I enjoyed your song and It stands well as it is. The song is well written and produced As others have noted, lyrically we are taken on a journey from loneliness to hope. To me, the style and message of the song lends itself to a different musical arrangement, building from a simpler, less busy beginning, by maybe utilizing a single instrument and then building the arrangement more complex through each section. This would musically take us on the journey along with the lyrics. This is not criticism of your fine arrangement. I may just hear it through a different ear and hope I'm making sense. It' hard to keep my explanation brief.


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