I'd really like your opinion, Any other helpful input would also be greatly appreciated
Thanks in advance!
I gave a listen knowing I'm late to this party.
To qualify, I did not read every response so if I'm out of line ignore this post.
I perceive this to be more of a bluesy ballad.
Being a long time drummer/songwriter what immediately stuck out to me was the kick/snare rim shots.
I think they are interactively too busy, detract from the vocals and sound a bit too
looped.
Personally, I would just keep those two simpler and on the beat.
I did not scrutinize any other aspect of your tune.
I'm not saying it's bad it's just my quite subjective opinion.
Hope that helps....that's my take on it.
Good luck....carry on.