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Carry On Without You

A tale of a broken man.

Leon - Vocal & Lyric
I played acoustic and electric guitars.

The Band:
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RealTracks in song: 3164:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Rhythm BluesyPopSteady8thsCleanBrent Ev 100
RealTracks in song: 3544:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm SlowReelPicking Ev16 080
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Carry On Without You

I said I didn’t know what I’d do without you
But I found I could go on
I guess that I was stronger than I thought
Cause I found I could go on

I could get up every morning
Eat my breakfast, iron my shirt
I could smile and say hello everybody
When I arrived at work

I could do a good impression of a man
Keeping it together
A single guy, savouring his freedom
Not almost at the end of his tether

Not a broken, empty shell
Not a tortured soul in Hell
Not a man whose life was robbed of any meaning
When you walked out the door
In pieces, mon amour
Since you walked out the door

I used to think I would be helpless if you left me
But still I carry on
I guess I must’ve had some deep reserves to draw on
Cause still I carry on

I still get up every morning
Stare my reflection in the face
Step by step I tell him, day by day
We can get out of this place

We can keep up this impression
Of a man who’s doing fine
Dreaming dreams and making long term plans
Not lost and lonely, killing time

Not a broken, empty shell
Not a tortured soul in Hell
Not a man whose life was robbed of any meaning
When you walked out the door
In pieces, mon amour
Since you walked out the door

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Hello Peter. This has a real haunting feel.
I really enjoyed the build-up. I enjoyed my listen.
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This is all class...the sparse arrangement of the 1st third was fantastic in building tension.
When the band is in "less" mode there's something in Leon's voice that stands out as in need of taming - it's a freq I can't isolate in the mix but it's strident and a little grating...if you can isolate that and reduce it somewhat the rest of the rich and expressive voice will be even better.
EXCELLENT twin leads...excellent overall.


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Peter & Leon,

Really! like this. A solid write (maybe one of your best). And very "musical" production.

"I could do a good impression of a man" <-- Nice!

"We can keep up this pretense
Of a man who’s doing fine
Dreaming dreams and making long term plans
Not lost and lonely, killing time" ....also nice

The Stairway-like beginning is cool. As is the build as it goes.

The acoustic lead into the twin lead and then the soloing (all beginning at 3:45) is some of Peter's best work. The entire ending is a great, huge sound...Love that.

Much enjoyed.

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hey Peter,
what I like:
- The chord progression
- the way it escalates from a fairly minimal production at the start to a full-blown multi-layered sound fiesta
- the fact that you played some of the tracks yourself
- the twin guitar solos... probably my favorite part of the song, both in terms of content and mood
- the fact that your solo contains a recurring motif...
__which after all these years is still the thing I find missing in so many songs posted to the user showcase.
- lyrics

I never had a woman leave me, but as a widower I identify with the phrase
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I used to think I would be helpless if you left me
But still I carry on
I guess I must’ve had some deep reserves to draw on
Cause still I carry on


Nice work

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Cool tune. It reminds me of some british rock I've heard.

The thing that threw me was the first part has a swing feel to it, then somewhere right before the band kicks in it changed to an even feel. Am I wrong on that or did I simply miss the even tempo start?

Nice playing on the live parts. And yep.... Good vocals too


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Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
hey Peter,
what I like:
- The chord progression
- the way it escalates from a fairly minimal production at the start to a full-blown multi-layered sound fiesta
- the fact that you played some of the tracks yourself
- the twin guitar solos... probably my favorite part of the song, both in terms of content and mood
- the fact that your solo contains a recurring motif...
__which after all these years is still the thing I find missing in so many songs posted to the user showcase.
- lyrics

.............


I couldn't have said it any better. This is a masterpiece. The way it builds reminded my of the band Boston. Great vocal, outstanding lyrics, and as usual fantastic guitar work.


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I agree with the "haunting" assessment.
Good write !

Double guitars ad some real interest.

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+1 to what's already been said!

Pat did all the hard work talking about the song elements, and fj the analysis of the lyrics.


I especially loved the ending! smile


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Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Hello Peter. This has a real haunting feel.
I really enjoyed the build-up. I enjoyed my listen.
Rob4580


Thanks Rob

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This is a great song, sung and produced well. The outro is so strong that I would have introduced it earlier between verses. But still great as is.


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What a cool intro. Very dark chord progression. Super solo Peter very unigue. Loved the flanger effect on the guitar. One of my favs of yours. Well done


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Peter & Leon ...

After Pat and Floyd - an the other folks, too - every single thing I thought of has already been addressed. They said it so much than I would have. But please know - I really like this and think everything about it shines in the best and brightest of lights. Simply put ... excellence at ever mark. Best to both of you ...

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Originally Posted By: rayc
This is all class...the sparse arrangement of the 1st third was fantastic in building tension.
When the band is in "less" mode there's something in Leon's voice that stands out as in need of taming - it's a freq I can't isolate in the mix but it's strident and a little grating...if you can isolate that and reduce it somewhat the rest of the rich and expressive voice will be even better.
EXCELLENT twin leads...excellent overall.


Thanks Ray - I'll play around.

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Hi Peter & Leon,

what can I say that the forum's experts haven't already said.

Okay, da capo: great structure - the song 'grows' with every bar. A perfect arrangement, flawless sound and most of all very well sung and amazing work on the guitar. The repeating riff at the end is gorgeous !

Another great collob, guys, a very good listen on an otherwise dark and snowy sunday morning.

Stay sage,

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Peter & Leon,

Really! like this. A solid write (maybe one of your best). And very "musical" production.

"I could do a good impression of a man" <-- Nice!

"We can keep up this pretense
Of a man who’s doing fine
Dreaming dreams and making long term plans
Not lost and lonely, killing time" ....also nice

The Stairway-like beginning is cool. As is the build as it goes.

The acoustic lead into the twin lead and then the soloing (all beginning at 3:45) is some of Peter's best work. The entire ending is a great, huge sound...Love that.

Thanks floyd we appreciate the support and review.

Peter
Much enjoyed.

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Very cool!! I always liked dark songs!! AND I ALWAYS LOVE to hear Peter play!! Great job guys!! Take care. Greg

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Well written lyrics. Good vocal delivery. Outstanding guitar(s) as usual. The electric guitar especially blows me away. Way to make it wail! That guitar riff to end is out of this world good. Good mix. The band was right on time too. Cool song.


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Yeah! My new favorite from you two I think.

Man, the build at the end with the two guitars ... magnificent!

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Peter and Leon, I really liked the chord progression and the guitar work on this one. Well sung and well written lyrics get the message across. It kept me engaged until the end. Nicely done, Tom

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