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A song about a valley in California.

https://soundcloud.com/90-db/saint-of-san-juaquin


https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/saint-of-san-juaquin


Saint Of San Joaquin

© 2021 Robert Randall Burke


There's a fire in the valley
You can see it through the trees
Burnin' up the memories
Of the life we used to lead.

There's an owl up in a pine tree
Watchin' the smoke swirl
Embers in the wind now
All that's left of our old world.


All the old ones know me
As The Saint Of San Joaquin
If you close your eyes
You'll see me in your dreams.


Many good men have gone under
Many good men have survived
Outlaws never live too long
Once judgment has arrived.


All the old ones know me
As The Saint Of San Joaquin
If you close your eyes
You'll see me in your dreams.


There's a fire in the valley
You can see it through the trees
Burnin' up the memories
Of the life we used to lead.


There's an owl up in a pine tree
Watchin' the smoke swirl
Embers in the wind now
All that's left of our old world.


All the old ones know me
As The Saint Of San Joaquin
If you close your eyes
You'll see me in your dreams.
Close your eyes
You'll see me in your dreams.




Regards,

Bob

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What a great write, and presented with remarkable imagery.

Your vocal and the melody deliver that melancholy lyric right to the listener's heart.

The band is a perfect "nothing left to add nothing left to take away" choice and wrapped in a great mix.

Yeah, we like it ... a lot!

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Pretty good mix and a nice song! Well done!

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+1 on what Janice and Bud said. Lovey vocal and lyric. Very enjoyable listen. Well done..


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Nice vocal - pleasant listen!


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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
What a great write, and presented with remarkable imagery.

Your vocal and the melody deliver that melancholy lyric right to the listener's heart.

The band is a perfect "nothing left to add nothing left to take away" choice and wrapped in a great mix.

Yeah, we like it ... a lot!

J&B





Thanks guys. Appreciate the listen.


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Bob

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Originally Posted By: Will Josef
Pretty good mix and a nice song! Well done!

Will



Will,


Thanks for listening and commenting.

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Bob

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Originally Posted By: Scott C
+1 on what Janice and Bud said. Lovey vocal and lyric. Very enjoyable listen. Well done..



Scott,

Thanks for the listen.

Regards,

Bob

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Originally Posted By: dcuny
Nice vocal - pleasant listen!



David,


Thanks.


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Bob

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This is a great presentation and enjoyable listen from start to finish.

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Outstanding presentation, Bob. Every aspect supports every other. Right from the idea of the song, the lyrics, melody, band selection, production, mix and outstanding vocal delivery --all on the top shelf of creativity.


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Always enjoyable hearing another one from you, Robert....

Nice melody, well sung...

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Bob, this may be your best to date IMHO. Great imagery. Your vocal was excellent and the backing tracks were exactly what was needed for a song like this.

I really enjoyed this one.


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Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
This is a great presentation and enjoyable listen from start to finish.

Charlie



Charlie,

Thanks for the listen and kind comments. Hope all is well with you.


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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Outstanding presentation, Bob. Every aspect supports every other. Right from the idea of the song, the lyrics, melody, band selection, production, mix and outstanding vocal delivery --all on the top shelf of creativity.



Marty,

Thanks for the listen and the kind comments.

Regards,


Bob

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I like this. Country rock that sounds like something that might have come out of the canyon back in the day.

Solid song.
Well done.


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Terrific job - good melody, really good vocal performance and solid , supportive arrangement.
I was left wanting to know the rest of the story tough. Just two short verses an a chorus, all repeated, left a very sketchy narrative.


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Man this is really good Bob! The vocal is outstanding as well as the writing! You've crafted an excellent sounding tune that is easy on the ears and stays with the listener! Thanks, T




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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Always enjoyable hearing another one from you, Robert....

Nice melody, well sung...

fj



Floyd,

Thanks for the listen.

Regards,

Bob

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Bob this is beautiful. Everything about it. Course you know I'm a fan.
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