Hi everyone,

Here is my 'contribute' for september. https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130/gonna-be-lonely



This song I made in januari 2018, long before I participated in this forum. I didn't dare to at that time.
I couldn't mix or master, and the song sounded very harsh.
Now I think I have learned more, so dare more.

This song is based on the style Merfolk, the key is C and the tempo is 100.
I added an funky electric guitar and 2690 as an electric sologuitar.
I did the harmony with VoiceLive3 from TC Helicon.

The lyrics are a fantasy. I am exaggerating a bit about relationproblems.
I more liked the melody and the singing.

I hope you like it. Let me know,
Hans

Lyrics:
Gonna be lonely
(c) HwBerkhout, jan. 2018/ 2019

Oh, lonely me

You found out this evening
what happened
between our silky sheets
I had filthy feet

You don't have to ask me
how I know
Your eyes have that piercing, scary light
It better have a lonely night

But it's aching, you never told me
You had secrets of your own, I'd see
Oh, it's gonna be a lonely night
For you and for me

What to do now?
Who's got to go?
Our hands are free
So it ain't me

Before you leave here
I must tell you
Maybe you won't understand
But this was not planned

Oh, it's so cold now
It started raining
The stars don't shine so bright
Ah, it's gonna be a lonely night

I felt sorry, what I have done?
Can we mend what we cannot see?
Ah, it's gonna be a lonely night
For you and me

I admit, about you
I had my doubts too
But don't make that much fuzz
That's really not us

Can't we talk it over
and end like friends?
Maybe there remains one tiny light
Or we gonna have a lonely night

Don't leave tomorrow, stay some more time
Get your love back out of that old tree
Or it's gonna be a lonely night
For you and for me

We have to do some talking
Don't whist anyway
But please let me stay...

Alright, I pack my things
And I go someplace else
I will look for what I won't find
Because you stay on my mind

Oh, let's talk it over
and see what is left
Or did our love really died?
Then there gonna be a lonely night

I leave tomorrow, why should I stay?
We can't go back, and that's so true
Ah, another lonely night
For me and for you
Ah, another lonely night
for me and for you

Last edited by Birchwood; 09/04/19 04:16 AM.
Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130