It's a big sound.
The intro threw me because there was an acoustic guitar chord that came early.
The snare sounds like it's in a different room to the rest of the kit. Different reverbs or amounts will do that. The rest of the kit also sounds muted with the kick just a dull thud in the background.
I think you've done a grand job on the music but still need a little tweaking to make it live up to potential.
You'll need to get that 2nd vocal sorted to retain the power of the song & mix though.
Fabulous work inside Protools.


Cheers
rayc
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