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#529980 - 03/24/19 05:36 AM [User Showcase] Your Kiss
Registered: 09/28/14
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Bob P Offline
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This is the latest song I finished. This song is about me and when I met the women that eventually became my wife. That kiss changed everything.....

Your Kiss

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RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~368:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065
RealTracks in song: 1593:Fiddle, Background Pop16ths Ev 065
RealTracks in song: 2691:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBalladBrentSimple Ev 085
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RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride

Lyrics:

Your Kiss Changed Everything

Verse (1)
I stopped believing in love
It’s like some fool just made it up
I built my walls as tall as heaven
Didn’t think I needed anyone

Chorus
But I found you in my darkest place
When I thought there was no way
I could ever love
You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed
Oh I’ll never be the same
Cause your kiss changed everything

Verse (2)
We kissed for hours in my truck
Until that morning sun came up
You were everything I wanted
It took one look and I was in love

Chorus
But I found you in my darkest place
When I thought there was no way
I could ever love
You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed
Oh I’ll never be the same
Cause your kiss changed everything

Bridge:
Against all odds
Against all my fears
You healed my heart
You dried my tears

Chorus
But I found you in my darkest place
When I thought there was no way
I could ever love
You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed
Oh I’ll never be the same
Cause your kiss changed everything

© 2019 Robert M Poznanovich, BMI


Edited by Bob P (03/24/19 08:49 AM)

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#529987 - 03/24/19 07:11 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Really great vocals on this Bob. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
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#529994 - 03/24/19 09:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Wow! You crafted a nice melody. Vocal is fantastic. Thanks. I enjoyed this.

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#530029 - 03/24/19 06:20 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Scott C Offline
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Excellent vocal. Very pretty backtrack. I imagined your wife loved this song as well. Well done.

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#530089 - 03/25/19 09:02 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Jim Offline
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Great lyrics, melody, vocals, feeling, & performance...
Very Garth Brookish type of country style...
It should fit nicely in his repertoire as well in yours...
Good job... I like it!
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#530110 - 03/25/19 10:28 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Verse (1)

"I stopped believing in love
It’s like some fool just made it up
I built my walls as tall as heaven
Didn’t think I needed anyone"

So simple yet says so much. I think that's some really terrific writing. And the rest of the lyric is right there, too. Your vocal sits so perfectly in this song. Your vocal reminds me a little bit of Richie McDonald. Actually it reminds me of him quite a bit.

Loved it! One thing for consideration ... perhaps let that distortion guitar have a louder voice on its short solo. But man, this is just so good!

best to you ...

Alan
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#530111 - 03/25/19 10:40 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Bob P Offline
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Thanks Alan for the feedback and advice on the mix. Being deaf in one ear makes mixing a challenge particularly when panning . I will adjust the volume— very much appreciated.

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#530212 - 03/26/19 01:23 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Originally Posted By: Bob P
Being deaf in one ear makes mixing a challenge particularly when panning.

Well, listen like Brian and mix in mono - it can sound as good as stereo and often more powerful.
Seriously - the stereo mix is pretty good given your circumstance BUT if you centre everything and get your levels right (remember to do the same with any stereo effects), I think this song would shine as brightly. In the mastering stage a good ME will sprinkle a little magic dust with delay/reverb to give it THAT feel.


Edited by rayc (03/26/19 01:23 AM)
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#530245 - 03/26/19 06:38 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Oh yeah! Way to go. This is the best I’ve heard from you. Well written, great vocal and melody and very well produced. I enjoyed it very much, Tom

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#530260 - 03/26/19 07:22 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Wow - what a tune! You did a remarkable job here. You can tell it's from the heart, and your vocals are outstanding. It flows beautifully, and is truly a touching tribute.

You should be really proud of your work on this one - thanks so much for sharing smile
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#530334 - 03/26/19 06:22 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: tommyad]
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Bob P Offline
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Originally Posted By: tommyad
Oh yeah! Way to go. This is the best I’ve heard from you. Well written, great vocal and melody and very well produced. I enjoyed it very much, Tom


Thanks TOM for the feedback

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#530392 - 03/27/19 08:17 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Always touching to read personal backstory behind a song, brings another dimension for the lyrics, I had a tear in my eye already in the chorus. Great story, beautiful melody, emotional vocal delivery. That solo guitar might sound better with bit more breadth and reverb.

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#530399 - 03/27/19 09:02 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Hey Bob, wowzers! The arrangement is a pleasure to listen to and I dig the overall timbres. Adding the fiddle to this is a nice touch. Very captivating lyrics. Thanks for sharing!
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#530519 - 03/28/19 04:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Excellent song! Wonderful, heart felt lyrics and vocals.

Mix sounds great to me. Actually everything sounds great, well done!

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#530591 - 03/28/19 12:32 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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"But I found you in my darkest place
When I thought there was no way
I could ever love
You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed
Oh I’ll never be the same
Cause your kiss changed everything"

Wow! This is a great song and that chorus is so strong.

No need to parse it out...all is good.

Back for another listen....

J&B

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#530593 - 03/28/19 12:48 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Nice song, Bob. Nicely produced. The acoustic guitars and piano sound especially good - crisp, clean, clear.

Good mix throughout.

fj

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#531040 - 04/01/19 10:37 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: Bob P]
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Really nice Bob!! Very pretty music and a wonderful passionate vocal. Everything is so well done here!! Take care. Greg

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