Hi c_fogle,

Welcome to the forums smile

Also, thank you for have a listen and for taking time to write such detailed comments. I appreciate it. I know that Brenda, my co-writer, will also appreciate your comments.

You raise some good points about the arrangement. I have to confess that I was so busy assembling the song and getting the balances into a workable state that I never really gave the arrangement a great deal of thought. I should have done. You, Floyd, Pat and Achordcaster all seem to agree!!!! When I get a few spare minutes, I'll have a play around with everyone's ideas in mind and see where it takes me.

Once again, "Thank you!"
Noel


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