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EdZ314 #615892 09/20/20 12:42 PM
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Originally Posted By: EdZ314
Hi Peter, Leon - This is an excellent write. Very strong lyrics. Has a great Americana sound to it (in my opinion). Agree with the other comments on mixing, performances, guitar.


Thanks (It could also be Australiana:)

Peter

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Great listen, Peter & Leon. Very well done.


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PeterF #615927 09/20/20 08:04 PM
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Hi, Peter & Leon !

What a superb tune
and so delicately delivered too !
Vocals and guitar solo are
just great ! WOW !

Cheers
Dani

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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Whoa, Peter & Leon. Yes, that's way too sad for me. I'm actually tearing up. Great guitar to take us out of such a tragedy, Peter. Emotional lyrics well written and sung, Leon.


Thanks Marty, Bud said Janice had the same reaction.
I'll have to post a jaunty one next!

Peter

PeterF #615943 09/20/20 10:25 PM
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It is a sad story and you tell it very well Peter.
Not sure about the voice doubling. For me it takes away the lonely man idea and he's not alone.

Still good though,

Vic

olemon #616041 09/21/20 12:38 PM
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Originally Posted By: olemon
The song is a bit lengthy for my attention span, but it's all well done.

Others mentioned that surprise around the 2:00 mark and I really like that too.


Thanks glad you liked the bridge.

Peter

Al-David #616042 09/21/20 12:39 PM
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Originally Posted By: Al-David
Gentlemen ...

This is really, really nice! Everyone did their part superbly. Love the delivery. When the b/g vocals come in at 1:58, and then again at 4:10, the song just soars! Great vocal, guitar work and a FABULOUS WRITE. so, what's not to like? Nothing!

Well done ... a real nice listen. Wishing you both the best. Please be safe ...

Alan


Thanks Alan really appreciate your very encouraging comments.

Peter

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Originally Posted By: dcuny
Lyrically, great start. But you got me hooked at the chorus:

Quote:
Always thought I’d be her sad story
Never dreamed she would be mine


I've gotta love a song that out and out proclaims what it's about. laugh


Thanks David.

Peter

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Hey Peter and Leon,

This sounds great!

Little Dylan twang in there. Love that.

smile

Derochette #616103 09/22/20 02:05 AM
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Originally Posted By: Dero13
Hello PeterF,

Beautiful endearing composition with a well done musical arrangement. I liked the lead guitar and the cello is in its place. Very good neat work.


Kindly regard

Dero13
alias JaniJackFlash


Much appreciated.

Peter

Scott C #616187 09/22/20 05:53 PM
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Originally Posted By: Scott C
Very cool lyric and chord progressions. Excellent vocal and harmonies guys. Loved the slow strummed chords very cool. Loved the way the chorus came in . Well done Very cool guitar solo Peter. Cool tone


Thanks a lot Scott.

Peter

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Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#

Peter & Leon,
Solid write! Nice guitars, especially solo. Strong, straight forward lyrics. Listens very well. That bridge really opened up ears smile Thank you for sharing!

Misha.


Thanks Misha appreciate that.

Peter

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Originally Posted By: Deej56
Peter,

Gotta love a sad song. This has some really sweet lines in the write (and I like the little parenthetical asides). The bridge really resonates . . . nicely done. And, yeah, that outdo is very cool. Nice collab, gents!

All my best,

Deej


Thanks a lot Deej.

Peter

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Your guitar intro hooked me in, and then the 60 seconds of guitar at the end was just...wow. You don't fail to disappoint, that's for sure.

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Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Peter & Leon !

What a superb tune
and so delicately delivered too !
Vocals and guitar solo are
just great ! WOW !

Cheers
Dani


Appreciate that Dani.

Peter

Originally Posted By: edshaw
Great listen, Peter & Leon. Very well done.


Thanks Ed.

Peter

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Sadness is a powerful emotion.
You took it's power and created a beautiful song.

Well done.

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Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Hey Peter and Leon,

This sounds great!

Little Dylan twang in there. Love that.

smile


Thanks David.

Peter

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Originally Posted By: vicarn
It is a sad story and you tell it very well Peter.
Not sure about the voice doubling. For me it takes away the lonely man idea and he's not alone.

Still good though,

Vic


Thanks for the vocal perspective appreciate that.

Peter

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Well, I (Janice) cried when I first read the lyric and then I cried again when I listened. These words are powerful as is the accompaniment. Leon's voice sounds so plaintive, which is just right for this theme and the band, especially Peter's guitar was a perfect match.

We often talk about how everybody has something they are dealing with and these lines represent
that so well:

"Everybody’s got their own little tragedy
I’m just a man I’m not unique [not all all]"

Powerful lyric, vocals, band and superb outro!

And I (Bud) have little to add to the above other than the mix is excellent!

Well done y'all!

J&B

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Originally Posted By: CaptainMoto
Sadness is a powerful emotion.
You took it's power and created a beautiful song.

Well done.


Thanks

Peter

Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
Your guitar intro hooked me in, and then the 60 seconds of guitar at the end was just...wow. You don't fail to disappoint, that's for sure.


Appreciate those comments, thanks.

Peter

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