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https://soundcloud.com/belladonna-amaya/the-ghosts-of-eldoradoThe Ghosts of El Dorado @ Donna J Evans 3/15/20 Verse 1 Many stories have been told Of a place, covered in gold Men lost their lives to behold Say the ghosts of Eldorado There’s a fever that strikes When glitter shines in the night Demons drive madness to fight Warn the ghosts of Eldorado Chorus So, if you’re going for the gold Go where fortunes can’t be stole Safe in a vault that Jesus holds In that sacred city of gold Say the ghosts of Eldorado Verse 2 Fools obsessed still search for it Ambitions of the famous and rich Earthly pleasures bait and switch Caution the ghosts of Eldorado The wise keep eyes on the prize Heavenly treasures don’t disguise Jewels you keep when you die Cross that golden river to Eldorado Chorus Outro Seek fortunes that can’t be stole If you’re going for the gold Safe in a vault that Jesus holds Say the ghosts of Eldorado Eldorado, Eldorado 12STACS.STY Slow 12-String Guitar
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Nice write, with some clever lines in there. An enjoyable listen. You might want to change the spelling to the more common "El Dorado". Or not, it's your song. 
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Thanks for your comments. Yeah!, I probably should have used the more common expression. Glad you liked it.
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Wow!! I love, love, love the message of this. Cool write!!
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Nice message. I wasn't expecting the tie between El Dorado vs. Heaven.
Very clever!
Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you SisterGolden Hair for your wonderful comments.
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Thank you jamestoffee for your comments.
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What a lovely song, super lyrics melody and well chosen backing too. Enjoyed my listed
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Thank Furry for your kind comments. Stay safe in these strange times.
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Enjoyed my listen. Nice lyrics and message.
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Thanks Charlie for your comments.
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Really well done - I thought the lyrics worked perfectly with the song, and the vocals are top notch. Nicely mixed too. Thanks for sharing 
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Nice tune – great lyrics! Thanks for sharing! :-)
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Thanks Deryk and Molsenouse for your comments.
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Nicely done Donna!! Music is pleasant and the melody has a nice catchy quality! Good choice for the band too! A good effort all around! Take care. Greg
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Very nice, Belladonna. Original theme; and I very much liked
the symbolism.
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Good sound and nice job with the lyrics! You can't ask for much more than that. How did you come up with the album art? That's really cool as well!
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Cool fade in. That's rare. Neat concept and good lyrics. Your vocals fit this style and mood. Good one.
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Thanks Greg, Ed, HearToLearn and JPT for your nice comments. Have been away for a while but hope to get back into recording this year.
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I can almost hear Neil Young singing this.
Interesting story and calm, effective backing.
The voice jumps out louder on occasion so you might wcare to add a little compression to deal with that.
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Thanks Rayc for your comments. Learning to get an ear for the mix. Never thought of Neil Young doing this, but yeah!!
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Reminds me of the philosopher's stone, the search for the Holy Grail, alchemy and all that. So well done, Belladonna. I love this:
"Seek fortunes that can’t be stole
If you’re going for the gold
Safe in a vault that Jesus holds
Say the ghosts of Eldorado
Eldorado, Eldorado"
Fortunes that can't be stole. Right? Keep up the good word.
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This is really good. Loved those backing tracks that fit your vocal like a glove. Outstanding lyrics sung by a very strong vocal. I agree that your vocal did get a tab loud in certain areas. Not a show stopper but if you could control them it would just add the finishing polish to this diamond. I use Waves Vocal Rider. It is on sale now for $89: https://www.soundonsound.com/reviews/waves-vocal-riderhttps://www.waves.com/plugins#sort:path~type~order=.default-order~number~asc|views:view=grid-view|paging:currentPage=0|paging:number=20
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Thanks Babu for your nice comments.
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Thanks Mario. I use Mixcraft 8, Windows I assume this works with it and is easier than doing EQ, compression and all that other stuff that I do not know how to use.
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Dear Ms. 'Belladonna'... You write some of the most sublime lyrics I've ever heard/read: "So, if you’re going for the gold
Go where fortunes can’t be stole.."It's all there, in two lines, the contrast between the earthly, crazed, soul-scarring lust for the 'yellow metal' and the more difficult, yet ultimately more rewarding spiritual search for the inner gold of redemption. That 12STACS.STY Slow 12-String Guitar you used? An impeccable choice. Combined with your philosophical, yet simply comprehended lyrics, The Ghosts of Eldorado comes off with an almost mythical feel and tone. I'd bet that the late, great movie director John Huston would have jumped at the chance to include your song in his now-classic film, "The Treasure of the Sierra Madre". It perfectly describes the subtext of the plot. Ms. Evans, 'The Muse' is working through you like a charm !!! LOREN (a.k.a. 'bluage')
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Belladonna,
Very nice write on this one—admire the use of near rhymes to keep your lyrics on point, not easily done and they all work really well. And the melody and classic country backing work well. I think I would have liked you to go up on that last “city of gold” in the chorus before the outdo, just to give it a change up . . . and maybe again going up on “Eldorado” in the second to last line in the outro. Just a suggestion to think about. Nicely done!
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Hi Donna ...
It's a real pleasure to hear a new song from you! And this is a really nice offering! Great lyric with nice choices in the backing tracks. Very nice, indeed! Wishing you the very best ...
Alan
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Inventive song subject, excellent lryic, very nice
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Thanks Loren, you are always so elegant in your comments.
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Thanks Deej56 for your comments. I like your suggestions about a little more variation in the chorus and outro. If I do a new recording I will try to incorporate that one.
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Thanks Alan for your kind comments, hope to do some more in a month or so.
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Thanks Elliott for your comments. I looked at your music page and read your bio, very nice.
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Always enjoy a nice easy listen, and this song fits the bill perfectly. Nice, laid back, and pleasant melody. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks Ed Z for your nice comment.
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Donna,
This is a great song... Love the lyrics and such a strong vocal.
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Very cool vocal on this song. Loved the story in the lyric. Well done
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