Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Wpw am I impressed! This is really a good song and the vocal is a delight. Now I would be doing a disservice to you if I told you the vocal is "all the way there, 100 % gig worthy." But it is damn close. Definitely worth continuing to pursue. I enjoyed this and I hope you do more like it. Way to go!


TuneMonger, thanks so much for your kind words AND your honesty.

Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Marty,
I probably have to take showers more often...maybe shave more often too (if it helps of course)

Excellent tune. Maybe it is out of your comfort level, but it is not like you have to sing it every day smile It is done, and you should be proud of it! It came out very cool and hearty. Nice mix! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


Haha. Thanks, Misha. I highly recommend the shower. "It is done..." that's how I felt. Glad you liked it.

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Nicely done - very pleasant backing track - well mixed and composed.

Enjoyed the vocal and song melody.

Peter


Thanks, Peter.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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