Love the song and the mix. Vocals really sit well in the mix and the balance on the instruments is really nice. I really do not think the vocals are bad at all and fit the song pretty well. If you want to play around with them some for your own enjoyment I might try the following.

> Listen closely to the way you are phrasing the words. A couple of places you abruptly cut off the words when I think soul style might hang on to them just a bit more to make them flow.
> Try copying your vocal to another track, offset it a click or two and add a little delay or reverb to fill the vocal out. Not sure it will make it more like the sound you are seeking but might be worth a try.

These things are just a nit-picking. To be honest this is the type of song I would just put on, sit back and enjoy, and wouldn't be listening as closely as I would for a critique.

Great job! Would be interested to hear your flow in developing the song, what tools you used and how you got to the mix.

Terry


TerryB

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