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Just something I quickly rustled up this morning. Hope you enjoy - thanks in advance for listening and for any and all of your feedback!

The song: https://jamesdelsono.bandcamp.com/track/heart-on-fire

The voice: done with Audacity and with my usual ignorance of anything remotely technical as far as production is concerned.

The lyrics:

HEART ON FIRE

With my head upright
And my heart on fire,
With my eyes burning bright,
This is my desire

For this much forsaken world
Sometimes warm, often cold:
That, through peace and not the sword,
May come true the Kingdom of the Lord,

That we may learn to love one another
Like a son, like a daughter;
Like a father, like a mother
Like a sister, like a brother,

And when the rain
Seems too strong ...
When everything
Is just wrong,

When our fate
Seems just unfair
And when, to help,
Nobody is there ...

[4 BARS REST]

With my head upright
And my heart on fire,
In my eyes' shining light,
You can see my prayer ...

Our Father, who art in heaven, hallowed be Thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come, Thy Will Be Done, on Earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us today our daily bread and forgive our tresspasses as we forgive those who trespass against us,
And let us not fall into temptation, but deliver us from evil ...

Amen.

[BRIDGE: 8 BARS TACET]

And when the rain
Seems too strong ...
When everything
Is just wrong,

With my head upright
And my heart on fire
With my eyes burning bright
I repeat my prayer:

Thy Kingdom come. Thy Will be done.

Amen.


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****** Song Summary *************
Title: Heart on Fire - 11 December 2019
File:11 December 2019.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 90, Length (m:s)=3:33
No intro. 76 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 76. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _BUBLPOP.STY (21st Century Radio)

RealTracks in style: 1929:Synth, Bass, EuroDance VerseBass Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1861:Synth, Rhythm, EuroDance ChorusHousePianoOffBeat Ev16 120
Loop in Song: HipHop\Old School - la_flava_beat93a drums ev16.wav
RealDrums [in style:SynthDrumsDanceRock^1-a: Bass and Snare , b: Snare and Bass

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James,

The backing track sounds good. Good thoughts in your lyric.

The vocal is a bit loud and "boom-y" in comparison to the track.
If you could bring it down some and reduce some of the low end on the vocal it might sit better in the track...

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Thanks so much for listening, floyd jane! I swear, my ears must be on the wrong way around, because everyone - on almost every song! - says that my vocals are too loud compared to the track! But, if everyone says it, they must be right, of course ... so I'll just have to dial down the vocals even more and see what happens, even if it feels different and/or unusual at first :-) Thanks again!

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James,
The feeling and tone of your voice holds the attention.
Yes, vocal levels are a little high ( I have to listening on `phone and 2 types of speakers to get them right).
I enjoyed the sincere thoughts you expressed!

Robert

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Thanks Robert! Appreciated :-)

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Hello James,

like always a very thoughtful lyric presented in a really convincing way.

Like Floyd mentiones: The vox and the backing track could be closer together, but that's just a minor comment - the main thing is the lyrics.

Regards,

Stefan

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"That we may learn to love one another
Like a son, like a daughter;
Like a father, like a mother
Like a sister, like a brother,"


That!


Enjoyed the production and message.


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Another thoughtful meditative song...
Good backing tracks...
For the introspective lyrics of the recitation...
All nicely done...
Enjoyed it.

BTW...
Audacity has a "Contrast" selection...
Under the Analyze Menu...
You can use it to compare & adjust your vocal track...
To the musical bed...
I'll wager there are YouTube tutorial videos showing how to use it...
I hope this is helpful.


Last edited by Jim; 12/13/19 06:53 AM. Reason: BTW:

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Janice & Bud: thanks!!!

Jim: thanks for the tip!!! I'll have a look at it now :-)

Happy Christmas, one and all :-)

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A wonderful message on top of a very appropriate backing track! The recording/delivery of the voice sound very good to me! Enjoyed it James! Take care. Greg

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