Herb,
I enjoyed the story - details held my interest and well its real country, so we know there`s a truth coming in the chorus-you make it a good one!
I guess you could add harmonies but it has a live band sound to it this way.
I agree wth Mario-this is my kind of country.
Robert
Robert, I've always been a fan of the story songs. And I really love the country that used to play in the radio in the 70's and 80's....
Thanks for listening