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Jona, great job on this song! The chosen instrumentation suits this very well! Excellent job on the vocal also! T
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Very moving song, Jona. Good band, too. If it's easy, please post the lyrics. Thanks for sharing,
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Thanks , i can do that
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Words & music by Jonathan Paaso
(My english is not perfect , sorry bout that..)
When the clouds were
coming in to my lfe
i was feeling confident
But the sky was black
as a moonless night
and i was blind for a
while.
I saw only those black
clouds and Lord, i did'nt see you there
just looking at the coal black sky and i lost my confident
Lord have mercy, mercy for i have sinned against you, have mercy Lord have mercy for i'm broken and i cry.
Jona
Last edited by JONA; 01/08/21 11:37 PM.
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HI Jona. You have a wonderful texture to your voice and a great emotional delivery!! This is really, really sweet!! Take care. Greg
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It all sounds good to me - vocals, instruments and the mix. 
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Everything about this is top shelf. Great instrumentation. Super vocal and lyrics. Great mix also.
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Very pretty song. Outstanding vocals. The band was good too.
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Really pretty song with an excellent vocal. Great work!
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Hi Jona,
Wow!!!! This is incredibly good.
It's so hard to believe that English is not your first language. Every word sits beautifully on the melody.
You've done a brilliant job.
Regards,
Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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Thanks Noel !!
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