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#529389 03/19/19 11:35 AM
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Hi,

I made a song called The Clock. It deals with our relation with our earth. I made several songs of this topic, because it's concerning me and a lot of other people.
A while ago I posted another song on this forum about the same topic: Change the road.
The message looks a bit the same, but from another angle.
The lyrics were from last year, but I updated them. The same with the melody.
The style is called Novel, but I changed some instruments in it. along with the conga's I used a Japanese snare-instrument, the Koto and a House-Techno-Trance loop that symbolises the ticking of the clock.

I hope you enjoy the song.

https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130/the-clock

Hans Berkhout

The lyrics:
The Clock (c)HWBerkhout, 2019

I believed in politics
It made all work well
I listened to government
but their lies are packed so swell

I never listen to people
living in great wealth
They won't care for our environment
At least, that's how I felt

I trusted people
who know the state of our earth
But their promise to fight pollution
Is now covered in dirt

Many politicians speak words
that makes me sad
Why believe the United Nations?
While their lack of actions feel so bad

Chorus
No, don't wait until tomorrow
To see who saw the light
All words sound so hollow
And we can't sleep during the night

No, don't wait until tomorrow
But start doing what we must
If you feel your head's blown
keep faith in what you trust
like me

I like to listen to people
Who are able to give us hope
Let's start by join their movement
So we can do what others won't

No, don't wait until tomorrow
To see who saw the Light
Of course there will be sorrow
But in the end we win this fight

No don't wait until tomorrow
Just think of what to achieve
Let words don't sound hollow
and keep strong in that believe

No, don't wait until tomorrow
but join those who try
Those words will gain the power
where politicians stop to lie

Getting stronger by the hour
brings nature back on it's feet
So listen and shout it out loud
Indifference we'll beat!

'cause listen, listen and hear, the clock ticks...


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The lyrics seem really well thought out and definitely conveys a strong message. Thanks for sharing!


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Hi Hans,

Very nice song with an important message. I really like when lyrics has a message to the world... something to think about.
Unfortunately I don't think the world leaders will be listening, but maybe we - the insignificant people of the world - can spread the message through music. smile

Thanks a lot for sharing!
Will

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Hi Will,

Thanks for your compliments.
And yes I know it won't be easy to convince politicians. I once was one!
But stop trying makes it worse. Repeating the message will work (I hope)and music is the best carriage.

Hans


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Hi Ember, thanks again for your compliments.
Have you found any mistakes in the lyrics?

Hans


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Wow - really well done, Hans smile A really well written tune, and a great message. I thought the lyrics and your vocals fit perfectly with the backing tracks.

Thanks for sharing!


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Hello Hans ...

I really like this! Your vocal is great and the backing tracks are stellar. I like the quiet acoustic guitar breaks. Great message that the world leaders will certainly put a deaf ear to. Excellent song and delivery! Best to you ...

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A written a good hopeful protest song...
I enjoyed the listen.
Quote:

Ps: Jim, what is the meaning of those signs under you name? I can think of Religious, but mainy for the sake of Peace and Love. Is that correct?

They can be whatever you want, but I think your guess is pretty close.

BTW... I've got protest song similar to this one...
It also has clock ticks smile ...
But I would say it is in a darker vein...
Not quite so hopeful...
Perhaps someday I will share it.

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Hi Jim,

Thanks for your -kind of- explanation of those signs.
But to be honest, it was not that difficult to quess. They were pretty clear, but I thought/hoped there was a deeper meaning hidden in it. Is there? Maybe that darker vein?

And what a coincidence you als have a same sort of Clock-song: But I can tell you I'm not that naive as it sounds in my song. In a way I did it to support my oldest son. For some months now he became councilor in our city for the Greens. And they want to believe these kind of messages can help. And sometimes they do, in our country and some other European countries it is happening a bit.
But I bet he hasn't heard my song. I think I will use your signs for myself...(sigh...)

Jim, can't you post your darker Clockwork-song? Maybe we can mix dark and hope?

Hans


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Nice sound on this Hans!! Clever use of the rhythm section to mimic a ticking clock! Mix sounds good! Thanks, Torrey




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Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Jim,

Thanks for your -kind of- explanation of those signs.
But to be honest, it was not that difficult to quess. They were pretty clear, but I thought/hoped there was a deeper meaning hidden in it. Is there? Maybe that darker vein?

And what a coincidence you als have a same sort of Clock-song: But I can tell you I'm not that naive as it sounds in my song. In a way I did it to support my oldest son. For some months now he became councilor in our city for the Greens. And they want to believe these kind of messages can help. And sometimes they do, in our country and some other European countries it is happening a bit.
But I bet he hasn't heard my song. I think I will use your signs for myself...(sigh...)

Jim, can't you post your darker Clockwork-song? Maybe we can mix dark and hope?

Hans

We all have to hope, even if its mixed with some pessimism...
Songs & protests, at the least, sheds light on the problems & injustices in this world...
Feel free to use the signs...
Sometimes its nice to be able to say something without saying anything...


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Very nice song. Backtrack gave me a Jimmy Buffett vibe. Super vocal and lyric. Well done


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