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This song was born from an Instrumental I was developing. I was noodling around and playing a repetitive riff that reminded me of the Twilight Zone. I added a few more tracks and then sent them to Ray and Robert. While Robert was working on the lyrics Ray and I were sending tracks back and forth and the backtrack slowly developed. I must say Ray brought most of the color to the song with his bass track and his rhythm tracks. Robert brought a very cool lyric and an excellent vocal. He really had to climb up into his upper register for this song.

Incardine

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Drums RealDrums Rock Thrash EV16
RB Cello 3267
I used a piano midi file that was played back with a DrawOrgan vst Instrument then bounced to an audio file.
RB Synth pad 1267
I used the BIAB DAW Plugin to set the song up.
Song was mixed in Studio One 5 and Mastered in Studio One 5 Project.

'Will all great Neptune's ocean wash this blood clean from my hand?
No, this my hand will rather the multitudinous seas incarnadine,
making the green one red' Macbeth

Incarnadine

her lips correct my eyes
my eyes forgive her tongue
unstrung her pearls all undone
a game of forfeits to the end
we lose to ascend
ascend

my reason mind my child`s eye
fears the painted devil sly
her diamond dagger carves a sign
Incarnadine
my curse my anodyne

false face must hide
hide what the false heart knows
crows tear the bloody rose
a game of forfeits to the end
we lose to ascend
ascend

all the seas she turns to red
my better senses all are fled
her diamond dagger carves a sign
Incarnadine
the bread and the wine

© Robert Cordrey Jan. 2021

Scott - Guitars
Ray - Guitars and Bass


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Great swirling sound. Well performed by all. Poetic lyrics. Vocals hit the mark. I like it. You guys work well together. Nice use of the band too.


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Love it!

This might be my favorite yet, and I've liked everything you guys have done.

Just a really good mood piece, lots of attentional to detail that makes it an interesting listen.

All three of you sound great!

Excellent job on the mix too, Scott, sounds fabulous through the 'phones, well done.

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Thanks, Scott, for the opportunity to participate once again.
It was a fun song to play on...I hope that came through.


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Hey team,
A level up! A bit Pink Floydish and mellow Jethro Tullish, but mostly Spirit Level!
Scott, excellent theme and sound! Robert... I think I can understand what a challenge this was to sing it so high, but came out beautiful! A+ lyrics and phrasing. Ray, excellent bass playing and arrangement! But I really think bass should be LOUDER, at least in some places it should come out with force. Liked it! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.

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That was great!
So nicely arranged and performed.

Ethereal yet powerful.

Loved it!

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Hi guys
A moody and intriguing piece, well played and very impressively sung.
Regards,
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Spirit Level,

The sound and aura of this tune is so Spirit Level—really encapsulates your sound. Musically, the mix is without flaw, to my ears at least. Robert’s vocal is stellar . . . maybe the best I’ve heard him—just hits all the right notes. I’ll confess, I have no idea what the song is about—but for something like this, I’m not sure it matters. The mood it sets wins the day. Impressive listen!

My best to you all,

Deej

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Hi guys,

what a great collab. Very poetic and moody... Great work on the guitars. A perfect mix, too. Remarkable!

Cheers,

Stefan

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Hi, Scott, Ray and Robert !


What a superb co-op !
What a game with chords and sounds !
I did find this tune most interesting
and so superbly produced,sung
and played too !

I guess you could open up
what carnadine is for a kind
of creature ? the devil or
the saint or both ?

Congrats to all three of you
for this masterpiece !

Cheers
Dani

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What a wonderful combination of your talents!! The Spirit Level keeps on rising!! You guys really have a feel that is a wonderful fusion.......sometimes the whole is greater than the sum of its parts (which, in this case, are all very good to begin with)!!! Love it!! Take care. Greg

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Thanks to all those listening and commenting.
On the lyrics; I wrote "incarnadine" in my messy notebook liking the sound, and having only a vague idea of the meaning. Scott`s cool demo sent me looking for something with mood- probably a bit dark. Looking up the word led to the Shakespeare quote and memories of the shivers Lady Macbeth gave me reading the play in school.
I beg the Bard`s forgiveness for adapting his amazing lines for the song.
A true collaboration this- a few days in creation and weeks to finesse.

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This is definitely one of your best. A bit dark and dreamy. A Pink Floyd -Moody Blues feel to it. Ray and Robert come through and Scott’s guitar style works well. I enjoyed my listen,Tom

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A non frenetic Airplane meets the Bard.

The smooth, dreamy, contemplative vibe and fine vocal/instrumental performances
well complement one another.

Scott's Twilight hints were cool throughout.

The back and forth Scott and Ray went through was certainly worth the time!

Nice collab y'all!

J&B

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Spirit Level,

I agree - label this "your best". A Great sound! Sort of SanFran Acid Folk.

Excellent job by all. Nice guitar. Solid bass. An excellent vocal and cool write.

Good mix. An excellent 'phones listen.

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Guys

A nice dense production excellent bass and guitar, intriguing sound, ethereal and engaging.

A lovely progressive rock feel, and I really liked Robert's vocal in that range.

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Hey Guys ...

What a super song! I agree with Floyds suggestion of San Francisco Folk. Maybe 1966 or '68 era. Everything sounds just right in the mix. It's haunting and ambient - - a great mix of sounds.

Everyone's part is so nicely done. But I give an extra tip of the hat to Robert's vocal - just so perfect for this song. What a treat for the ears!!!

Best to all of you.

Alan


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Fantastic and fantastical! Love the poetry of the lyrics. Music is a mystical wild ride that straps you in tightly and carries you on. Everything about this is fresh and original.

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Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
Great swirling sound. Well performed by all. Poetic lyrics. Vocals hit the mark. I like it. You guys work well together. Nice use of the band too.


Thanks so much for checking out the song. So glad you liked it.

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Love it!

This might be my favorite yet, and I've liked everything you guys have done.

Just a really good mood piece, lots of attentional to detail that makes it an interesting listen.

All three of you sound great!

Excellent job on the mix too, Scott, sounds fabulous through the 'phones, well done.


Thanks so much Dave. I think Robert really nailed this song. So glad you liked it.

Originally Posted By: rayc
Thanks, Scott, for the opportunity to participate once again.
It was a fun song to play on...I hope that came through.


I think song turned out well. You bass playing gave the song allot of depth and with Roberts vocal made it very special.

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Hey team,
A level up! A bit Pink Floydish and mellow Jethro Tullish, but mostly Spirit Level!
Scott, excellent theme and sound! Robert... I think I can understand what a challenge this was to sing it so high, but came out beautiful! A+ lyrics and phrasing. Ray, excellent bass playing and arrangement! But I really think bass should be LOUDER, at least in some places it should come out with force. Liked it! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


Thanks Misha
I think Robert cringed I sent him the song. Ray and I had done quite a bit of the backtrack before he heard. This is totally backwards from his song writing process. But he came through with a very cool lyric and vocal. So glad you liked the song


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A lovely delicate sounding song guys! Love your clean tone Scott! A strat I'm assuming! Roberts vocal is excellent for this type of tune! Ray your contributions here are the glue that holds this track together and take up another level! Great work all around guys! Take care, T




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