a sure fire clue that I'm intrigued. Wonderful song!
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Will,
Much appreciated - thanks.
Bob
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Janice & Bud,
That is very kind of you. I appreciate your support - thanks!
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Great lyrics carried by the driving force of the arrangement. Poweful Dylanesque chorus. Your voice is mixed nicely to the front.
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Ember,
Thanks. Appreciate the listen and kind words.
Bob
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Great vibe here!! Really gets into your head. Very catchy, very intriguing stuff!! Take care. Greg
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Donna,
Thank you very much.
Bob
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Bob,
Another fine creation! I really enjoyed listening. The band sounds terrific and provides a wonderful aural showcase for your singing and song.
It's an inspired hook and I was captivated by the way you worked it.
All the best,
Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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Deej,
Much appreciated - thank you!
Bob
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Scott,
That's very nice of you - thanks!
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Bob
A few years ago Leon wrote a lyric called 5 minutes to midnight - quite a concern!
Excellent work on this, great delivery and lyric.
Really nice work.
Peter
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Derek,
Thanks very much!
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Kenny,
Thanks - I've really been enjoying your stuff as well.
Bob
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Thanks - much appreciated!
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Lawrence,
That's very kind of you - thanks!
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Janne,
Thank you - much appreciated!
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Greg,
Thanks so much.
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Bob.
Great vocal!
A bit smell of Bob Dylan.
A well-chosen and well-sounding arrangement.
I also think that arp guitar works great as Tommyad said.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Noel,
That is very appreciated - thank you.
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Peter,
Thanks - I appreciated that!
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Shigeki,
Thanks so much.
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You nailed it. I feel that way a lot these days.
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SpaceDog,
Thanks very much. I'm enjoying your new one as well.
Bob
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Update your Band-in-a-Box® 2024 for Windows® Today!
Update your Band-in-a-Box® 2024 for Windows for free with build 1111!
With this update, there's more control when saving images from the Print Preview window, we've added defaults to the MultiPicker for sorting and font size, updated printing options, updated RealTracks and other content, and addressed user-reported issues with the StylePicker, MIDI Soloists, key signature changes, and more!
Learn more about this free update for Band-in-a-Box® 2024 for Windows at www.pgmusic.com/support_windowsupdates.htm#1111
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 Review: 4.75 out of 5 Stars!
If you're looking for a in-depth review of the newest Band-in-a-Box® 2024 for Windows version, you'll definitely find it with Sound-Guy's latest review, Band-in-a-Box® 2024 for Windows Review: Incredible new capabilities to experiment, compose, arrange and mix songs.
A few excerpts:
"The Tracks view is possibly the single most powerful addition in 2024 and opens up a new way to edit and generate accompaniments. Combined with the new MultiPicker Library Window, it makes BIAB nearly perfect as an 'intelligent' composer/arranger program."
"MIDI SuperTracks partial generation showing six variations – each time the section is generated it can be instantly auditioned, re-generated or backed out to a previous generation – and you can do this with any track type. This is MAJOR! This takes musical experimentation and honing an arrangement to a new level, and faster than ever."
"Band in a Box continues to be an expansive musical tool-set for both novice and experienced musicians to experiment, compose, arrange and mix songs, as well as an extensive educational resource. It is huge, with hundreds of functions, more than any one person is likely to ever use. Yet, so is any DAW that I have used. BIAB can do some things that no DAW does, and this year BIAB has more DAW-like functions than ever."
Convenient Ways to Listen to Band-in-a-Box® Songs Created by Program Users!
The User Showcase Forum is an excellent place to share your Band-in-a-Box® songs and listen to songs other program users are creating!
There are other places you can listen to these songs too! Visit our User Showcase page to sort by genre, artist (forum name), song title, and date - each listing will direct you to the forum post for that song.
If you'd rather listen to these songs in one place, head to our Band-in-a-Box® Radio, where you'll have the option to select the genre playlist for your listening pleasure. This page has SoundCloud built in, so it won't redirect you. We've also added the link to the Artists SoundCloud page here, and a link to their forum post.
We hope you find some inspiration from this amazing collection of User Showcase Songs!
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