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#566118 - 11/24/19 05:46 PM
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Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
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Your Kiss (feat. Sierra) I thought I would post this new version with a new women singer. I also changed with a few lyrics. Trying to do something positive tonight since I lost a lot of my work including this working file in Logic Pro. If any of you use iCloud to store music projects please see my warning in the Apple Mac forum--Logic Pro isn't compatible with iCloud so don't save projects there without another backup. I learned the hard way and lost five years of song ideas. . BIAB RealTracks included RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~368:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 1593:Fiddle, Background Pop16ths Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 2691:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBalladBrentSimple Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 1167:Guitar, Electric, Soloist RockBalladBrent Ev 065 RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride Lyrics: Your Kiss Changed Everything Verse (1) I stopped believing in love It’s like some fool just made it up I built my walls as tall as heaven Didn’t think I needed anyone Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Verse (2) We sat for hours in your truck Until that morning sun came up You were everything I wanted It took one look and I was in love Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Bridge: Against all odds Against all my fears You healed my heart You dried my tears Chorus But I found you in my lonely place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything © 2019 Robert M Poznanovich, BMI
Edited by Andrew - PG Music (01/25/21 10:36 PM)
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#566159 - 11/24/19 08:54 PM
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Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
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Bob,
Lovely work.
There's some "cracks" or clips at the beginning of some phrases in the vocal - the very 1st syllable is a clear example. Could be the compressor kicking in, a touch of plosive or a little too hot for the recording level.
Easy fix - either by resetting the comp or my manual reduction in the pre fx volume envelope.
Lovely story and backing - wonderfully emotive singing too.
I did find the guitar solo a little thin, aggressive and lacking the warmth of the rest of the song. That may be a simple matter of EQing some back in or using a gentle saturator.
Top stuff.
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#566176 - 11/25/19 12:48 AM
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Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
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Sensational. I had to immediately turn the volume up further. This song needs every bit of attention possible.
The vocals and harmonies are outstanding. Absolutely everything is outstanding.
This is absolutely worthy of airplay.
Work in progress? Ha, who are you kidding?
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#566290 - 11/25/19 10:33 AM
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Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
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Beautiful song!! Really well done in every way! Vocals are wonderful.....where did you find her? As much as I love Brent, I think that guitar is a bit too heavy for this tune. Great job!!! Take care. Greg
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#566344 - 11/25/19 01:01 PM
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Lovely vocal. Super back track. Well done
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#566464 - 11/25/19 09:06 PM
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! One of the best things I've heard here on the Showcase. Great work.
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#566604 - 11/26/19 07:36 AM
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Wow - what a lovely tune  A truly gorgeous song. Your vocals are super sweet on this one, and it flows beautifully well. Those harmonies are seriously top notch, and the mixing work on this is stunning too. I wouldn't bat an eyelash if I heard this on the radio. Thanks for sharing!
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#566642 - 11/26/19 10:15 AM
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Its been a while...
So I'm glad to see a post from you...
Another nice one from you...
I also like that line "you were a thief that I needed"...
Perhaps it could possibly be a more descriptive title for your song...
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#566721 - 11/26/19 12:40 PM
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Loved that intro and the way the song builds. Your instrumentation is spot on for this song. Your vocal is very strong but those lyrics are exceptional. So don't change a thing.
This is one of the best on this forum.
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#566777 - 11/26/19 05:04 PM
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The versus and chorus are all equally powerful. Thanks for sharing!
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#566791 - 11/26/19 06:04 PM
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Re: Your Kiss (feat. Sierra)
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Thanks everyone. I appreciate the feedback. This is the non mastered version. I recently lost the Logic Pro project files to this song so I need to recreate everything again including all the original piano and the edits to BIAB. I do have 2 of the 3 BIAB songs that were pieced into the song and the vocals.
I was really upset with myself for not having checked my backups to insure they were good.
I needed this push of confidence to start working on this again which you’re comments have provided me.
Edited by Bob P (11/26/19 06:13 PM)
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#566909 - 11/27/19 06:13 AM
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Hi Bob,
that's a classic and classy ballad - very nice from A-Z.
The lady sings extremely beautifully, great backing track.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Cheers,
Stefan
Edited by Crossroads (11/27/19 06:14 AM)
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#569436 - 12/08/19 09:39 PM
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Hi Bob,
I've just had a listen to this version of "Your Kiss".
It's excellent. Everything sits so well together and the singer really does a fine, fine job with your lyrics and melody.
This is wonderful listening.
Regards,
Noel
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