Nice sound. I liked the changes in instrumentation, and the arrival of the sax was a welcome change from the guitar.

To me, the syncopation of the bass was fighting with the beat.

With the way it tailed of, it sounds like BiaB isn't giving you proper endings.

-- David
-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?