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#566118 - 11/24/19 05:46 PM [User Showcase] Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 249 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities ChicagoBob Apprentice Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 249 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities	Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) I thought I would post this new version with a new women singer. I also changed with a few lyrics. Trying to do something positive tonight since I lost a lot of my work including this working file in Logic Pro. If any of you use iCloud to store music projects please see my warning in the Apple Mac forum--Logic Pro isn't compatible with iCloud so don't save projects there without another backup. I learned the hard way and lost five years of song ideas. . BIAB RealTracks included RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~368:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 1593:Fiddle, Background Pop16ths Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 2691:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBalladBrentSimple Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 1167:Guitar, Electric, Soloist RockBalladBrent Ev 065 RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride Lyrics: Your Kiss Changed Everything Verse (1) I stopped believing in love It’s like some fool just made it up I built my walls as tall as heaven Didn’t think I needed anyone Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Verse (2) We sat for hours in your truck Until that morning sun came up You were everything I wanted It took one look and I was in love Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Bridge: Against all odds Against all my fears You healed my heart You dried my tears Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything © 2019 Robert M Poznanovich, BMI Edited by Andrew - PG Music (01/25/21 10:36 PM)
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#566159 - 11/24/19 08:54 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 5316 Loc: Cooran Queensland Australia rayc Veteran Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 5316 Loc: Cooran Queensland Australia	Bob, Lovely work. There's some "cracks" or clips at the beginning of some phrases in the vocal - the very 1st syllable is a clear example. Could be the compressor kicking in, a touch of plosive or a little too hot for the recording level. Easy fix - either by resetting the comp or my manual reduction in the pre fx volume envelope. Lovely story and backing - wonderfully emotive singing too. I did find the guitar solo a little thin, aggressive and lacking the warmth of the rest of the song. That may be a simple matter of EQing some back in or using a gentle saturator. Top stuff. _________________________ Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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#566176 - 11/25/19 12:48 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 06/05/12 Posts: 16554 Loc: Melbourne, Australia AudioTrack Veteran Registered: 06/05/12 Posts: 16554 Loc: Melbourne, Australia	Sensational. I had to immediately turn the volume up further. This song needs every bit of attention possible. The vocals and harmonies are outstanding. Absolutely everything is outstanding. This is absolutely worthy of airplay. Work in progress? Ha, who are you kidding? _________________________ BIAB & RB2023 Win.(Audiophile), SonarPlatinum, Izotope Prod.Bundle, Roland RD-1000, SynthogyIvory, Kontakt, Focusrite 18i20, KetronSD2, NS40M Monitors, Pioneer ActiveMonitors, AKG K271 Studio H'phones
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#566290 - 11/25/19 10:33 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 6737 Loc: Davis, CA Greg Johnson Veteran Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 6737 Loc: Davis, CA	Beautiful song!! Really well done in every way! Vocals are wonderful.....where did you find her? As much as I love Brent, I think that guitar is a bit too heavy for this tune. Great job!!! Take care. Greg
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#566344 - 11/25/19 01:01 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 7088 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada Scott C Veteran Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 7088 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada	Lovely vocal. Super back track. Well done _________________________ Scott Collingwood https://soundcloud.com/scottt709 https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca
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#566464 - 11/25/19 09:06 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 02/20/10 Posts: 2144 Loc: Maryland TuneMonger Veteran Registered: 02/20/10 Posts: 2144 Loc: Maryland	Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! One of the best things I've heard here on the Showcase. Great work. _________________________ Windows 10, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 6i6, Komplete keyboard, Sony Acid Music Studio 11, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak
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#566604 - 11/26/19 07:36 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 02/15/17 Posts: 3414 Deryk - PG Music PG Music Staff Registered: 02/15/17 Posts: 3414	Wow - what a lovely tune A truly gorgeous song. Your vocals are super sweet on this one, and it flows beautifully well. Those harmonies are seriously top notch, and the mixing work on this is stunning too. I wouldn't bat an eyelash if I heard this on the radio. Thanks for sharing! _________________________ Cheers, Deryk
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#566642 - 11/26/19 10:15 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 06/16/00 Posts: 1944 Loc: Texas Jim Expert Registered: 06/16/00 Posts: 1944 Loc: Texas	Its been a while... So I'm glad to see a post from you... Another nice one from you... I also like that line "you were a thief that I needed"... Perhaps it could possibly be a more descriptive title for your song... _________________________ Jim †=☮&♥
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#566721 - 11/26/19 12:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 18703 Loc: Hamlin NY MarioD Veteran Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 18703 Loc: Hamlin NY	Loved that intro and the way the song builds. Your instrumentation is spot on for this song. Your vocal is very strong but those lyrics are exceptional. So don't change a thing. This is one of the best on this forum. _________________________ Sometimes, when you cry no one sees your tears when you hurt no one sees your pain when you're sad no one sees your sorrow But fart just once 64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software and some hardware
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#566777 - 11/26/19 05:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 06/19/17 Posts: 2933 Loc: Victoria, BC Ember - PG Music PG Music Staff Registered: 06/19/17 Posts: 2933 Loc: Victoria, BC	The versus and chorus are all equally powerful. Thanks for sharing! _________________________ Cheers, Ember
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#566791 - 11/26/19 06:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: Jim]
Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 249 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities ChicagoBob Apprentice Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 249 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities	Thanks everyone. I appreciate the feedback. This is the non mastered version. I recently lost the Logic Pro project files to this song so I need to recreate everything again including all the original piano and the edits to BIAB. I do have 2 of the 3 BIAB songs that were pieced into the song and the vocals. I was really upset with myself for not having checked my backups to insure they were good. I needed this push of confidence to start working on this again which you’re comments have provided me. Edited by Bob P (11/26/19 06:13 PM)
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#566909 - 11/27/19 06:13 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 02/03/16 Posts: 1660 Loc: Germany Crossroads Expert Registered: 02/03/16 Posts: 1660 Loc: Germany	Hi Bob, that's a classic and classy ballad - very nice from A-Z. The lady sings extremely beautifully, great backing track. Enjoyed my listen a lot. Cheers, Stefan Edited by Crossroads (11/27/19 06:14 AM) _________________________ All the videos & songs with lyrics: http://www.nachtsheim.de/BJN/BJN-Videos.html Guest book: http://www.onlex.de/_gbuch.php?username=SpaceFart YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeS46zV9s38WRYx7LCVgkhQ?view_as=subscriber&pbjreload=10
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#569436 - 12/08/19 09:39 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 10/31/08 Posts: 18049 Loc: Australia Noel96 Veteran Registered: 10/31/08 Posts: 18049 Loc: Australia	Hi Bob, I've just had a listen to this version of "Your Kiss". It's excellent. Everything sits so well together and the singer really does a fine, fine job with your lyrics and melody. This is wonderful listening. Regards, Noel _________________________ LINKS TO MY BIAB/RB SONGS audios on Soundcloud videos on VIMEO
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