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#690693 - 12/13/21 11:35 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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That's a a real tear jerker you made, Floyd!
A genuine 'FJ' song: heartbreaking, wonderful lyrics and lovely melody.
All brightly recorded as all of your songs.
I thought: Christmas has started here!
I enjoyed it, but that is nothing special; that is the case with all your songs.

Hans
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#690793 - 12/13/21 05:17 PM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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A slow-dancing classic in the making.

The lyrics, melody, production--This is one of those songs that goes straight to the heart.

Nice work, Floyd.

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#690937 - 12/14/21 06:00 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: Rustyspoon#]
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Originally Posted By: sixchannel
So many'forevers' end up that way. So glad I hit the bullseye when I did.
Sad song with top class lyrics and expertly sung andvproduced as ever.
Bests
Ian


Ian - good to see you drop by. Thanks.


Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
FJ,
Beautiful tune. Lyrics and vocals are fantastic! Your arrangement and mix never disappoint.
Strings work extremely well. The only thing I found a bit of distraction is kick drum. I think I understand what you were aiming for, and it might be very likely have to do with my headphones, but they sound a bit hot to me.
In any case, this is a VERY successful tune. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


Thanks, Misha. THe kick has been "called out" by several people...so I guess it is a bit hot. Part of the experimenting and searching as the sound evolves. I appreciate that you "get the new stuff" and seem to be embracing the journey as well...

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#690949 - 12/14/21 06:48 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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wow love the lyrics excellent production very heart felt well done eric
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#691161 - 12/15/21 06:22 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: mkg50 (Mike G)]
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Originally Posted By: Scott C
What a lovely intro Floyd. Set the song up for a awesome vocal and lyric. Storytelling at its finest. Beautiful song. One of my favs. Well done


Thanks, Scott...


Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
You keep setting the bar high on this forum. Saying " Good job " just doesn't do it proper justice.

It's all good. From the writing, to the choice of tracks, to the singing, to the production.


Appreciate that, Herb...


Originally Posted By: mkg50 (Mike G)
The song, lyrics, performance, backing, production are all great.
Everyone else else beat me to all the superlatives this deserves.
Very tasty indeed,
Cheers,
Mike


Thanks, Mike!!

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#691485 - 12/16/21 08:54 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: tommyad]
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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
"that's a lack of commitment that i regret
a huge chunk of stupid that i won't soon forget"

Well, that nailed the feeling.

"Two verses and chorus and I'm outa here."
Easy to say and hard for many to do. But someone once told me that if you can't say it in two you may have nothing to say. smile

Well you can do that and the resulting lyric never seems too sparse. The story is there.

Your great vocal (that phrasing) and the fine band and mix have amply been praised so we'll add but mega dittos!

Loving your art also.

Outstanding mr jane,

J&B aka usual suspect


Thanks, y'all! And, again...thanks for noting the art work! smile


Originally Posted By: tommyad
Here we go again! Another great write and production. Your vocal also reminds me of Ronnie Dunn. This is a beautiful ballad to add to a long list of fine compositions. Could it possibly be that you’re getting better at this? I thought you passed that can’t get any better than this mark a long time ago. You are definitely a songwriter’s songwriter, Tom


I certainly appreciate that, Tom. Hope we'll se more of you this year!!!

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#691674 - 12/17/21 07:11 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: rsdean]
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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
BEAUTIFUL!!!! POWERFUL!!!! EMOTIONAL!!!! One of your best lyrics ever Floyd, and that's saying a hell of a lot!!! Really love the arrangement, and the way you processed the vocal!!! Chorus totally POPS!!.......GRABS YOU!! Great work my friend!! Take care. Greg


Much appreciated, Greg. Thanks!!!


Originally Posted By: rsdean
Floyd,

Too many great lines in this song to quote.

Production is completely dialed in. You are singing at such a high level - not sure it could get any better.

Sounds like the opening cut on side two of your album...

You are giving us your best!

Bob



Thanks for the great comments, Bob....

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#691927 - 12/18/21 06:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: Ezekiel's Storm]
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Originally Posted By: Birchwood
That's a a real tear jerker you made, Floyd!
A genuine 'FJ' song: heartbreaking, wonderful lyrics and lovely melody.
All brightly recorded as all of your songs.
I thought: Christmas has started here!
I enjoyed it, but that is nothing special; that is the case with all your songs.

Hans



Thanks, Hans...


Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
A slow-dancing classic in the making.

The lyrics, melody, production--This is one of those songs that goes straight to the heart.

Nice work, Floyd.


Appreciate that, Scott....

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#692003 - 12/18/21 10:54 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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Beautiful FJ.

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#692170 - 12/19/21 07:04 AM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: Sundance]
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Originally Posted By: F.M.M.
wow love the lyrics excellent production very heart felt well done eric


Thanks, eric...


Originally Posted By: Sundance
Beautiful FJ.

Josie


Thanks, Josie...

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#692641 - 12/20/21 05:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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Floyd,

I'm extremely late to the party but I'm glad I caught this one! I immediately noticed the lovely cello, it's perfect! The background oohs were very effective! Your voice sounds fresh and has been recorded very nicely! This is another hit worthy song that fits very well with your awesome catalog of work! Thanks, Torrey
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#693266 - 12/22/21 09:35 PM [User Showcase] Re: Couldn't Get It Right [Re: floyd jane]
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floyd,

Nice melancholy song.
Beautiful melody.
Great vocals.
The backing tracks are also very nice.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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