Hi Robert,
I'm playing 'catch up' in the forum and discovered that I missed this song of yours.
I love what you've created. Your singing is very engaging and the lyrics are packed with imagery. In my mind, your words unfolded like a kaleidoscope of impressionistic pictures.... very cool.
That ukulele was a great opening and the way that you developed the arrangement was a perfect fit.
I found this very entertaining at 5:30 am on Tuesday!
All the best,
Noel